Week34:Unbirth&Rebirth Story Shoutouts:Biofetish
5 months ago
Hey thanks for joining me again for another week of vore that leads to rebirth story shoutouts. Unfortunately, I'm not feeling well today again so this week I'm going to do 4 shorter stories with less commentary because of their length.
All four of these stories were written by the same author, at least I think it was the same author as I can't find the links where I originally downloaded these stories from so very long ago. I think the author's name is Biofetish, but I'm not 100% sure as that is also one of the stories' names.
Some of these stories suffer from faulty grammar, I don't think English is the author's first language but nonetheless please try to ignore these faults.
Because I can't find the links, I will just post all four stories below for you guys to read. I Hope you all enjoy them.
Story 1
BioFetish – Wolf
BioFetish is a type of advance factory. There science are beyond the human limitation. They already know how to use the spatial and temporal, not harming their own factory or taking to them to wrong place. Animals that were extinct, myth, or legendary creatures or animals were living right now in their spatial and temporal. They created them from living flesh and soul. Since, they are the first one able to do it. Most of the animals are now evolved during the time. They use the test subject to communicate with this creatures or animals. However, the test subject were never succeed with communicate. They kind of ended up food, rebirth, or they make another one. Sadly, there weren’t any males creatures or animals were become or rebirth into one. Because they senems lack of something, but they don’t know. They seems everything is perfectly now.
You were a test subject. You were inside this very small bright white chamber. You can’t escape in this small bright white chamber. The walls are very thick and refined. You can’t estimate how thick, but surely it somehow like 20 inch thickness or 30 inch thickness. You hear the door slide open. You turn to the doorway. You see a low-level guard standing and asking you come out. You get off the bed and head out the metal door. The guard ask you, follow him. Then, he start walking and you begin start walking. There was a guard behind you and following. You have never seen this place and never had got out from the cell. Everything seems amazing to you. You were walking past few testing room as you begin to hear screaming or moaning from each testing room. Which make you stop? The front guard stop and look at you. Front guard ask you, “Don’t worry? We don’t put any test subject in there unless if you break any rules that we give to you?” You still can’t bear the pains. Front guard still see you in pains. Front guard nods his head to the back guard. He take something from his pocket. It was medical syringe gun and then it inject down your neck. You feel very tired and weak. You can’t think of, but you were in subconscious. Two guards support you on each shoulder and taking you to somewhere.
Then, you hear this screaming up ahead, but you didn’t feel anything. You still tired and weak. Your eyes is minimum open and barely see anything. Soon, you see the light flickering where two guards standing. As they take you over and they inject you something in your neck. Your body slowly fully awake from the subconscious. Then, the door slide open and take you inside the room. They drop you on the floor and both left.
Soon, you close your eyes for bit. Then, you wake up fully and looking around very strangely. You don’t know how you got here so fast? You lean up and looks around the room. It was a forest? You don’t hear anything bird chirping or any other noises out in the forest. It very quiet in here. You stop and already felt being watched somewhere in the forest. You don’t know where, but you quickly stand up. So, you begin to start walking and looking for the way out. As you walks and walks. You don’t see any exit, but seems you feel being walked around in the circle.
You stop and see something on the floor. You crouch down and see very large wolf paw prints. It was larger than regular wolf sized paws. You feel something not right about this large wolf paw prints. You never have seen one, but you heard one of the legend say, “If you ever met this large wolf paw prints. You better run fast or…” as you hear this deep low growling behind you. You know that sound anywhere and you start running quick as you can away from this wolf.
Then, you start to slow down and calm down. You look behind you and see there nothing chasing you. You catching your breath then you turn around. As you quickly jump as you saw something in front of you. You see very large pure white wolf, blue eyes, and the sized were like your size. So, large and you were afraid. You slowly backing away from the pure white wolf. The pure white wolf looking at you. You were afraid by how those eyes looking at you. Soon, the pure white wolf smile and you stop. You didn’t know what is going on. Then, the pure white wolf quickly pounce at you.
