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Looking for feedback on the new Sweet Venom
3 years ago
Story information: https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10826933/
Universal information: https://www.heavy-weapons.com/
Universal information: https://www.heavy-weapons.com/
Hey everyone, hope you're all doing well! I was hoping to get some feedback on my latest chapters of Sweet Venom, arc two has changed a LOT since the original, which only barely had a arc two and was all over the place. People seem to be enjoying it but i've had very little on arc two so far, or on arc one really. It'll be wrapping up soon and then i'll be focusing on other projects for a while, but if you did have any thoughts, pop em over! I'd muchly appreciate it.
I like the pace better in this one. It is still your style but something makes it even more nice to read. If I had time to get invested in the whole story, I'm sure it would be tastier. But I lack time to pinpoint exactly the nature/reason of the change.
I guess I'm just glad that we can get an alternative version of your story. As always, really remind me of my own line of work when it comes to writing.
When I get a bit more time on my hands, I'll just sit and read it all over from start to finish. And then I can hit you up via DM if you still need feedback, or hit me up if you feel like it. Will always get me motivated when it becomes interactive.
Take care !