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Week33:Cockvore&Rebirth Shoutouts:Ashen Skies& Wolf to Whelp
5 months ago
Hey thank you for coming to see this week's vore that leads to rebirth story shoutout.
Its cockvore week and so as usual I only have one story this week, but I do have a bonus cockvore/rebirth comic I would like to share with you guys. I actually have a few comics I know of that I would like to shoutout and I will be doing so during the cockvore weeks to make up for the fact that I only shoutout one story during those weeks.
Any who our story this week is Ashen Skies by Sheltem
Part one
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21347641/
Part two: Cock Vore version
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21375078/
There is an unbirth version if you prefer the story to end with that kind of vore instead.
Part two: Unbirth Version
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21375048/
Commentary/Spoilers Below
I felt very mixed about this story, I very much appreciated the author's attempts at world building and the general professional writing style gave the impression that the author wanted to give it their all and perhaps make a sequel one day, but I will have to say that there was just too many characters, events, and ideas that were irrelevant to the story, especially during part 1. The exposition of part one will also generally make the reader confused, the reason why a female dragon is living among dwarfs is well explained but Sheltem and Momiji's characters aren't well explained to the reader at all which. This is going to sound mean but the only two reasons why a person should read part one is because, ONE, they enjoy breast vore/crossdressing and, TWO, there is a magic spell that appears in this part that foreshadows how the heroes beat the villain in part two. I would honestly just recommend reading part 2. When it comes to part two itself, I love the motivations behind the characters and how the good guys kind of do the monkey paw kind of wish thing to the villain, where they twist his words to their benefit. Also loved the scene of the villain trying to struggle out of the testicles/womb. Definitely wish there was a sex scene in the end as a grand finale, instead it ends with some foreshadowing that Momiji might be capable of magic, which like a lot of other things in this story feels irrelevant. Overall, I liked the story but it definitely feels like it needs a rewrite in order to make it feel more streamlined and focused.
Thank you Sheltem for the story
Our bonus comic shoutout is Wolf to Whelp by listenting
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....Wolf-to-Whelp/
Commentary/Spoilers below
In this one a dragon kidnaps an anthro wolf for a seemingly unknown reason. After being captured for a long length of time the dragon indirectly reveals his intentions by cockvoring the wolf shortly after mentioning he is waiting for his mate. The dragon then has sex with his mate and the wolf is reborn as a dragon whelp shortly after. The thing that makes this comic so very special is its sheer length and the number of details the illustrator put into the work. Everything single panel is dam near perfect, with the way the wolf slides down inside the cock in page 5, the fear the wolf has in page 2, the imprints on the balls on page 5 and 9, the interior shots of the wolf feeling anxious about his predicament on pages 6,7, and 8, the way the cock is inserted into the female dragon and her visage of pure pleasure on pages 9, 10, and 11, the way the wolf is half mutating into a dragon on page 13, and lastly the two aftermath pages were just absolutely perfect down to the very last detail. This comic is the perfect fusion of wholesomeness and how messed up being reborn against your will can be. I very much loved it and hope you do too when you read it.
Thank you Listenting for the perfect cockvore/rebirth comic.
Its cockvore week and so as usual I only have one story this week, but I do have a bonus cockvore/rebirth comic I would like to share with you guys. I actually have a few comics I know of that I would like to shoutout and I will be doing so during the cockvore weeks to make up for the fact that I only shoutout one story during those weeks.
Any who our story this week is Ashen Skies by Sheltem
Part one
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21347641/
Part two: Cock Vore version
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21375078/
There is an unbirth version if you prefer the story to end with that kind of vore instead.
Part two: Unbirth Version
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21375048/
Commentary/Spoilers Below
I felt very mixed about this story, I very much appreciated the author's attempts at world building and the general professional writing style gave the impression that the author wanted to give it their all and perhaps make a sequel one day, but I will have to say that there was just too many characters, events, and ideas that were irrelevant to the story, especially during part 1. The exposition of part one will also generally make the reader confused, the reason why a female dragon is living among dwarfs is well explained but Sheltem and Momiji's characters aren't well explained to the reader at all which. This is going to sound mean but the only two reasons why a person should read part one is because, ONE, they enjoy breast vore/crossdressing and, TWO, there is a magic spell that appears in this part that foreshadows how the heroes beat the villain in part two. I would honestly just recommend reading part 2. When it comes to part two itself, I love the motivations behind the characters and how the good guys kind of do the monkey paw kind of wish thing to the villain, where they twist his words to their benefit. Also loved the scene of the villain trying to struggle out of the testicles/womb. Definitely wish there was a sex scene in the end as a grand finale, instead it ends with some foreshadowing that Momiji might be capable of magic, which like a lot of other things in this story feels irrelevant. Overall, I liked the story but it definitely feels like it needs a rewrite in order to make it feel more streamlined and focused.
Thank you Sheltem for the story
Our bonus comic shoutout is Wolf to Whelp by listenting
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....Wolf-to-Whelp/
Commentary/Spoilers below
In this one a dragon kidnaps an anthro wolf for a seemingly unknown reason. After being captured for a long length of time the dragon indirectly reveals his intentions by cockvoring the wolf shortly after mentioning he is waiting for his mate. The dragon then has sex with his mate and the wolf is reborn as a dragon whelp shortly after. The thing that makes this comic so very special is its sheer length and the number of details the illustrator put into the work. Everything single panel is dam near perfect, with the way the wolf slides down inside the cock in page 5, the fear the wolf has in page 2, the imprints on the balls on page 5 and 9, the interior shots of the wolf feeling anxious about his predicament on pages 6,7, and 8, the way the cock is inserted into the female dragon and her visage of pure pleasure on pages 9, 10, and 11, the way the wolf is half mutating into a dragon on page 13, and lastly the two aftermath pages were just absolutely perfect down to the very last detail. This comic is the perfect fusion of wholesomeness and how messed up being reborn against your will can be. I very much loved it and hope you do too when you read it.
Thank you Listenting for the perfect cockvore/rebirth comic.