You can’t fight back at the very large, heavy pure white wolf. Pure white, wolf give very strong licking at your face. You giggle and begging to stop licking. Pure white wolf did stop licking and ask, “Who are you?” You don’t remember your name. You could see this is a female wolf. You were bit glad to female wolf, but not male wolf type. She smile and give you another strong lick at your face.
She ask you, “To come to her nice, comfort wolf den?” You look very surprise. You refuse. She smile and lean her head bit closer to you. You stop and feeling your both cheeks were bright red. You ask, “Eh… What are you doing?” She give very nice and strong kiss which she send you in love with no matter what gender you are in?” You can’t resist anymore and placing both your hands on her head. She see you were charmed. Then, she let go and ask you, “Want to come to my nice, comfort wolf den?” You slowly speak out, “Yes, wolf?” You get on your feet and climb on her back. As you ride on her back. Then, she tell you, “Hold on me!” She start running very fast. As she zoom and jumping from one place to another. You enjoy the winds blowing against your face.
You can see her large wolf den up ahead. You were smiling and still thinking about the wolf. She stop in front of her large wolf den. She sit down and you slide right off her back. As you landed on your both feet. She stand back up and start heading side. You follow her into her wolf den.
As you were inside her wolf den. You stop and look around her wolf den. Then, you see her standing in the middle of her cave and looking at you. You head over and look at her. She gently ask, “Do you want to be eaten, unbirth, or transform you?” You didn’t say anything, but you can’t really decide which decision?
1. Be Eaten?
She smile and give you very hungrily look. You didn’t move, but you still charmed by her. She open her mouth wide and big. You see her sharp teeth and drooling saliva. You want to be eaten by her. She wait for you climb in her mouth. Since, her mouth wasn’t big for you sit, but you have lay on her tongue instead. She is glad that you accepted it. Though, she still amaze that charmed bond hadn’t broken. She didn’t close her mouth, but she lift her mouth up. You start to feel sliding further in her mouth slowly. She want to have fun with you and giving you plenty time enjoying in her mouth. As you slide further and further as you see the pitch black hole back of her maw. You weren’t afraid, but thinking what is down there? Could it be fun or leading you somewhere? You still charmed by her. She smile and thinking it time for you be in her belly and sleep till tomorrow. You start to slide down the dark pitch black hole. As you were sliding down and muscles squeezing and release on you. You enjoying more and your cheeks already bright red. You begin to smell something and hear something. You didn’t know what is this smell and hearing something. You want to find out what is this smell and hearing. Soon, you feel bit hot rising as you go down further and further. Soon, you see the valve open and your head stick out. You see the wall of muscles and bottom there were some liquid? You wriggle as you fall in the liquid. Liquid didn’t harm you, but rather make very acidic sound on your clothes.
As your whole body entered in the wall of muscles. You had to curl up into a ball and feeling the wall squeezing and releasing on your body.
She look at her large belly and smile. She lay down on her floor and curl up into ball. Soon, she break the charmed spell on you.
You wake up and saw something wasn’t right. You were in the belly and want to beg to get out the wolf stomach. She tell you, “If you keep screaming, I will let you stay in there longer?” You were surprise what she said. As you try to calm down, but you are afraid of the acid. She lay down her head and close her eyes. You wait and wait. You were very tired and close your eyes.
2. Rebirth (unbirth)
You look at her and she turn around. She lift her tail and you walk bit forward. You don’t know what she is going do? She tell you, “I thought ever had a wolf pup? Would mind become one?” You didn’t say anything, but you are interesting something that she is wanting? You nods your head and she smile so happy. You see the flaps opening and you watch she sit her rear on your head. As you feel your head enter into her between the flaps. You enter more and more. You wriggling inside her tunnel of muscles. You feel the muscles pulling you further and further. You just enjoying the feeling and your cheeks already red. Soon, you hear her delightful moaning as you enter more. Soon, you see the valves opening slowly. You wriggle more and more.
