part 2?

Ya.

*but I suck at backgrounds)

BUT NOT @ STORIES.

i meant why is this part 2?

As you know back in the previous picture,
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WhiteSpear and Blackflame met met up on forest valley road. And WhiteSpear begins to talk about girls...

W: "So dude, I met this pony... and I think she's, er, you know... pretty hot."
B: "What?" (Watch out meme) "The infamous WhiteSpear likes a girl? ... wait... she's non murderous right?"
W: *nodnod*
B: *"EVERYBODY WATCH OUT! WE GOT A BADASS OVER HERE!"*
W: "Come on guy, stop it, I think she has the hots for me too."
B: >.>
Part 1
And then this one(mine.)

ok so basically... you want me to draw a comic book.

Not A Comic Book

A Collaborated Comic book.

soooo not a comic book but a comic book... which you help with lol

Exactly.

well then... we need to talk numbers... and how much work we shall be sharing.

What kind of numbers sir?

how many pages, and depending on how fast you want this, how long it will be, and how much work i will be doing... payment may be required since i will have to make this top priorityand as such pause all artworks until it is done, meaning i will lose out on other commissions. i'm not saying you have to pay me like 20 quid or anything but depending on what i mentioned earlier the payment may slowly increase... only slowly though.

Err...

I have no way of paying you, this is more of a "Eh, I'm bored, lemme do a doodle of a page or sumthing" project.

i see i see... hmmm... well just give me all the info you have and tell me everything i mentioned in the previous comment and i shall sort out what i can.

*my brain does this so you'll have to forgive me and such if I overwhelm you but...*

Can we make a comic about... an evil government that must be overthrown by one of their own generals?

(Sort of... battle frenzy "Cause and Æffect" related?)

it's a little cliche... how about a crooked government who must be destroyed by it's own president after realising what evils he had caused, but knowing what he is about the do the rest of the chairmen decide to kick him out, now using what little recources he has left in the government he must bring it down on his own

Hmm...

—oh my derp my brain just combined the ideas...

(But hold up, hear me out for a second.)
Brother and Sister Avidus (dude-"Nel-Zeir") and Viridell (chic—"Nil-Zair"), we're a family of middle class wealth, their lives were under the rule of a nice peaceful society as they lived in the capital, until new rulers came with a great contest, as they slowly infiltrated the old government overthrowing and overwriting anyone who stood in their way, and kindly accepting supporters.
Their contest, to hold a match for the five strongest fighters in the land of the varying Elementals, of Fire, Water, Wind, Darkness, and Alteration, ranging from the far south southwest of Solaraventa, to the rugged terrain in the mountains of Snow Zero City.
As was foretold the brother and sister could hold their own evenly in a fight, somehow having the master skill of Alteration embedded within them.
After many a fight, and minimal possible bloodshed, these five were chosen.
Erratia/Erratic: The Wielder over water. (M/F)
Stratus/Strait: The Waker of wind. (F/M)
Laveria/Levon: The Fire Festered. (F/M)
Virdell/Virdus: The Dark Empiethion. /(Alteration Special) "Nil-Zair" (F/M)
Avidus/Avidelle: The Alterator "Nel-Zeir"/ (Dark Special) (M/F)

And they we're the five who overthrew the current government, Along with Sairiya (A/A) they Obliterated all who got in their path... but taking over was just the beginning, after the old government was ejected and eradicated.

A few years later, when the rule was slowly modifying into a tyrannical dictatorship, The S-BES (Sub-Basic Energy Source) became the main currency as Sairiya Became the leader. Not long after S-BES seemed to be the only thing preventing the capital gaining any Capitol was that there wasn't much change in authority or power. The people had no fear, of the government and the government had very little to instill fear, that is until an old human like Mechina was stumbled found by Avidus, little did he know that this was going to be the rise of the empire altogether.

When he found it, it was unoperational, was very weak and little to no power source, wires were hanging out, and it was a few pieces from being a pile of discombobulated wires and a hunk of scrap metal. But with his influence, ability, and a little elbow grease, he was able to bring it back to life again, and within a month it became a robot, the only living machine, with as much skill as the general himself, which also made a great friend and fighting partner.

When he presented "Retro Mod" to Sairiya, he was quite pleased with what Avidus had done both wth the Mechina and Training it, and was wondering if it were possible to make more.
"Y-Yes sir, it's possible, but I don't have enough funds..."
Sairiya stopped him right there. "I will make sure all is necessary, but come first, we have much to speak about..."

Nearly a year later after Retro Mod's rebirth, the Five, under Sairiya's Command, were sent to several cities to take over and put them under the rule of the current capital aswell.
Snow Zero City was the First Target, and although it might've been better to send Erratia to deal with that threat, sadly, she didn't have much training in the way of ice. So it was better to send the one who adapts quickly, Avidus, Retro Mod, and his Alterbot army...
After a the two day trip to make it to Snow Zero City, it seemed as if all was to be successful and quite peaceful, until they we're confronted with two people standing between them and the Walled entrance to Snow Zero— the person on the right, a female standing with bulky clothes upon her, not looking much older than her 25's with brown hair that glowed within the faint light. The one on the left looked as if it were male, although it was quite hard to tell with all the armor and skintight bearings it wore, not to mention the muscles that were defined as well.
And although this was practically 1vs100, they looked confident enough to defeat them all.

"The last thing that I remember... was nothing..."
~Avidus...

hmm...interesting... it sounds like your describing a FF game though.

FF...

SCREW FF.
THIS IS LIKE MEGAMAN.

or both

But I've never played FF.

I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT FF IS (jk)

This is supposed to be like MEGAMAN ZX ADVENT.

huh it doesn't look anything like it to me...

So you've played it?

Who's "Grey" then?

i played it ages ago when it first came out on ds, i don't remember the characters very well... grey may have been the male protagonist who breaks out of his tube.

theres also the female protagonist... can't remember her name either but i know she starts out on a flying ship and is a bounty hunter.

i'm not good with names but i know what happens in the game... most at least.

Correct!

Yay.