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David van der Horn had a difficult time on the last day of high school, and now it's going to happen again.
I sat on this one for a while for various reasons. I finally decided, fuck it, I'll post it. I'm gonna write a sequel to it so you'll need to read this one to really get the point anyway.
BTW, the title is inspired by the song "Bleed Me Dry" by Redemption.
David van der Horn had a difficult time on the last day of high school, and now it's going to happen again.
I sat on this one for a while for various reasons. I finally decided, fuck it, I'll post it. I'm gonna write a sequel to it so you'll need to read this one to really get the point anyway.
BTW, the title is inspired by the song "Bleed Me Dry" by Redemption.
Category Story / All
Species Cheetah
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 41.9 kB
I am in awe. But it all makes sense. David -does- sound like Tomasz's type. And the part of Tomasz eating behaviour. Holy crap, each one of your tales fascinates me. As its been said, the chars are so real, alive, flawed twisted... out of the norm.
You take aspects of real life and show how erotic things can be peppered in them, how it really is. Impersonal, and yet deeply personal for thew ay in which you let us into the characters' thoughts, both when you narrate in first or third person.
You take aspects of real life and show how erotic things can be peppered in them, how it really is. Impersonal, and yet deeply personal for thew ay in which you let us into the characters' thoughts, both when you narrate in first or third person.
Awesome work. You come at the story, the charas, from an angle thats not common but makes it feel true and real and engrossing enough to make one have to engage the brain.
Im mixed on if I really like Tomasz. I won't say hes a bad guy, but hes one of those that seem edgy enough to make your hackles rise with a bit of fear, but also poised enough to seem safe to be with for the most part. Talk about an ability to mind fuck you into anything - hes got it 8-)
Im mixed on if I really like Tomasz. I won't say hes a bad guy, but hes one of those that seem edgy enough to make your hackles rise with a bit of fear, but also poised enough to seem safe to be with for the most part. Talk about an ability to mind fuck you into anything - hes got it 8-)
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