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Week22:Unbirth&Rebirth Story Shoutouts:Unbirth Week 4
10 months ago
Hey, its unbirth week again, I know last week we had some unbirth stories, but I figured I would shoutout all of Embryass's rebirth stories in one week. Anyway as per usual three stories will be posted below with commentary.
Our first story is An Inquisitive Unbirth by MotherMorag
https://aryion.com/g4/view/858940
Spoilers Below: Ok this one takes place in the Xenoblade Chronicles 2 Universe which is something I am complete unfamiliar with, but I think the author does a pretty good just with having the reader feel like they don't need to know the entire lore of the series to get what is happening by focusing on factions that are usually in medieval fantasy settings. In this case it's an over zealous inquisition and a royal family. As far as the vore goes this author did two things really dam well. One is having the pred not only unbirth the main protagonist but also have them soft vore other victims and have the protagonist feel their screams and struggles from within the womb. This rarely used situation always turns me on. It's like staring out a window, looking at a terrible thunder storm or blizzard while you enjoy the warm and comfort of your home, knowing your so close to death and danger while being so well protected and warm. The second thing they did was come up with a unique motive for an evil pred. With most evil preds it's hard to come up with a good motive for them to rebirth a victim other than, hey I enjoy owning you, but that motive always comes off as slightly unbelievable as this great evil pred has to put in alot of work and love for this character to become their heir. Kind of reminds me of this quote from the Simpsons.
Bart: Hey, mister, would you like a puppy?
Snake: No, but I'll take one! (reveals a gun inside his vest)
Bart: Okay.
Snake: I'm going to cherish and care for this dog, and there's nothing you can do to stop me! Hahahaha! (kisses the puppy)
Anyway, what I am saying is that the motive MotherMorag came up with is that the pred wants to trick a prince into having a shotgun wedding with them. You see they previously had sex but his seed didn't take so she tricks him into thinking it did take by unbirthing the protag. They then marry and have sex again, this time with the protag in her womb and by doing this the protag absorbs the prince's seed/dna making what was once a lie into the truth. Man that idea is so good/original.
Thank you MotherMorag for the original well told story.
Our next two stories are ones I can't find the original post for and like others that I can't find the post for I will just post the entirety of both stories below. Honestly the main problem I have is DeviantArt, their search system just sucks. For example, I was originally looking for the DeviantArt Version of An Inquisitive Unbirth so I typed the name on the search bar perfectly and it gave me 9,000 results with the story I was looking for not being at the top of the results. In fact, I never found it despite knowing it was on the site, thankfully I remembered that there was an Eka's Portal version of the story.
Story# 2
Thank you for visiting Hyrule, come again." Replied a guard.
"I'm sure I'll come back." Replied Michaela, taking her red potion. She soon left to head out to meet the Yeti's at Snowpoint, they were going to have soup tonight.
"Ok," Michaela looked around, shivering. "I think I'm lost."
She started looking around, only seeing a few brown spots, mountains, and the lake where she came from. She started walking towards the mountains. She didn't want to be late.
AWWWOOOOO!
Michaela stopped and turned around. A white Wolfos was circling around her from a distance, glaring at her.
Michaela pulled out her shovel, her only hard weapon on her.
The Wolfos stopped circling and went into a pounce position. Michaela held out her shovel, trying to threaten it.
It didn't work. The Wolfos jumped over her, but took the shovel with it. It threw the shovel away from reaching distance.
The Wolfos started stalking towards her. Michaela started walking backwards.
Michaela gasped as the fell to the ground, the snow running down her neck. She tried to get up but was pushed down with the Wolfos pinning her down.
The Wolfos licked her face, savoring the flavor.
It then started shredding off her coat and shirt, her bra and underwear were the only things left on her. Now she was freezing.
She closed her eyes, hoping that this was just a dream or something and that when she opened them again, the Wolfos would be gone.
She opened her eyes to see the Wolfos turned around, it's butt right in her face. She gave a disgusted face.
Michaela looked at the back end again to see it was a girl, her vagina was near her face.
She was about to say something, but the Wolfos got off her and walked towards her feet.
She sighed and turned over on her belly, shivering again as her belly was covered in snow.
When she tried to get up, she felt that her feet were wet and yet warm, and she she couldn't move them.
She looked over and gasped. The Wolfos was eating her with her Vagina!
The Wolfos panted with joy, using all her energy to suck her in.
Michaela tried using her arms to pull her out, but she was too cold to do much but move some of the snow. She felt her waist starting to enter the vagina.
