Porn Dialogue Continued
3 years ago
General
Just gonna share this blurb I saw floating around here:
"How's that? You like having a scaly cock reaming your ass, don't you bitch?" A well-built yellow reptilian hissed into the rabbit thief's ear, his studded penis sliding hard and fast inside of her as he squeezed her breasts painfully. "I'll pump enough cum in your ass to fill a bathtub, you worthless cunt."
"Kuoooh...! I'm coming again!" A dark-tinted snake groaned as he climaxed once more into the rabbit's pussy, his seed overflowing out of her as he continued to thrust like a mindless drone. "Her pussy is too damn good, I can't get enough of it!"
"Of course you can't get enough, rabbit bitches have 1st-rate holes." Laughed the yellow thug. "Her ass is fuckin' great. I'll try to leave it intact when I'm done, so you can give it a go. Heh heh..."
"Here, a big load for ya!" A green-scaled snake grunted as he ejaculated a thick volume of semen down the rabbit girl's throat. The seed that she failed to swallow spurted out with a gurgling sound, drenching her breasts in the sticky fluid. The thug shook his head in mock disapproval, forcing her to deepthroat him once more as he resumed thrusting.
"Didn't I tell ya to drink it all ya worthless bunny bitch?" he taunted her while spitting on her face, rubbing the vile saliva into her fur with his free hand. "It's your meal after all. You're gonna spend the rest of your life here as our meat toilet, with a steady diet of nothin' but cock and spunk! Hahaha!"
It's incredible. Like...it commits every single infraction. It left nothing to chance.*
They don't even have names.
*Actually all but 1; The word slut never appears here. Instead, they just used 'bitch' 3 times in like 2 paragraphs.
"How's that? You like having a scaly cock reaming your ass, don't you bitch?" A well-built yellow reptilian hissed into the rabbit thief's ear, his studded penis sliding hard and fast inside of her as he squeezed her breasts painfully. "I'll pump enough cum in your ass to fill a bathtub, you worthless cunt."
"Kuoooh...! I'm coming again!" A dark-tinted snake groaned as he climaxed once more into the rabbit's pussy, his seed overflowing out of her as he continued to thrust like a mindless drone. "Her pussy is too damn good, I can't get enough of it!"
"Of course you can't get enough, rabbit bitches have 1st-rate holes." Laughed the yellow thug. "Her ass is fuckin' great. I'll try to leave it intact when I'm done, so you can give it a go. Heh heh..."
"Here, a big load for ya!" A green-scaled snake grunted as he ejaculated a thick volume of semen down the rabbit girl's throat. The seed that she failed to swallow spurted out with a gurgling sound, drenching her breasts in the sticky fluid. The thug shook his head in mock disapproval, forcing her to deepthroat him once more as he resumed thrusting.
"Didn't I tell ya to drink it all ya worthless bunny bitch?" he taunted her while spitting on her face, rubbing the vile saliva into her fur with his free hand. "It's your meal after all. You're gonna spend the rest of your life here as our meat toilet, with a steady diet of nothin' but cock and spunk! Hahaha!"
It's incredible. Like...it commits every single infraction. It left nothing to chance.*
They don't even have names.
*Actually all but 1; The word slut never appears here. Instead, they just used 'bitch' 3 times in like 2 paragraphs.
FA+

It's a tool that tries to do something for the reader. It's mostly just... dumping everything into a pot and making stew. Specific key words and phrases are needed for the particular niche, as are visual cues. But they don't mix well. You'd need a separate voiceover guy doing all the talking for everyone to make it work.
I get it, but I don't like that I get it, and just wave it off anyhow. In isolation it's just crafted words, fine enough for something cheap and easy. It just doesn't mesh with trying to make it fit into a coherent story. I saw someone written as making quips and anal play jokes multiple times while also having someone lick a toilet. I'm betting the butt-lover audience was suitably box-checked but it was ham-fisted as hell.