Hey Krezi, Link is broken. =( It was too long to copy and paste, you have to go back and copy/paste from the source.

Fixed it! Thanks doll, figured that out right after seeing your note xD <3


~HelpToImprove

No prob, babe. =) Got ya back. =D

First off, I like the way you drew the head, they are always such a pain for me, and I also like the curves of the body, it has that 'feminine flow' you could say.

But from what I can see the pose of the head does not match the body, which is what I think is throwing you off with the neck. What might help is looking for some reference photos of women in similar poses and study how the neck would twist and connect to the shoulders. This would also give you an idea of the body posture and position of the legs. I'm still learning to draw myself so this is about all the advice I can offer.

I'm not the best at drawing feet, but I would recommend looking at other artwork for different views of them to get them to look good. Other than that, I'm still learning how to draw full body so I'm not much help.

I think the tail really have some awesome details.

The hands and feet look blank however. No digits or toes, that is the only thing I see that is left to say. Still not bad on the size.

Original artist here, made a new account so I could comment on my gift art! :P

I'm aware the hands and feet are blank, that's intentional =P I haven't gotten around to them yet, I was more focused on the body shape first.

Thanks tho :D

Your welcome. Other then that, it's awesome.

I tried to draw over a redline;
http://i54.tinypic.com/3008cgz.png

I KNOW you said not to mess with her head/muzzle, but i had to mention it here.
It's a little bit distracting, please consider making the top just a tiny bit smaller, maybe even adding a small amount more hair, her skull seems a bit large this way! >-<

To me, her muzzle seems fine, I think her neck looks strange simply because of the bottom of her jaw, simply straightening that jaw line would make the neck just fine, just add a collar bone perhaps?

With her chest, her breasts seemed a little off, they didn't have much weight, lightly drawing a ribcage would help a lot!

Her legs and everything else is fine, maybe her knee should be a little longer? But she's actually well proportioned, her height is believable.

It's actually a really pretty drawing, make changes at your own disclosure! But please don't forget her eyebrows either or something hinting at them, we all have to know how she's REALLY feeling ^^

My rule for these type of things, is to ALWAYS find a similar photo so I can see how the body lays. Especially pinups, they are really important, to get all the limbs and body mass correct. These aren't the same poses, but they are similar, in case you want to change the pose. =)

http://www.rainfall.com/posters/ima.....s/PINUP133.JPG
http://www.artsniagara.com/haskell-...../pinup-600.jpg
http://dl6.glitter-graphics.net/pub.....hhnt3d3c4r.jpg
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_7TqRbeG4z.....nup_girl_5.jpg

There's no nudity. =)

ANYWAY. I love PinUps, and they are my thing, so I just had to do a redline. =)

http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/.....ymousPinup.png Good luck hon! =) I really hope this turns out.

BTW. You may feel comfortable with the head/muzzle, but that angle is unrealistic, especially in a pin up. I really suggest you re-think the pose of the head. =\

might be wrong, but the right foot semms a tiny bit too small compared to the left, not that much tho.