
Another Dame Freedom fanfic for TRAIN.
In this story, an insane ex-general gets his paws on some poisonous gas and is threatening to use it on Colmaton if the MAyor doesn't pay the ransom. It's up to Dame Freedom to stop him, but not without some unexpected help. It takes some unorthodox strategy from the Lady Knight to defeat him. Will the city be saved? Read on to find out.
In this story, an insane ex-general gets his paws on some poisonous gas and is threatening to use it on Colmaton if the MAyor doesn't pay the ransom. It's up to Dame Freedom to stop him, but not without some unexpected help. It takes some unorthodox strategy from the Lady Knight to defeat him. Will the city be saved? Read on to find out.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 54.3 kB
I like you to realize.
Drina is one woman who takes a lot of pride in being independent,self sufficient and holding her own against the odds.Drina(If she was human, would be a black woman). She is quite sassy, but level headed, and has good common sense. Professional and serious about her work and occupation.
Thus her reason for at first not being receptive to Gila Monster. She will at times be stubborn. Especially when she feels she's in the right. But she can has in this case prejudged somebody.
After reading this story over again. I liked what you did. Not making it the typical "Knight in shining armor and
saving the hapless/helpless damsel" type of story.
Drina is one woman who takes a lot of pride in being independent,self sufficient and holding her own against the odds.Drina(If she was human, would be a black woman). She is quite sassy, but level headed, and has good common sense. Professional and serious about her work and occupation.
Thus her reason for at first not being receptive to Gila Monster. She will at times be stubborn. Especially when she feels she's in the right. But she can has in this case prejudged somebody.
After reading this story over again. I liked what you did. Not making it the typical "Knight in shining armor and
saving the hapless/helpless damsel" type of story.
General Chaos needs to bone up on his chemistry. Gas masks are not an effective defense against mustard gas; it's a powerful carcinogen that seeps through most common fabrics and causes serious chemical burns on contact with the skin. Even if it doesn't kill the victim outright, it can cause health problems for life. It's nightmarish stuff, and WWI soldiers lived in fear of it and its cousins.
Props to Gila for being able to swallow THAT with no ill effects.
Props to Gila for being able to swallow THAT with no ill effects.
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