Glad to see a return to this little series.

Yeah, after getting a house I had to watch my budget until I could stabilize. Thankfully I should be able to get one page out a month until it's finished ^^

Hot piss, congratulations on getting a house!

Congrats on getting a house.

Either miss will call it or that bunny is gonna be more than ko'd.

"I'm sorry. Your life expectancy & warranty has been voided since you have fought THE CHOSEN ON - TM.
Also, you're about to be voided into the subatomic particles of the fucking ground. Good luck"

Good to see more of this; and yeah, someone's about to have to give in - before they're knocked clear out of the park!

That top survived a lot. But it didn't survive getting one's ass kicked. Interesting that one can mimic the use of Hadalen energy using this tattooed seal, though.

I suppose it's fun to see the arrogant brought low, but I do wonder -- if she doesn't accidentally kill Alyza (unlikely but that would be a curveball) what Fen is gonna do with her prize

I'm assuming Mis will step in and block the final hit or something like that.

Crotch shot!

Making your enemy angry can work when their anger makes them sloppy. When it makes them make mistakes. It can allow you to lure them into traps they might otherwise notice, allowing you to us intelligence to take advantage.

However, when the enemy fights without holding back, the question is always “can you survive long enough to take advantage of the situation?”
Sometimes, being mad just means they fight harder AND smarter.

Sometimes, there is focus to be found in fury, where instead of going all the way to a simple, one track mind way of thinking (which is where you become predictable and easily outmaneuvered), the mind instead sharpens to focus on a singular objective, blocking out all external distractions. It's like getting active thought and instinct to work in tandem rather than one generally overriding the other.

Fen's rage mode at least has some control now instead of an explosion of black energy

Bun was good, but Fen is a beast! She shouldn't have unleashed her!

fen really living that " i didnt hear a bell" life

"You pushed the Goku button. You shouldn't'a did that."

Damn, you beat me to it :D.

dang fights are fun

I so fucking love the way you illustrate the magical forces. Its just the perfect right way to my liking and how I would imagine those kind of forces would look like :D :D can't get enough of it

If you want to motivate someone to fight...MAYBE don't threaten their way of living quite so utterly. That tends to end with someone getting hurt.

Syphon vs Downpour reservoirs of power.
Love to see the diference.
I am more biased to Syphon, usually makes combat more interesting. But, it's easy to bet on the Downpour side.

You know, I kind of like the aesthetic of the eyes trailing light has the body moves. Gives the pages an extra feel of momentum as it progresses from page to page.

Also looks like that bunny is about to get thumped.

Mis might want to step in with a blocking hand before that final berserk punch hits home.

Call that the holy hand grenade haymaker, because if it lands there will be no more bunny!

That rabbit is crazy if she thinks she can beat Fen.

Hell yeah girl! Deck her pissy ass!!

You know, I wanna see her get Rocked Hard one last time. :3

Great commentary.

Oh my, this one took a while! Gladly a lot less than Prequel =^.^=

Fen is this universe's version of The Hulk. "You don't want to make her angry. You wouldn't like Fen she's angry." And like the Hulk, it seems the more damage Fen takes, the stronger and faster she gets.

It's back! Would love this to be a regular side series, but I know it's a commission. Still, it feels worthy of being it's own side series.
Thank you, dragonofinsight, for your commission of this series. It's been amazing and it's always great to see more pages!

Thank you! Getting a jouse put more rapid comms on hold, bit I do look forward to finishing this one! ^^

O.o!
Dark Fen

Feet—don’t fail me now

Yeah... making your opponent furious to make them reckless and tire them out doesn't quite work out if they never run out of steam and shrug off every hit they take :P

the mistake she made with those 'rocks' as obstacles was not completely caging Fen in. Instead of capturing her, they just gave her something to push off of, like a runner's starting blocks

Those hands are rated E for everyone

This is the worst "next page missing" i had for a looong time, congratulations!

Welp! She's screwed! '^^

*goku: let me guess freeza, you rushed back here the moment you achieved this form.

Donkey punch!

Gonna need a Senzu for that one.

You do fight scenes so well.

Well, we can say for certain that being a jerk doesn't pay off, regardless of reason

Do you mind if I ask where you get your references, if you have any, for combat scenes. They look really good.

Forgot to answer this, the TLDR is that I've watched a lot of action movies and I have Pinterest and google if I need specifics. It's mostly 30 years of mental libraries though. Learning general rules of making dynamic poses is also important, understanding perspective and foreshortening does a lot of the work.

The last pannel remind me the scene with Saitama and Genos training when Saitama get serious and doing the punch with the "Death" incoming 😅

Is this going to have any continuation? Why bother starting it?

See the part where it says "Commission"? That implies that I started it because someone paid me to start it. It'll continue when they're ready to pay for more.

Next part ? oh i see why its stoped...