As you hear enter into her large womb. You notice isn’t very small, but big for you fit your body fully inside. You push yourself to enter her womb and just thinking having a new life?
Then, your whole body entered into her womb and valve closed. You curl up and thinking how it would to start new? You start to close your eyes as you very tired. She smile and sing very soft, melody song and thinking how it would be good to have a baby wolf pup?
63 days has gone by, you slowly open your eyes. You were beside your mother, nursing. You were a baby black pure wolf.
3. Transformation
She quickly pounce at you and you were pinned to the floor. You didn’t struggle, but she is very heavy. She give you very strong kiss as you were double charmed. But you won’t feel the double charmed affecting you. You feel bit hot under her thick pure white furs. You close your eyes and she let her lip off you. “Are you ready for this painful transformation?” You nods your head and smile at her. She say, “This will be painful!” She open her mouth and bite down at your right arm. You were in pains, but you didn’t scream. You just look at her lovely blue eyes.
She get off you and back up away from you. You lean up and see your right hand’s wolf bite mark. You weren’t bleeding? It very strange. Then, you notice something feeling pains in you. You turn over your body as your hands and feet on the floor. You see your hands start to reshape into paws. It was very dark pure black furs over your hands into paws. Soon, you were quite surprise as you saw your paws. Then, you see the thick, pure black furs spreading up to shoulder. You did feel very weird and bit painful. You start to see some of your clothes weren’t there before you bitten. Only you are wearing is your shirt and pant. You see your feet already became wolf feet paws. You start to feel your mouth and nose stretching forward. As you can see your long, pure black muzzle. Your ears start to sharp pointed ears on top of your head. Then, it covered by the thick, pure black muzzle. You were in the terrible position, that yours back of your legs forming hind legs. It rather very hard and hearing this sound of your bones and muscles changing. Losing the ability walk on both leg. You feel yours both legs growing very thick, pure black furs all over your legs. As your pant to seems to disappear. As it spread more and more. Your head already formed the pure black, wolf head. Your eyes color change to red. Your body is the only remaining that you will be freed from the pains and weird feeling. The thick pure black furs spreading all over your body. Soon, the remaining of your body is completed transformation.
You get back on your feet and look at her. Your height is bit taller than her but she nuzzling you.
Commentary: I liked the SCP like setting of this story and I also liked the multiple endings with ending 2 being my favorite of course. Overall, its a short and sweet vore story.
Story 2
Prey:
I open my eyes slowly, I lean up slowly. It was a sunny day above my head. I stretch… I froze I remember I was sleeping in my house, but how I got into a forest? I slowly get up. I hear something, I froze… I slowly turn around. There was nothing… I start walking again. I can my throat dry… So, I look for any water source.
I walk about 2 hours, feeling my stomach empty and my dry throat. It was very hard to talk with my throat dry. The sun beating down at me, so much that I lower my eyebrows. I am walking with all these sweats losing of my skin layers.
I see a brown stump, I walk over there and seat down. I tilt my head up to the bright sunny day. I see there were no clouds. I can feel very small breeze through my hairs. I relax my feet from soaring and tired. Then, I hear bush rattling behind me. I turn around, I froze and I say “Come out?” A white bunny jump out, I relieve and I turn back around. I quickly scream and fall off the stump. My back of my head hit the hard rock.
I open my eyes slowly. It was so warm and furry. I see a white wolf smiling down at me. I quickly open my eyes and lean up. I turn around, I see her white wolf. She smile at me, I froze when I see her 4 paws from her body and 2 paws from upper body. I whisper “You are a white wolf taur?” She smiles, glaring down at my beautiful black eyes. She whispers “Come here human?” I slowly crawl back away from her. She reach grabs both of my legs. She pulls me closer, as she set her large two white paws on my chest. She whispers “You look beautiful?” I froze… I try to struggle for escaping for large two white paws on my chest. She says “Don’t resist!” Then, I remember a story told me “If you see a white wolf taur, wanting to love and impressing you are beautiful?” I froze, I refuse her offer. She didn’t change, but keep pushing that I’m very beautiful.
