
so almost everything is done on this. :3
Just not so fancy-looking yet.
Gonna do a background and fix some text, and finish colouring a couple things. :3
please tell me what you think. :3
Chuu is me, all me and mine, pleeease dun steal
Just not so fancy-looking yet.
Gonna do a background and fix some text, and finish colouring a couple things. :3
please tell me what you think. :3
Chuu is me, all me and mine, pleeease dun steal
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Well, I'm sorry if this may come off as rude but you asked to tell us what we think so... You should tone it down a bit. I know you want to make her all special and everything, but the key to designing a good looking chara is not to overdo it. Also, good minded comment - do make her less generic. I mean she has the personality (likes/dislikes) of about 3o other fursonas I've encountered. Sometimes it's hard to be original but you can take old ideas and make them look different, you know? About the whole pic, yeah well, you should learn how to use text editing so you don't have to write it all down like that. First of all, it's hard to read and it looks too crowded. I don't know wich programs you have but you can easily look up on how to add text on youtube. Also, I'm not the one to gudge on how you make your charas' body look. But a thin girl with 36 C cups won't cut it. Oh and just a bit of an anatomical feature, you should probably make her hips a bit wider if you want that tipicyl hourglass look. But if not there are plenty of bodyshape tutorials on deviantART. I can link them to you if you want.
Well, I probably spent waaay to much time on this comment and probably spelled half of that wrong but I just, kind of, umm. wanted to help, I guess? Well, hope you take my comm into consideration.
Well, I probably spent waaay to much time on this comment and probably spelled half of that wrong but I just, kind of, umm. wanted to help, I guess? Well, hope you take my comm into consideration.
no offense to Phantonlights but, maybe she wants to use the hand written style, 36c is normal for a cup size, there are all different types out there if chuu wants her char to have 36 C's then thats what she will have, if you dont think it will cut it then have your chars have more or less, its chuu's ref she will have it how she wants it.
next time when your commenting if your going to suggest that they do thing differently try adding a few things you like about it too otherwise you come off rude. just a tip.
oh and btw you wanting to link her to tutorials is funny because your "suggesting" that she be more original first then to tell her how her style isnt how it should be.
( chuu if you want to hide this or want me to hide this go ahead or let me know.Hopefully I don't upset you by stepping out of line here)
next time when your commenting if your going to suggest that they do thing differently try adding a few things you like about it too otherwise you come off rude. just a tip.
oh and btw you wanting to link her to tutorials is funny because your "suggesting" that she be more original first then to tell her how her style isnt how it should be.
( chuu if you want to hide this or want me to hide this go ahead or let me know.Hopefully I don't upset you by stepping out of line here)
Well, the writing style was a suggestion. I know that 36 c is a normal cup size but they don't really pop up that often on skinny girls. Just sayin'. And I didn't say that she can't have it her way, there are plenty of horrbile proportions ot there. Hers is just fine and it tends to the "apple" style a.k.a. The shoulders are wider than the hips. Still I was just sayin that if MAYBE she was going for somethinh different she could have achieved it.
And I'm very sorry, I didn't mean to trash it down (its 3 a.m. and I'm tired), but I really do like her eyes, hip and neck scars are pretty sexy from my point of view, also the tounge piercings and hip tatoos. I like her coloring (that yellow pops out) and those tufts of hair on her feet are just adorable.
That tutorial is on anatomy. It's something basic that every artist should learn, you know. I didn't criticize her style. She can have it any goddamn way she likes it. But stylized doesn't mean it shouldn't follow at least some basic rules of anatomy so her charas don't end up with broken looking limbs (if you know what I mean). Knowledge of anatomy and how everything works WILL make you a better artist. Progress is all.
And I'm very sorry, I didn't mean to trash it down (its 3 a.m. and I'm tired), but I really do like her eyes, hip and neck scars are pretty sexy from my point of view, also the tounge piercings and hip tatoos. I like her coloring (that yellow pops out) and those tufts of hair on her feet are just adorable.
That tutorial is on anatomy. It's something basic that every artist should learn, you know. I didn't criticize her style. She can have it any goddamn way she likes it. But stylized doesn't mean it shouldn't follow at least some basic rules of anatomy so her charas don't end up with broken looking limbs (if you know what I mean). Knowledge of anatomy and how everything works WILL make you a better artist. Progress is all.
For one. I based the body off my own actual body. I do have a thin frame with pudge(yes there is pudge on her! Its not super noticeable like it is on me though, need to fix it). My shoulders are a little bit wider than my hips, though i noticed it more after you pointed it out.
Also, im not quite sure if you noticed it said WIP. Which means work in progress. Which means I am STILL working on it!
Im aware of few anatomical problems with this.
As for text. My handwriting is messy. Though nowhere in the description does it say this is finished. I am going to erase handwritte. And put proper text. This was posted mostly for my colours and markings.
My likes and dislikes are similar to others? Too fucking bad. So people have similar interests and whatnot. It is ME EXACTLY. Those are my likes and dislikes for human me. I refuse to change because I like things that others like. Please. Thats dumb. >.>
Also, im not quite sure if you noticed it said WIP. Which means work in progress. Which means I am STILL working on it!
Im aware of few anatomical problems with this.
As for text. My handwriting is messy. Though nowhere in the description does it say this is finished. I am going to erase handwritte. And put proper text. This was posted mostly for my colours and markings.
My likes and dislikes are similar to others? Too fucking bad. So people have similar interests and whatnot. It is ME EXACTLY. Those are my likes and dislikes for human me. I refuse to change because I like things that others like. Please. Thats dumb. >.>
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