Bizarre West part 2 soon !
a year ago
The rest of part 1 is being written, it will be bigger and fuller, explaining my place as Fedo' in this world and describing the latter in contrast to the first which was just a simple "in scene" text.
Here is a small preview, uncorrected and without layout, If ever I am open to feedback ^w^ :
The Devil has been contained all this time in the Bayou, a place where no one dares to live anymore and which is so mystified that from the outside it all seems like crazy legends.
It is in the dry plains, wedged between the arid canyons that run along the Rio Grande and the depths of this marsh that our favorite scum prowls;
Sometimes mercenaries for theft, sometimes caravan guards, Outlaws to supplement the pay, living day to day stuck in a small camp on the banks of the wide rivers, far from all its Voodoo nonsense, the future of this country risks quickly convince her of the veracity of the macabre gossip.
Here is a small preview, uncorrected and without layout, If ever I am open to feedback ^w^ :
The Devil has been contained all this time in the Bayou, a place where no one dares to live anymore and which is so mystified that from the outside it all seems like crazy legends.
It is in the dry plains, wedged between the arid canyons that run along the Rio Grande and the depths of this marsh that our favorite scum prowls;
Sometimes mercenaries for theft, sometimes caravan guards, Outlaws to supplement the pay, living day to day stuck in a small camp on the banks of the wide rivers, far from all its Voodoo nonsense, the future of this country risks quickly convince her of the veracity of the macabre gossip.