Sorry for the re-upload. I neglected to label it correctly the first time.

A -very- rough draft of a story snippet of Khadija, the rhino character in this picture. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/382303/

There are tonal changes I need to smooth out, and I'm still undecided if I should go with the "accented" voice or the straightforward one. This was more an exercise to explore her personality a little than anything else, but as always, I welcome critique, especially since this -is- a first draft.

For the Edge Project of Animals, put together by  farorenightclaw . If you want to know more, look here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/75051/
Or here: http://edge-project.deviantart.com