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Natural Order Story Update (11/6)
10 months ago
Well, the more I write the more I realize it's not really your typical fan-service type of story. I never was very descriptive about the diaper change, wetting or messing scenes. I mostly diapers as a means to an end and a somewhat satirical fashio. Still, I hope it moves the story along good. Yet, I do hope you read it anyway, but I think it's pretty cute. 😍
PROGRESS: 60% COMPLETE
46,000+ words
Chapter 11
Loo-Loo has an emotional encounter when she funds herself deep in the woods at a human village.
Chapter 12
A story of a proud human warrior and how she went from mighty hunter to ward at the H.E.R. to human pet of a wealthy heiress.
Chapter 13
Loo-Loo struggles to adapt to life in the human village, but a talk with a new acquaintance makes her realize she may have found a new roll in the tribe.
Chapter 14
The terrible two are back again, this time having their own adventures in the human daycare with two different groups.
Chapter 15
Loo-Loo and her new friend take a test to become bug hunters, but things don't go exactly as planned.
QUESTION
If someone had psychic powers it's usually portrayed as having a nosebleed or popping a vessel. In my story it involves basically losing your bladder and bowel control because it's like when your brain goes nuclear you body loses control of certain functions as it cools down. I think it makes sense, but what does anyone else think so?
NATURAL ORDER (folder link)
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery...../Natural-Order
PROGRESS: 60% COMPLETE
46,000+ words
Chapter 11
Loo-Loo has an emotional encounter when she funds herself deep in the woods at a human village.
Chapter 12
A story of a proud human warrior and how she went from mighty hunter to ward at the H.E.R. to human pet of a wealthy heiress.
Chapter 13
Loo-Loo struggles to adapt to life in the human village, but a talk with a new acquaintance makes her realize she may have found a new roll in the tribe.
Chapter 14
The terrible two are back again, this time having their own adventures in the human daycare with two different groups.
Chapter 15
Loo-Loo and her new friend take a test to become bug hunters, but things don't go exactly as planned.
QUESTION
If someone had psychic powers it's usually portrayed as having a nosebleed or popping a vessel. In my story it involves basically losing your bladder and bowel control because it's like when your brain goes nuclear you body loses control of certain functions as it cools down. I think it makes sense, but what does anyone else think so?
NATURAL ORDER (folder link)
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery...../Natural-Order
