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Natural Order Story Update (12/2)
9 months ago
Well certain stories are coming around and others are coming full circle, just 5 more chapters and an epilouge. Hopefully, we'll see oucharacters have grown or grown down depending on which one gets more interesting.
PROGRESS: 80% COMPLETE
63,000+ words
Chapter 16
The story of a wild human lives of the generosity if beast. One unfortune encounter lands her in care of the H.E.R. and unlikely bond with her rescuer and caretaker.
Chapter 17
Loo-Loo and her friend help with a very special assignment. During which a chance encounter leads to an amazing discovery, but at a cost.
Chapter 18
The pampered pet tries to assert her grown up nature. Then gets a visit from her favorite human sitter. Will her attempts at maturity be successful or end in disaster?
Chapter 19
Loo-Loo recovers from a coma, to fund the tribe is moving. There reason is a relentless beast-woman who will not searching. Who could it be?
Chapter 20
The proud human warrior goes into a deep depression that only a crazy solution from her owner might resolve the problem.
QUESTION
If there's no fan service ever couple of pages does that make the story less compelling? I know everyone loves it when something crazy happens every page or every other page or but I never got to much that pacing, to me it's about the slow and steady than the instant payoff.
NATURAL ORDER (folder link)
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery...../Natural-Order
PROGRESS: 80% COMPLETE
63,000+ words
Chapter 16
The story of a wild human lives of the generosity if beast. One unfortune encounter lands her in care of the H.E.R. and unlikely bond with her rescuer and caretaker.
Chapter 17
Loo-Loo and her friend help with a very special assignment. During which a chance encounter leads to an amazing discovery, but at a cost.
Chapter 18
The pampered pet tries to assert her grown up nature. Then gets a visit from her favorite human sitter. Will her attempts at maturity be successful or end in disaster?
Chapter 19
Loo-Loo recovers from a coma, to fund the tribe is moving. There reason is a relentless beast-woman who will not searching. Who could it be?
Chapter 20
The proud human warrior goes into a deep depression that only a crazy solution from her owner might resolve the problem.
QUESTION
If there's no fan service ever couple of pages does that make the story less compelling? I know everyone loves it when something crazy happens every page or every other page or but I never got to much that pacing, to me it's about the slow and steady than the instant payoff.
NATURAL ORDER (folder link)
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery...../Natural-Order
