Ok so turns out the latest comm had an issue. When I thought I uploaded the whole thing it wasn't displaying all the story. So it's been broken into 2 posts. The two posts are here in order;
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54103257/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54105856/

Now you can enjoy the full story. I didn't know FA had a display limit. Good to know for the future