a question first - are they leaning on something? or like... getting off from sitting on something? just wanna make sure before I try crits on it

Sitting on C:

okay that's helpful :3

I think, along with the nice redline below, you should probably straighten out the arms more. Her arms are starting to stray towards the right, while her shoulders and chest are turned to the left. Pull both hands over a little to the left, so they look a bit more positioned on the thighs, and it looks more comfortable to lean on.

I think the piece is pretty strong, you got a lot of nice things going for it. Hope this helps!

OK, I hope this helps, at least somewhat. I'm not very good at explaining things, so I thought it would be better to show what I think can be changed.

In my opinion I think the main thing with problem in this piece is gravity. Just try to imagine what something would like like hanging and how gravity would effect that. That's what I do C: Although not everybody thinks like me and that maybe hard for some to imagine that.

As for somethings I changed, most of it is details and aren't very important. I only improvised on things I couldn't quite make out what they were, such as the pendant or whatever that thing is (not sure xD) in the middle of the neck. Also, I realize the buttons going down the front of the shirt that I redlined aren't >totally< correct as far as how the breasts effect how much it... for lack of a better word, "balloons?" out. So try to mess with that a little more from what I've done.

That's just about it xD
I hope I helped C: and I apologize if I sounded or was harsh on any of this, I didn't mean to be that way D:

Other then what I redlined, the rest looks great! Your very good at anatomy C:

Keep up the fantastic work ;D

Sidenote: This is actually my first critique xDD I hope I did this right P:

Thank you for the help!

Np C:

Glad I can help, even if it's not that good xD

alway always draw what the character its standing/sitting/leaning on.

I agree with  misun's redlines ( or orange lines hurrhurr =B ) but when I look at this, a couple things scream out to me, first of all, her lap is sitting almost 3/4 more sideways to the left, but her upper body is resting more then 3/4 pointing to the right. It just looks really odd to me, if she's posed naturally, and sitting comfortably, there wouldn't be a reason to skew her body like that. But people do draw like this, and poses like this aren't bad! Its just for me, as a person looking at the picture, its strange, because trying to sit like that now in my chair is a bit straining, like I'm purposefully posing for a camera (which then, I'd call this a pinup... but I'm biased for pinups <3 ).

Secondly, the pose has now messed up her resting/leaning points, and also her point of vision. If she's turned like that, now her hands have to be moved, she would naturally hold her knees to turn herself like that, especially in that leaning/sitting forward pose.

Third, if she's sitting in this pose, she must be doing it for a reason, if she's not posing for pinup/camera, then whats the point of sitting like that, her vision should be on something in the viewers direction so we get a sense, she has turned to sit like this for us, her body language is saying " I am accepting your presence " but her eyes are pointed elsewhere, so I'm getting a mixed up sense of direction.

LMFAO. I am rambling, what am I even saying. XD I am trying to be honest from an outside viewers POV. Sorry if it totally didn't help at all, but I do agree with Misun's redlines! So follow them. =D Thank you so much for letting us critique your work, hope we helped! =)

Thanks!