"Stop it!" Michaela screamed at her. "Why are you doing this?!"
The Wolfos' reply was more pants and sucking her in faster. She patted her expanding womb, feeling the tiny kicks from the feet.
Michaela groaned and tried scraping at the ground again. She soon saw nothing but black and red, her hands still outside the hole.
The Wolfos gave one last pant and sucked in the hands. She gave a little successful howl and rolled onto her back, looking at her swollen belly and feeling the slow squirms.
Michaela felt tired and the womb felt warm and comfortable, so she fell asleep.
The Wolfos came out of her cave, it was winter again from when she met the human.
She was going to try that again, but showing it to her pup. She barked once and the pup came out, it's white and auburn splotched fur puffed out.
The pup gave a little yip, that sounded more human than Wolfos, and followed her mother.
Story#3
"Thank you for shopping at the poke mart, have a nice day!" the clerk said while waving goodbye.
"You too!" replied Chris, leaving the Pokemon center. He looked around the quiet town of Lacunosa and headed off to route 13, where Pokemon not from the Unova region could be found. He walked through the tall grass, loving the sweet scents in the air.
He stopped in his tracks as he saw some grass move a few feet away. He waited as an Absol popped her head out, sniffing the air.
Chris slowly walked towards her, holding out his hand. The Absol stood where she was, only moving her head so his hand could pet pet it. She gave out a satisfied cry as he petted her. She then started licking his hand, loving his taste.
Chris started chuckling, "Hey, that tickles." He gave her one last pet and started walking away. "Now to search for-" He started to himself but then felt himself trip. He looked behind him to see the Absol pinning him down, a grin on her face. She then turned her butt to his face, backing up to face slowly.
He was about to yell for help when she forced his head into her vagina. He could feel himself slowly moving up, not trying to struggle, afraid he might hurt her.
The Absol panted as she forced her prey deeper into her vagina, loving every second. She could feel his head entering her womb and gently caressed it.
Chris soon saw that he was entering her womb and tried yelling, hoping somebody was around to hear him. As he was slowly pushed into the open space, he started to strangely become tired.
The Absol gave one last big pant as his feet were sucked in.She laid down, her belly outstretched to her side, feeling the gentle movements inside.
Chris felt his feet enter the womb with the rest of his body. He curled up and went into a deep sleep.
The Absol yawned and stretched, waken up by her pup's yips for food. The baby Absol walked out clumsily, his fur snow white but where he should be grey he was a peach skin tone. He snuggled up to his mom, his brown eyes gazing lovingly at his mother. She nudged him forward and they both started looking for their Breakfast.
Both of these were from the same author, if I remember correctly. They are both short but that's kind of a positive as they both get to the vore parts of the story quite quickly and both vore scenes are quite descriptive. Overall, both are great stories, if someone knows who wrote these can you message me to let me know so I can thank them. I would appreciate it.
Bonus Story: When we had our soft vore that leads to rebirth week I promised if I found anymore, I would post them as bonus stories, well I came across a few more so here is one of them.
Burn and Get Burned written by The_Faceless_One; commissioned by Madaraoluv2
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6807919/
Spoilers Below:
In this one a pack of werewolves reproduce by having the females shrink humans they come accross and eating them, which somehow forces them into their wombs. During the story the group of werewolves had previously eaten an entire family of humans and are pregnant with them with the exception of the father who killed himself and is now a vengeful ghost who is trying to reunite with his family by killing the pregnant werewolves to free his families' sprits.
The ghost wins in the end and goes off to the afterlife with his family. I kind of wish the ghost lost and he was somehow added on to the growing pack, him killing the pregnant werewolves kind of feels selfish as he is denying his family the opportunity to live again, if the werewolves were mindless monsters I would understand why he did what he did. I understand why the author decided to make the ghost win as it's a way to have the werewolves go through a redemption arc and now, they only eat humans who are down on their luck and need a new family thus making them now the good guys. Overall, it's a really good story with an original premise. I will say though the ghost attacking everyone with a machine gun is silly.
The story also had the same problem with A Tale of Mice and Cats had, which is was why would a tribe of creatures reproduce in this strange way when males exist within their tribe? Maybe the author could have explained it that the humans pretty much become egg cells that need to be fertilized later, I don't know just throwing an idea out there.
Thank you The_Faceless_One and Madaraoluv2 for the cool story.
