It's a good comic so far.

Which style is easier to read?

The typed out version in the commentary box was really tedious and a bit confusing, though it did help with reading some of the harder to read stuff. It'd probably be better to use a typeface if you're going to do script, or use a thinner brush so it comes out more clearly.

i want to use the script type font, have you seen it?

There are plenty versions out there!

This site has tons of free fonts to download. Take a look: http://www.dafont.com/

I like reading translations - sometimes I learn new ways of expressing myself in English. However, "Encamped" is a very unusual word in this context, if not outright non-sensical. Maybe "enamored" or "enticed" is more apt?

Other than that, I love the dialogue!

En Camped, to set up camp and be prepared for what have you.

e- To pitch a tent
e- To be "Tented"

Ah, I see. He has not "pitched a tent." It makes sense now that you've explained it, but I don't think the metaphor will work for a general English audience. It's not part of the lingo.

Highbrow was part of the transcription request.

Haha! Well done then. "Highbrow" with a dash of "obscure." ;)

this one not so much so I hope, Enjoy.

Maybe because it's not my native language, but it still looks a bit rude to me even if it's a quite abstract metaphor. In my stories, Miellaby is supposed to be always simpleton and shy for all things related to sex. So I can't imagine him to say such a thing.

Ahh, but we figured out why it got miss translated (Transliterated), darn those small hard shelled chocolate candies....

However, in true british humor ways, encamped also means, in the same field, engaged with, of the same thought.

I can redeux it again:)

Go to http://blambot.com/
That's where I get my comic fonts.

wasn't looking for a comic font but I'll keep that in mind.

I quite enjoyed the translation. :)