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Current WIP Outline - plan
a year ago
Going to start posting the outlines when I'm working on a "side" WIP (not for the main-overarching-plot WIP) as a journal, in case anyone is curious.
This one is shortly after the events of the current planned "main" WIP, and is partially written already, but I adjusted the outline a bit today.
Was going to try to fill it out a bit more, but got sidetracked playing with cloth physics in blender instead.
Atremath, alone in desert landscape
-Emphasis on alone - general feel should include that he still thinks he deserves to be punished
--Note: desert landscape is manipulated by him, but subconscious block prevents. this would be his 'Domain'
-Sweeps tracks behind self with tufted tail, alluding to later events
-Set up description of summoning, establish that it's possible to resist (though gets forced in the end)
Summoned, first time
-Set up second locale - back room, small library setup.
--Cheap shelving, lots of notes/texts, enough space for summoning circle
-Establish that summon was done by someone inexperienced
--Signs of rough corrections to circle
--deformities - lines aren't straight, runes maybe misaligned, but not enough to prevent cast
-Establish fear of Atremath in young wolf character (the "summoner")
-Bring in "abuser"
--covered, not a lot of features to make out
--young wolf more afraid of him than atremath
---moves to keep atremath between the two
--drunk
-Atremath makes connection
--own tail wipes across circle when he starts reacting, scattering sand
---sand scattering sends Atremath back
-also establish fire-breathing somewhere in here?
Atremath, alone again
-breaks down afterwards
-shock>denial>anger>bargaining <- summon sensation happens during anger or bargaining?
-blacks out for an implied time skip?
-summon sensation again
Summoned, second time
-young wolf runs to atremath for comfort this time
-atremath notices scarring/etc
-triggers subconscious form change thing
-pick up wolf pup, place on shoulders/back/etc for safety
-burn summoning circle into floor, works to stabilize
-feral form comes out, scents around, takes off, implied hunting the probable "abuser" from before
This one is shortly after the events of the current planned "main" WIP, and is partially written already, but I adjusted the outline a bit today.
Was going to try to fill it out a bit more, but got sidetracked playing with cloth physics in blender instead.
Atremath, alone in desert landscape
-Emphasis on alone - general feel should include that he still thinks he deserves to be punished
--Note: desert landscape is manipulated by him, but subconscious block prevents. this would be his 'Domain'
-Sweeps tracks behind self with tufted tail, alluding to later events
-Set up description of summoning, establish that it's possible to resist (though gets forced in the end)
Summoned, first time
-Set up second locale - back room, small library setup.
--Cheap shelving, lots of notes/texts, enough space for summoning circle
-Establish that summon was done by someone inexperienced
--Signs of rough corrections to circle
--deformities - lines aren't straight, runes maybe misaligned, but not enough to prevent cast
-Establish fear of Atremath in young wolf character (the "summoner")
-Bring in "abuser"
--covered, not a lot of features to make out
--young wolf more afraid of him than atremath
---moves to keep atremath between the two
--drunk
-Atremath makes connection
--own tail wipes across circle when he starts reacting, scattering sand
---sand scattering sends Atremath back
-also establish fire-breathing somewhere in here?
Atremath, alone again
-breaks down afterwards
-shock>denial>anger>bargaining <- summon sensation happens during anger or bargaining?
-blacks out for an implied time skip?
-summon sensation again
Summoned, second time
-young wolf runs to atremath for comfort this time
-atremath notices scarring/etc
-triggers subconscious form change thing
-pick up wolf pup, place on shoulders/back/etc for safety
-burn summoning circle into floor, works to stabilize
-feral form comes out, scents around, takes off, implied hunting the probable "abuser" from before