Something else she got into her mind, she looks at me aroused by lusty? I froze…. She whispers “You look so perfect!” She grabs me and pull me to her lip while her lip toward me. I struggle harder, but then a gentle kiss on my lip. I froze… My cheeks turn red. I can’t even feel my body of resisting, but pushing me into the part of enjoyment.
I keep reminding myself, don’t fallen in love, but it was too late. My body was already in love with the white wolf taur. She giggle, places her lips on my lips again. Now… my hands just stop struggling and placing around her head. I forget everything and my life that I wish to be with her for rest of my life. She smile more creepily, she say “Do you want to come with me?” My cheeks still red, whisper “Yes, please?” She charmed with her eyes and her smile. Making me just thinking about her.
She grins at me like I was going doing something. She whispers “Do you wish to be my lovely pup?” I stare at motionless… My cheeks slowly calming down…. I was about to refuse her offer when she just kissed me again. Then, I say “Yes, I will your lovely pup?” She smile, say “Don’t struggle!”
She set me back on the floor, she stand up and walk bit forward. She is giggling about something, until I say “My mother?” She frozen, looks surprised that never met anyone would say “My mother?” She smiles, say “Don’t worry, sweetheart?” She knew this is bad, but she have to take him anyway?”
I see her vagina flaps slowly open. I can see me smiling, but I know it was a fake smile.. This charming feeling of love already set me the point of no turning back. I can the flaps slowly touching my head. I slowly feel my body slowly pulling inside to her. I took my fate with it, since there no escaping from her tight squeezing muscles. My head slowly sliding inside her vagina and her flaps still closed... I can feel bit warm and wet.
She is moaning about how excitedly of pulling someone inside her vagina. As I feel more pull and pull. As my head was inside her vagina, very smelly even though it was warm and wet.
I try to look down; I can see it cover up to my chest. I try to pull myself further into her womb. I can feels much better when she moaning more and more. Forcing me to be going with the flow of her body moaning about how excellent.
I can see her womb up ahead; I push myself up to the womb. I can feel the muscles closed on my feet. I knew my fate will be renew and rebirth and restarting all over again. I just want to get this over as I push myself body up and up. She made even more loudly moaning. I feel my soul reach to somewhere my soul can rest easily and restarting. I close my eyes as my body slowly curling up. She pats her belly, her whisper “Sweet dream?” I gently smile.
Pred:
I was sleeping. Then, I slowly open my blue eyes. I slowly stand up and stretching my feet. I feel so excited about something. I’m a female white wolf taur, I usually trick preys into of impressed how their beauty and making them submissive.
I decide to talk a walk around the forest. I run out the cave, look up at the clear sunny day. I can even feel myself want to eat something good. I run down the long path, searching for prey. I smell something… I turn toward the scent. I start running that direction. Then, I stop and smell something more than the scent. I move the bush, leaving a small hole. I see someone lying on the floor. My cheeks immediate turn red, I close the bush. I look down, I giggling about something.
I open the bush, I look again. I start to see him slowly opening his eyes, look very surprised. He was talking about himself. He gets up and looks around. I slowly following and making no sound. I start to feel my throat dry and hunger. So, I wait and watch. I watch the human sit on the stump. I hear bush rattling. He turn around, I slowly come out. I slowly walking toward him, I stop in front of him. He turn back, scream and fall back. I watch him; hit his head back of the ground. I place my two front paws on the stump. I stare down, I feel slightly excitement.
So, I’m thinking what should I do with this lovely human? I look down, thinking of the empty womb? I giggle, so I slowly jump beside him. I sniff the most delicious human. I place my paws around him, put him on my back. I run back toward my cave.
After, a while, I set him on the floor. I sit in front of his head. I look down, with a small smile on my face. I hear him slowly moaning?
I watch him slowly open his eyes. I can see his slightly open eyes, and then fully wake. He lean up, slowly turn around me. I smile.