On an unrelated note, I recently started a forum post, on Eka's Portal, where people can share their ideas for vore stories that lead to rebirth. If you have an idea you want to share or just want to discuss an idea or the subject in general, please visit it in the link below. I myself will be slowly adding on ideas to it overtime.
https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic......mp;amp;t=68339
Our first story is An Inquisitive Unbirth by MotherMorag
https://aryion.com/g4/view/858940
Spoilers Below: Ok this one takes place in the Xenoblade Chronicles 2 Universe which is something I am complete unfamiliar with, but I think the author does a pretty good just with having the reader feel like they don't need to know the entire lore of the series to get what is happening by focusing on factions that are usually in medieval fantasy settings. In this case it's an over zealous inquisition and a royal family. As far as the vore goes this author did two things really dam well. One is having the pred not only unbirth the main protagonist but also have them soft vore other victims and have the protagonist feel their screams and struggles from within the womb. This rarely used situation always turns me on. It's like staring out a window, looking at a terrible thunder storm or blizzard while you enjoy the warm and comfort of your home, knowing your so close to death and danger while being so well protected and warm. The second thing they did was come up with a unique motive for an evil pred. With most evil preds it's hard to come up with a good motive for them to rebirth a victim other than, hey I enjoy owning you, but that motive always comes off as slightly unbelievable as this great evil pred has to put in alot of work and love for this character to become their heir. Kind of reminds me of this quote from the Simpsons.
Bart: Hey, mister, would you like a puppy?
Snake: No, but I'll take one! (reveals a gun inside his vest)
Bart: Okay.
Snake: I'm going to cherish and care for this dog, and there's nothing you can do to stop me! Hahahaha! (kisses the puppy)
Anyway, what I am saying is that the motive MotherMorag came up with is that the pred wants to trick a prince into having a shotgun wedding with them. You see they previously had sex but his seed didn't take so she tricks him into thinking it did take by unbirthing the protag. They then marry and have sex again, this time with the protag in her womb and by doing this the protag absorbs the prince's seed/dna making what was once a lie into the truth. Man that idea is so good/original.
Thank you MotherMorag for the original well told story.
Our next two stories are ones I can't find the original post for and like others that I can't find the post for I will just post the entirety of both stories below. Honestly the main problem I have is DeviantArt, their search system just sucks. For example, I was originally looking for the DeviantArt Version of An Inquisitive Unbirth so I typed the name on the search bar perfectly and it gave me 9,000 results with the story I was looking for not being at the top of the results. In fact, I never found it despite knowing it was on the site, thankfully I remembered that there was an Eka's Portal version of the story.
Story# 2
Thank you for visiting Hyrule, come again." Replied a guard.
"I'm sure I'll come back." Replied Michaela, taking her red potion. She soon left to head out to meet the Yeti's at Snowpoint, they were going to have soup tonight.
"Ok," Michaela looked around, shivering. "I think I'm lost."
She started looking around, only seeing a few brown spots, mountains, and the lake where she came from. She started walking towards the mountains. She didn't want to be late.
AWWWOOOOO!
Michaela stopped and turned around. A white Wolfos was circling around her from a distance, glaring at her.
Michaela pulled out her shovel, her only hard weapon on her.
The Wolfos stopped circling and went into a pounce position. Michaela held out her shovel, trying to threaten it.
It didn't work. The Wolfos jumped over her, but took the shovel with it. It threw the shovel away from reaching distance.
The Wolfos started stalking towards her. Michaela started walking backwards.
Michaela gasped as the fell to the ground, the snow running down her neck. She tried to get up but was pushed down with the Wolfos pinning her down.
The Wolfos licked her face, savoring the flavor.
It then started shredding off her coat and shirt, her bra and underwear were the only things left on her. Now she was freezing.
She closed her eyes, hoping that this was just a dream or something and that when she opened them again, the Wolfos would be gone.
She opened her eyes to see the Wolfos turned around, it's butt right in her face. She gave a disgusted face.
Michaela looked at the back end again to see it was a girl, her vagina was near her face.
She was about to say something, but the Wolfos got off her and walked towards her feet.
She sighed and turned over on her belly, shivering again as her belly was covered in snow.
When she tried to get up, she felt that her feet were wet and yet warm, and she she couldn't move them.
She looked over and gasped. The Wolfos was eating her with her Vagina!
The Wolfos panted with joy, using all her energy to suck her in.
Michaela tried using her arms to pull her out, but she was too cold to do much but move some of the snow. She felt her waist starting to enter the vagina.
"Stop it!" Michaela screamed at her. "Why are you doing this?!"
The Wolfos' reply was more pants and sucking her in faster. She patted her expanding womb, feeling the tiny kicks from the feet.
