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What you are missing out - color
This is the color version of:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5478022
I did a lot of experiments on this one and is not precisely a masterpiece. Main reason I consider this one not such a good piece, is because I used it mainly for a color test. It didn't come out bad though. I'm quite happy.
I'm still trying to find the color style that suits me better. While I keep trying to identify my color style, enjoy this piece by me
critics, comments, any ways to make my color style or shape drawing better, let me know :3
Minari, Syvis, Art © me
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5478022
I did a lot of experiments on this one and is not precisely a masterpiece. Main reason I consider this one not such a good piece, is because I used it mainly for a color test. It didn't come out bad though. I'm quite happy.
I'm still trying to find the color style that suits me better. While I keep trying to identify my color style, enjoy this piece by me
critics, comments, any ways to make my color style or shape drawing better, let me know :3
Minari, Syvis, Art © me
Category All / Hyper
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1260 x 840px
File Size 748.5 kB
this is a great coloring of your art, seems like you do well with many different with coloring, one of the artist i watch actually uses markers, which is awesome but you really need a steady hand for it.
oh and the blue kini on Syvis is a great color tone to negate the darker tones of her black stripes. i was expecting a more neutral color on her.
as for Minari, the child like kini brings out the shyness of her character, as well as thouse awesome curves.
kudos
oh and the blue kini on Syvis is a great color tone to negate the darker tones of her black stripes. i was expecting a more neutral color on her.
as for Minari, the child like kini brings out the shyness of her character, as well as thouse awesome curves.
kudos
I can tell she's holding the camera up, and from the title I guessed it was on a phone. Good portrayal.
So... critique. Minari's left leg should narrow more as it approaches the knee. Syvis' left arm looks good - like you'd see from something getting close to the camera. Minari's head doesn't seem quite wide enough.
So... critique. Minari's left leg should narrow more as it approaches the knee. Syvis' left arm looks good - like you'd see from something getting close to the camera. Minari's head doesn't seem quite wide enough.
I tried to make it look like her knee was lower given the position of her hip, it's a hard position so I guess I missed that one :P
as for the head being wide enough. I'm not sure if it's the eye that's making it confusing. I think is that because I was told of a certain mistake with her eye, but in my mind, changing it to a "v" shape, makes it look more realistic...
unless it really means wide XD. Thanks for the feedback :3
as for the head being wide enough. I'm not sure if it's the eye that's making it confusing. I think is that because I was told of a certain mistake with her eye, but in my mind, changing it to a "v" shape, makes it look more realistic...
unless it really means wide XD. Thanks for the feedback :3
I meant it looked like the front and back of her head were too close. I'm not sure exactly what it is - someone with a better grasp of anatomy could tell us. When I first looked at it, I thought the eye might be too big; but maybe it is the shape of her eye rather than the size.
After more looking:
I think it would be worth doing another version with the perspective enhanced. The ocean should curve up. It depends on the center of the picture. Straight lines curve away from the center of a photograph. Mnari might be smaller in the picture. The lines of the building would be curved.
After more looking:
I think it would be worth doing another version with the perspective enhanced. The ocean should curve up. It depends on the center of the picture. Straight lines curve away from the center of a photograph. Mnari might be smaller in the picture. The lines of the building would be curved.
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