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Week27:Cockvore&Rebirth Story Shoutouts:Steele's Due
9 months ago
Hey before we begin this shoutout I just wanted to let you guys know that I'm almost finished with a simple cock vore rebirth story that I will release by the end of this week. I just have to think of epilogue scene. A rebirth story just doesn't feel complete without a scene or description that shows how their new life is turning out. I am also slowly going to release some of my unfinished, abandoned stories, or first drafts. I already released one here.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/59817104/
This week's story shoutout is Steele's Due by TARDISType50
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57359602/
When it comes to this story, I have been hesitant to shout it out as I kind of believe the author sort of ruins his own story by the end of the story, in my opinion, but 99% of this story is great so I will only talk about that negative part of the story at the end of the shoutout.
Spoilers/commentary below
Ok the setting of this story is in the Balto movie and timeline wise it seems to take place after the first movie. The rival character/husky character named Steele is exiled from the village, but he plans to lure Balto out of the village in order to kill him. Balto expecting this ambush turns the table and uses wolf/plot magic to cock vore Steele and instead of killing him he decides to redeem the villain by making him his child. Both the vore and sex scenes of this story are really great, and I really like the idea of a hero deciding to redeem a villain thru rebirth. Additionally, this story has something that most rebirth vore stories don't have and that is it has a great epilogue scene describing how Steele's life turned out after he is reborn, but my problem with the story is also contained within the epilogue scene and that is Balto asks Steele, who is now his son, to lick his balls. Now I have definitely don't have a problem with incest stories but my main problem with Steele licking Balto's balls is that TARDISType50 said that Steele is only a year old by the time of this scene. I know feral/IRL dogs are technically adults when they become one, but it still feels kind of wrong and it could have been easily fixed by just saying the scene happens sometime later or a few years later. Also doesn't help Steele at this point keeps calling Balto Daddy, which makes it feel like he isn't mentally mature. I think the author just wanted him to say Daddy as a way to show that Balto is dominate and Steele is submissive (By looking at the author's galley its clear he has a Steele humiliation fetish) but the situation still leaves a sour taste in my mouth.
Anyway, besides that it's a great story
Thanks TARDISType50 for the story.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/59817104/
This week's story shoutout is Steele's Due by TARDISType50
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57359602/
When it comes to this story, I have been hesitant to shout it out as I kind of believe the author sort of ruins his own story by the end of the story, in my opinion, but 99% of this story is great so I will only talk about that negative part of the story at the end of the shoutout.
Spoilers/commentary below
Ok the setting of this story is in the Balto movie and timeline wise it seems to take place after the first movie. The rival character/husky character named Steele is exiled from the village, but he plans to lure Balto out of the village in order to kill him. Balto expecting this ambush turns the table and uses wolf/plot magic to cock vore Steele and instead of killing him he decides to redeem the villain by making him his child. Both the vore and sex scenes of this story are really great, and I really like the idea of a hero deciding to redeem a villain thru rebirth. Additionally, this story has something that most rebirth vore stories don't have and that is it has a great epilogue scene describing how Steele's life turned out after he is reborn, but my problem with the story is also contained within the epilogue scene and that is Balto asks Steele, who is now his son, to lick his balls. Now I have definitely don't have a problem with incest stories but my main problem with Steele licking Balto's balls is that TARDISType50 said that Steele is only a year old by the time of this scene. I know feral/IRL dogs are technically adults when they become one, but it still feels kind of wrong and it could have been easily fixed by just saying the scene happens sometime later or a few years later. Also doesn't help Steele at this point keeps calling Balto Daddy, which makes it feel like he isn't mentally mature. I think the author just wanted him to say Daddy as a way to show that Balto is dominate and Steele is submissive (By looking at the author's galley its clear he has a Steele humiliation fetish) but the situation still leaves a sour taste in my mouth.
Anyway, besides that it's a great story
Thanks TARDISType50 for the story.
