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critique appreciated
I still thinking of a name for this comic haha.
so it's in it's formative stages
I want it to be as interesting as possible and with a good amount of humor (though that might not show so far yet), let me know what you guys think! any feedback is appreciated, and I want to know if it piques your interest
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critique appreciated
I still thinking of a name for this comic haha.
so it's in it's formative stages
I want it to be as interesting as possible and with a good amount of humor (though that might not show so far yet), let me know what you guys think! any feedback is appreciated, and I want to know if it piques your interest
Category All / All
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Size 706 x 1000px
File Size 190.7 kB
Looks lovely!
Some font work bubbles critique;
Those word bubbles and font are hard to read, don't flow and look ill planed! Keep in mind how the eye traverses the page, going from speech bubble to speech bubble; you don't want that eye to jerk around, but want it going smoothly across the page.
Cheap trick for that font; make a custom hand written font (not that hard to do (make sure the letters lean the right way and the kerning is ok)), use it to put your words down, and then when you come to clean up each page, roughly trace your font. This'll help you layout your speech bubbles and keep it consistent-looking but also keep it hand written-looking, and unique per speech bubble.
Keep it up =D
Some font work bubbles critique;
Those word bubbles and font are hard to read, don't flow and look ill planed! Keep in mind how the eye traverses the page, going from speech bubble to speech bubble; you don't want that eye to jerk around, but want it going smoothly across the page.
Cheap trick for that font; make a custom hand written font (not that hard to do (make sure the letters lean the right way and the kerning is ok)), use it to put your words down, and then when you come to clean up each page, roughly trace your font. This'll help you layout your speech bubbles and keep it consistent-looking but also keep it hand written-looking, and unique per speech bubble.
Keep it up =D
how about this one? http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/.....testpanel1.jpg i only changed the text for one panel (the evil book one) as an example. Do you think that looks acceptable, atleast in spacing and kerning? the text was "jazztext" but making my own does sound like a really good idea. I dont feel like using a preloaded font since that feels tacky so i'll definitely look into this!
thank you for the advise!
thank you for the advise!
Its better! (I would prefer you make your own one, even if its rough, when you trace over it it'll look ace). You could use it, to put down your word balloons, and when it comes time to do the arts, trace over the font to make it look less typed.
Something to keep in mind with text's that lean to the left (like 'jazztext'); it implys the person speaking is selfish. try to get a font that doesn't lean, or at least lean's to the right (implys selflessness).
Good luck!
Something to keep in mind with text's that lean to the left (like 'jazztext'); it implys the person speaking is selfish. try to get a font that doesn't lean, or at least lean's to the right (implys selflessness).
Good luck!
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