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Link to Larger Version: http://pics.livejournal.com/p3nsive/pic/001tg8ap
Species: Dragon-like thing
Type of Media: Digitalart
Type of Response wanted: redlines preferred (I work best visually), constructive criticism accepted
Artist's Comments:
The pose is based on an 80's yoga pose, including the traditional headband, t-shirt, spandex pants, and leg warmers. The arm closest to the view is what is mostly giving me issues, but I appreciate any redlines in general.
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pensive
All comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
pensiveLink to Larger Version: http://pics.livejournal.com/p3nsive/pic/001tg8ap
Species: Dragon-like thing
Type of Media: Digitalart
Type of Response wanted: redlines preferred (I work best visually), constructive criticism accepted
Artist's Comments:
The pose is based on an 80's yoga pose, including the traditional headband, t-shirt, spandex pants, and leg warmers. The arm closest to the view is what is mostly giving me issues, but I appreciate any redlines in general.
Art ©
pensiveAll comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1280 x 1138px
File Size 91.1 kB
I see a few things. The tail for one comes out of the spine usually, so depending on how the character is, it'll either come out just above the butt or lead from the small of the back - yours is a bit too think and unsure of where it's coming from. I also suggest you make a part of it flat to accentuate the fact that he's laying on a flat surface - I'm assuming a yoga mat.
As for the arm, if you look at your own the elbow is always at the waist and the hand is always at mid-thigh - here, your upper arm is far too short and the arm in the back that's holding the legs the elbow needs to go forward more towards the hand just a little.
One last thing is if the tail is one that comes from the small of the back, the kind that's kind of like a continuation of the body (think of Palkia from Pokemon) then the legs wouldn't be able to come flat together as if it was a tail that came from under the butt as a continuation of the spinal cord (like cats, or most canines)
As for the arm, if you look at your own the elbow is always at the waist and the hand is always at mid-thigh - here, your upper arm is far too short and the arm in the back that's holding the legs the elbow needs to go forward more towards the hand just a little.
One last thing is if the tail is one that comes from the small of the back, the kind that's kind of like a continuation of the body (think of Palkia from Pokemon) then the legs wouldn't be able to come flat together as if it was a tail that came from under the butt as a continuation of the spinal cord (like cats, or most canines)
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