He slowly crawling back, but I set my two paws on his legs. I pull him closer and closer. I set my two large hands paws on his chest. He froze, look up at me. I look down with a small grin. He starts talking about a story about me? I like the story. I’m thinking making him into submissive? I say “You look so beautiful?” He froze… He was about to refuse the offer…
I slowly reach for my lips toward him. He struggle, but I set my gentle furs on his lip. I see his cheeks turn bright red. I keep kissing him, pouring all the love into him. I let go and look down. I smile down at him; he says “You look perfect?”
He smiles at me back. I say “Do you want to be my lovely pup?” I can see his cheeks slowly cooling down, he was about to refuse then I kiss him again. This time I push him even further of his willpower. I let go my lip, I looks down. He smile, say “Yes, I want to be your pup?”
I get up and walking where my rear is facing at the human. I slowly am pushing my rear toward his head. I can feel the flaps close on his head. I smile, then I slowly pulling him into my vagina. I turn around, feeling excitement. I wish this human just accept his fate. Then, I feel something weird inside me. I look, I see him pushing himself. I smile. I made a soft lusty moaning. I pull him deeper and deeper.
I look back; I see his legs slowly swallow by my flaps. I smile; I can see him curling up. I look down at my stomach; place my paws around my stomach. I whisper “Sweet dream!”
Commentary: Probably the most interesting aspect of this story is how the author manages to tell it twice with each telling being from the perspective of the prey and then the pred. That idea of having a retelling of a vore story from two perspectives is something I haven't seen before and it works well as a way to pad out a short story, I just wonder if it would work for a longer story. You would probably have to have the 2 characters be separated during certain parts of the story in order to not bore the reader with retelling the same events in a longer story. Overall, it was a pretty enjoyable story.
Story 3
You slowly opening your eyes and see something very red and white strange looking furry creature. It had a white surgery mask with red cross in the middle of white surgery mask. As you become full surprise as you could see it had like shark head, hands and feet like rats, body like humanoid, and his eyes were like reptilian. You could see it staring at you like something you are precious.
Then, the strange furry creature raise a bone saw. You look full surprise and try to struggle. You couldn’t because your hands and feet were chained to the surgery table. You struggle more, but it won’t budge. Then, you slowly close your eyes as you smell something very sleepy. Then, you fall asleep.
Meanwhile… You were asleep…
Strange furry creature give small licking a lip. I must eat this human or making him into my lovely newborn sergal? Strange furry creature deciding. Then, strange furry sergal begin to smile and grab the strange looking syringe. As strange furry creature inject down at her right shoulder. She scream very loudly and painful. She start to calm down and panting very heavily. She can feel her mouth and rear becoming more elastic and enough to take you in her body by swallowing or unbirth you.
She refuse to surgery your body. She need really eat or making newborn sergal. She smile and still can’t really decide now.
She start to hear the voice behind her, “You have to decide on your own… I can’t chose it for you?” She shout, “Who are you?” “I’m nobody important. Just chose?” Very quiet and soft voice. She nods her head and turn to you. She lean over and give gently lick your right side of your cheek. She tasting how sweet and tasty you can be. But however, her rear acting very strange and similar how you feel about your taste. Taking you might be another good idea. So, she can begin her sergal civilization.
You slowly wake up from the sleeping medicine she gave you. You notice your hands and feet were freely. You turn to the strange looking furry staring at you with those red eyes. You feel very scared, but you manage say, “What are you?” She speak softly, “I’m a sergal. I wonder you can…” as her cheeks slightly turn red. You say, “What’s wrong?” She turn away from you and whispering, “It just that” as her stomach growl. You look surprise and say, “Don’t tell me?” She smile, but she say, “I must resist.”
You can see her resisting of eating you. You turn to the double metal door behind her. She stop and whisper, “Or… She look at her rear.” You look confuse and realizing something. She want to take you into her lovely womb.” You can’t really decide now.
