I feel like you got much better at shading, yet the arms and hands still feel a bit off, especially when it comes to positioning and proportions.

About the ideas, maybe you should draw more body types (Jock, Athletic, Skinny, etc) Because, while I like the daddy bellies, I also think it would be good to try different kinds of body types.

About kinks/fetishes/topics in general, uuuuuuuh have you considered trying to make a small comic? Or a series of pictures following a plot? Just throwing ideas

Thank you for the feedback! I haven't had anybody with an artist's eye look critique any of my stuff for basically ever.

I have a few OCs that are supposed to have different body types just have to actually draw them once in a while.

Also been meaning to put together some small comics. I have a few that I've sketched out but just haven't touched them since sketching, but I'm inspired to finish them. I've been wanting to tell a longer story, but I actually have to be able to finish my short stories first lol. Part of that hesitation has been doubts on whether or not I'm drawing "correctly".

But this is really good feedback since I now have an idea of where to focus my practice time and where to put some more thought into my non-practice.