Shape control.

She needs Lantern training..to focus thoughts into doing exactly that. lol.

They are pretty lumpy.

And judging from the sweat that took no small amount of effort to do

Too 'showy' to be combat-applicable? Looks like also she used up a LOT of energy to do that so it may be inefficient as well?

The forms of it all seems very rough, as well. No real definition to her structures.

I don't think fen is going to dock points for it being too "showy". She asked her to show her what she could do and she did. How she chose to show off her power was a matter of taste, and it would be kind of unrelated to critique that when the test was for her abilities.

good for show, but not efficient.
She's all about quantity over quality.

I'd say she needs to work on her attitude, personally. :P

She also needs to make the conjured matter more stable, and exercise greater control over its shape. Maybe having a better personality will help with the humility required to learn all that :p

My best guess is that the forms she's created are somewhat inconsistent; the chair in particular is asymmetrical, but I'm not sure if that's it or not. Either that or it's big, slow and inefficient. Should be interesting to see the analysis on the next page(s).

There's style, but it looks slightly wobbly and bit hard for her to control.

She looks absolutely exhausted by the amount of effort that took.

fine control and stamina

She has limited self-control. She's got good form, but no technique or stamina. Which is a must for that sort of thing.

That last face is hilarious, just screams "dafuq you talkin bout girl?"

Looks like it's fraying at the edges already X3

other than her shapes being all over the place, she looks very winded after that, maybe she doesn't know how to work smaller shapes, guess it means she lacks fine control, could be why she blew up the ceiling.

It doesn't look very sturdy construction.

Can't help but notice she seems to be off the ground.

Soon to be taking a fall ...

My guess is endurance (it clearly looks like it took a lot out of her, and she tried to hide this with her expression as she exerted herself far enough that she HAD to sit down), alongside amount of time (it looks like it clearly took a while to show it off), but I'm going to hedge my bet on the fact she seems almost apprehensive about the ability, and so CHOOSES to take her time with it.

Looks like the effort to maintain the construct is draining her to the point she looks like she just got done running a few lapse. But it also looks a bit rushed and incomplete.

Also the throan says a bit about her, I think. She has a very high opinion of herself and where she sees herself in the world.

Oops, how long will her stuff stand up with the teacher distracting her like that?

Me sees more than one kind of fall in her future ...

Her real mistake is not flashing herself to the audience.

Looks like she's the first black-tail in her family. All her forms are plant-based.

A more practical way to summon her powers and to use it for something with more applications than an armchair in a shadow garden?

There is definite talent here. She has great potential. All that's left to determine is if there is a willingness to learn.

Confidence control

Too flashy, took her too much effort, no focus to make it properly-shaped... Yeah she still needs a ot of training

She's got the power and ability to pull off said big structures, however....

- It has no cohesive shape to it (through the comic, those who've used that power tend to make objects just fine that are shaped and behave as they should). What this gal made is just a rough Eldritch mass of...stuff, with only one relative 'okay' shape of the chair.
- Too much showing off + uses too much energy just for the show.

And there's blow #1 to the ego. There's more to come for sure, but so far it seems she's trying to be quite tactful in deflating the woman's ego, undermining her beliefs in a way without direct confrontation. Opening up to the others to comment so it doesn't seem like she's simply criticizing, but making it clear upfront that, while there are things worth complimenting, there is room for improvement, and therefore she is not a master.

Stamina and control

Some skill yet lacks focus and endurance. Though the fact she did all that and didn't flash Fen or the audience is pretty impressive.

She's drained of strength, lacks focus, and should limit what she puts out which may help with the drain.

Well, she's got some amazing legs and a cute bosom. But her magic really needs more substance and less style!

Hehehe.... Stamina training?

form too rough, although I can see what she's trying to make, it looks too dark and yes scary, in fact, the plants look like dead plants.
also, it looks like can only hold her for a few min before the structural integrity breaks.

Shape control. Effort. Speed. No combat potential.

As my comic book character Sharon would say, "Everything...in a combat situation, she wouldn't have time to prance about like a ballerina to defend herself or to save someone else."

Personally i wouldn't put the dancing as a negative. there's quite a bit of overlap in being able to control your entire body while dancing and the situational awareness it needs, with combat and many styles of hand to hand.

It need's to be for more then show, perhap's she can add a defense and or attack factor.

It can also be more refined, shape's aren't defined/sharp enough.

From the looks of it, her stamina mainly. And we all remember how Fen worked on hirs

definitely need more focus training, imagination fueled but solid work to put in,

<As somewhat of a geomancer myself, one would consider speed be a factor.>
--Queenmother Kor'desse

I can, awareness. She is showing off exactly what she wants but lacks any idea of how she is doing it. If she tried to protect someone with that anything could break though if they assume how its formed.
That, or she is overcrowding the other two despite the two giving her room.

Not bad. Control could be finer, and it definitely took a lot out of her. however, can she do anything useful for defense, offense or utility?

Her attitude for starters. And she's throwing particles all over the place so cohesion may be an issue

Not gonna lie, getting some Plants Vs Zombies vibes for some reason from those plantlike shapes.
Definitely some Poison Ivy vibes also.

She bore too much presentation over foundation

It looks flashy; but way too fragile

I'm half expecting Fen to make a clone of herself or a few and be like "It's cool that you can do that, but wouldn't you like to be able to do this?"

she likely needs to work on not wasting so much. looks like there's a lot of leakage, and the attitude of "I'm so good i don't need this 'training', but I humor those who requested it by appearing." doesn't help when you need to be open to learning in order to actually understand what someone teaches. watch Fen drop the "I know you think you can do anything, but you are still limited. Don't let the power go to your head." speech while the classmates bring the ego balloon down.

she needs to work on the cohesion of her magic and being able to keep it in one shape, as it's trying to disolve around her.

I’m more concerned about the blue added to it.

That's just a visual effect to help make it more easily distinguishable.

Ah that is what i first thought

From what I can tell; inefficiency. Given how much she's sweating, it's taking a lot of energy to do stuff like this. She either needs to make smaller things, or learn how to better control her energy output

Hmmm, she produces quite the amount, but at the end...only the chair seemed to be the goal.
What about the rest of it? Forest-like place shaping or is she simply overproductive?

We'll see.

I love all these constructive criticisms but something tell me it going to fall on deaf ears. just a hunch. but seeing the amount of haladen used, she does have a large pool of essence to draw from, which is pretty good

she is sweating, cant hold it for long i guess

FRom :) to :( in 2 seconds XD

I think probably the bit that offends her the most is that Fen is asking the other two -- people I'm guessing she thinks she's better than sight unseen -- what she needs to work on

She's got PRESENTATION! Megamind approves.

well time to guess I guess.

used way too much time to archive very little, the "mound" is clearly very rough in form, my guess is she hasn't figured out how to shape properly and she just dressed up the excess to look a bit like a glade hill to hide the fact she can't make the chair without producing way more then she needs. because her shape control is so bad, her attempt at dressing the excess up as a glade just forces her to waste even more energy and my guess is she's gonna run out of steam in less then a minute. ?