Then, the voice echoing through the surgery room, “1. Be eaten… or 2. Be unbirth?”
1. Be eaten
The voice sounded familiar to you. You shout out, “Enigmatic-Medic?” Then, you hear giggling, “I’m not Enigmatic-Medic? I’m Enigmatic-Phantom Medic?” You look full surprise as you were really talking to a ghost. You turn, noticing her body and hands were struggling and squeezing. You ask, “What wrong?” She lift her head up and open her mouth wide and big. You saw those sharp teeth and back of her throat. You say, “Don’t say?” She quickly grabs you and yank you to the floor. She lay her body on top of you. Her hands were on the side of your head. She open her mouth and pull your head into her mouth. You try to struggle, but you can’t. The smell make you so relax and enjoying. She pull you even further in her mouth. As you start to slide to the dark end of her throat. You can feel the teeth scraping your clothes and ripping it apart.
Soon, you begin to pull further and further more. As you begin to start entering her throat. You can feel the muscles squeezing and releasing you. As it trying pulling you further. You can feel her body got off you and you really enjoying the fun of being her throat.
You pulling even further and further down through her muscles wall. You can’t bear the scent and feeling over your body. Though, some of your clothes still remain on. You start to feel you are getting warmer and warmer. You could see the light at the end of her muscles chamber. You slowly close your eyes and…
Your body plop into her stomach’s acid and stomach squeezing you. You were out cold due to lack of oxygen. Somehow, the acid wasn’t killing nor the lack of oxygen. It made you and fall deep sleep.
As she finally swallow down your legs and close her mouth. She see her belly grow very large and budge. She rub her stomach and whisper, “Don’t worry? I will let you out?” She didn’t know you were out cold. She climb on the metal surgery table. She curl up and fall asleep.
After, long while, she slowly wake up. She stop and noticing somebody standing in front of her. She see her hands and feet were chained up to metal surgery table. Her stomach still large and budge. Though, she can see those eyes were like nightmare. Left eyes were crimson red and right eyes were shinning blue. He slowly raise the bone saw and show very insanity smile at her. She scream very loudly!
(The End? Silly… I’m not finished!)
2. Be unbirth
You see her head lift up, showing very bright red cheeks. You stop and your cheeks turn bright red also. She grab you from the surgery table and dragging you to her room. She throw you on the bed and you look full surprise. She smiling at you. She climb on the bed and pin you to her bed. She give you very nice kiss on your lip. You look even more surprise as she kissed you. You ask, “What…. Are you doing?” You can’t really resist the love that kissed you. You feel you want to be her very close. She yawn and sleep on your chest. Your hands wraps around her back and smiling that she loved you. You start to close your eyes while as you staring at her. You closed your eyes completely.
Later, you slowly opening your eyes and your hands and feet tied up close. You see her, “Her rear facing at you?” Your cheeks turn bright red as you could see her oral exit. You ask, “What are you planning to do?” She whisper, “Making a newborn sergal?” You froze and try to struggle. She stick her rear into your nose then, you could see something open. As it open big and start to engulf your head. You begin to pulling into her body and she moan very loudly. You can’t even see, but you can feel the muscles squeezing your body. You pulling even further and further more. You can’t move your hands and feet also. Though, you did squirming in her body. You begin to feel sign of lack of oxygen. You pull further and further. You slowly close your eyes and your head enter into womb. Then, your body start to curl up into her womb. While, your legs still hanging out from her rear. She engulf your legs and pulling through the dark chamber of muscles. She stare at her large belly and rubbing it. She whisper, “Oh… Dear, I guess sergal civilization will begin?”
She start to leave the hospital.
Commentary: Like the first story this one has multiple endings, but it was kind of cool how one ending actually lead to the pred being captured and tortured by an unknown third party. Usually in most vore stories the pred is kind of this unbeatable godlike figure and it was interesting to see a situation where there was a bigger fish was ready to make her the victim of this story.
