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Announcing: Update to 'The Lecture'
2 years ago
General
The collaborative chapter written by myself and 
avianbritish, the last entry in the Sentinels series up to the end of 2022, has been updated. avianbritish wanted to do a rewrite, as he did not like how the original one flowed and, looking back on it I think he was right in that it came across kind of rushed. So, we made a new version of it; it opens up largely the same way but around the time where Brent and Avory meet in person the story has been altered.
Hope you like the rewrite!
avianbritish, the last entry in the Sentinels series up to the end of 2022, has been updated. avianbritish wanted to do a rewrite, as he did not like how the original one flowed and, looking back on it I think he was right in that it came across kind of rushed. So, we made a new version of it; it opens up largely the same way but around the time where Brent and Avory meet in person the story has been altered.Hope you like the rewrite!
Updated version found here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/51076071/