Michaela groaned and tried scraping at the ground again. She soon saw nothing but black and red, her hands still outside the hole.
The Wolfos gave one last pant and sucked in the hands. She gave a little successful howl and rolled onto her back, looking at her swollen belly and feeling the slow squirms.
Michaela felt tired and the womb felt warm and comfortable, so she fell asleep.
The Wolfos came out of her cave, it was winter again from when she met the human.
She was going to try that again, but showing it to her pup. She barked once and the pup came out, it's white and auburn splotched fur puffed out.
The pup gave a little yip, that sounded more human than Wolfos, and followed her mother.
Story#3
"Thank you for shopping at the poke mart, have a nice day!" the clerk said while waving goodbye.
"You too!" replied Chris, leaving the Pokemon center. He looked around the quiet town of Lacunosa and headed off to route 13, where Pokemon not from the Unova region could be found. He walked through the tall grass, loving the sweet scents in the air.
He stopped in his tracks as he saw some grass move a few feet away. He waited as an Absol popped her head out, sniffing the air.
Chris slowly walked towards her, holding out his hand. The Absol stood where she was, only moving her head so his hand could pet pet it. She gave out a satisfied cry as he petted her. She then started licking his hand, loving his taste.
Chris started chuckling, "Hey, that tickles." He gave her one last pet and started walking away. "Now to search for-" He started to himself but then felt himself trip. He looked behind him to see the Absol pinning him down, a grin on her face. She then turned her butt to his face, backing up to face slowly.
He was about to yell for help when she forced his head into her vagina. He could feel himself slowly moving up, not trying to struggle, afraid he might hurt her.
The Absol panted as she forced her prey deeper into her vagina, loving every second. She could feel his head entering her womb and gently caressed it.
Chris soon saw that he was entering her womb and tried yelling, hoping somebody was around to hear him. As he was slowly pushed into the open space, he started to strangely become tired.
The Absol gave one last big pant as his feet were sucked in.She laid down, her belly outstretched to her side, feeling the gentle movements inside.
Chris felt his feet enter the womb with the rest of his body. He curled up and went into a deep sleep.
The Absol yawned and stretched, waken up by her pup's yips for food. The baby Absol walked out clumsily, his fur snow white but where he should be grey he was a peach skin tone. He snuggled up to his mom, his brown eyes gazing lovingly at his mother. She nudged him forward and they both started looking for their Breakfast.
Both of these were from the same author, if I remember correctly. They are both short but that's kind of a positive as they both get to the vore parts of the story quite quickly and both vore scenes are quite descriptive. Overall, both are great stories, if someone knows who wrote these can you message me to let me know so I can thank them. I would appreciate it.
Bonus Story: When we had our soft vore that leads to rebirth week I promised if I found anymore, I would post them as bonus stories, well I came across a few more so here is one of them.
Burn and Get Burned written by The_Faceless_One; commissioned by Madaraoluv2
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6807919/
Spoilers Below:
In this one a pack of werewolves reproduce by having the females shrink humans they come accross and eating them, which somehow forces them into their wombs. During the story the group of werewolves had previously eaten an entire family of humans and are pregnant with them with the exception of the father who killed himself and is now a vengeful ghost who is trying to reunite with his family by killing the pregnant werewolves to free his families' sprits.
The ghost wins in the end and goes off to the afterlife with his family. I kind of wish the ghost lost and he was somehow added on to the growing pack, him killing the pregnant werewolves kind of feels selfish as he is denying his family the opportunity to live again, if the werewolves were mindless monsters I would understand why he did what he did. I understand why the author decided to make the ghost win as it's a way to have the werewolves go through a redemption arc and now, they only eat humans who are down on their luck and need a new family thus making them now the good guys. Overall, it's a really good story with an original premise. I will say though the ghost attacking everyone with a machine gun is silly.
The story also had the same problem with A Tale of Mice and Cats had, which is was why would a tribe of creatures reproduce in this strange way when males exist within their tribe? Maybe the author could have explained it that the humans pretty much become egg cells that need to be fertilized later, I don't know just throwing an idea out there.
Thank you The_Faceless_One and Madaraoluv2 for the cool story.
On an unrelated note, I recently started a forum post, on Eka's Portal, where people can share their ideas for vore stories that lead to rebirth. If you have an idea you want to share or just want to discuss an idea or the subject in general, please visit it in the link below. I myself will be slowly adding on ideas to it overtime.
https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic......mp;amp;t=68339