Story 4
Sergal’s Newborn
I open my eyes slowly. I begin to look around as I see my whole body parts were cuffed up to the wall. I was the only one in here. I feel something tingling in my stomach. Something is telling me this isn’t a very good place to be. I try to struggle, but the cuffed tighten each time I struggle. I didn’t struggle anymore, but rather feeling how tightening right now.
I hear the door open as I turn to the right. A bright, pure white, light blue, and dark blue strange creature that had shark head, reptilian eyes, hands and feet were like rats, and a humanoid body. The moment, the sergal turn to me. My eyes widen and feeling my heart pumping rapidly. I feel something isn’t right as she start to grin at me with her sharp teeth.
She is walking up to me, study closely at me. Seeing how perfect body shape and my pale skin. I was very nervous and scared as she see me. She begins to speak. “I want you to be my dear sergal son!” I widen my eyes. I shout at her face. No! She shows her nasty grin and grabs my bottom jaw. As she pulls my jaw down wide and big as she could do. Then, she quickly put something in my mouth and forces me to swallow it.
It tastes so awful bitter. I want to vomit, but I couldn’t. I look at her as my body begins to feel so weak. My eyes were staring at her slowly. She pushes something as they cuffed release me onto the floor. I lift my head up and look at her. My both cheeks blush bright red. I am moaning, “Sergal, please take me.” I can’t bear how beautiful and the urging of her wants to take me.
She begins to talk to me. “Do you want to be my dear sergal son?” I shout at her. YES! She smile and sit on the floor and open her legs up. She grabs the side of my head and pull closer to her rear. My eyes were amaze and unbearable feeling in me. As the flaps open up and it feels it close to my head. The smell is quite bit awful, but it feeling in my heart something I have dreamt all this time. As the muscles begin to work and pulling me further. I was inside her entrance of pussy beginning to groaning and moaning. She even moans how good that the human going to become her son anytime soon. As the muscles begin to pull me as my whole head was inside. The inside was very large and so much that this weird smell.
I feel my body begin to enter her pussy. As I can see all the way down her muscles there was a valve waiting to be open. As I try to squirm and wriggle to reach the flap. In my heart feel the new life has come.
I want to reach to her womb now. As I squirm even more and she let out more moaning and groaning that I may hear. My body has submitted to her and nothing I can do now. The pill she gave me was submissive pill. As its temporary submissive feeling, but there is no hope of coming back once your body has done something that you don’t want to. As I snap out and widening my eyes. As I want to scream, but the smell and unbearable feeling rubbing across my skin so weird and sensitive.
I wasn’t able to resist the pleasure inside her and letting out this moaning and groaning as I going slowly through her tunnel of muscles. I want to go back another way out, but her paws set in my rear. As it feels her pushing me further and I don’t want to start a new life. As I can see the valve is getting closer and closer. My whole body has already entered. My hands were at the back and I struggle to get one of my hands in front of me. I can feel I’m getting closer and closer to a new life. Something I can’t resist, but now I can’t think any now. I don’t think begging won’t work. As I feel so weak and tired. Not much oxygen in her for now. I fall asleep in her pussy tunnel to her womb.
As she pushes more as my legs start to enter. She still moaning and groaning. Even though, she will be much happier and finally had a son so long time. As she tries to engulf my whole legs in her pussy as my right hand begin to touch the valve as it's open. My right hand enters her womb and then my head. As my body begins to fall onto her womb while my legs still at the back her pussy going through. Then, my legs begin to enter her womb and rest of my body is in her womb. Not the only thing is happening right now. A cord slowly goes under my shirt and attach to my belly. The clothes of mine begin to start to slowly disappear. Leaving my whole skin pale white, but still covering slightly black, red, and dark blue. At my height shrinking to the size of sergal kid. My head begins to form a shark head, body become humanoid, and hands and feet were like rats. I slowly open my eyes, memory has gone, but the heart in me still remains same. My eyes were reptilian eyes. I don’t know anything now. In this warm and comfortable womb is better than outside. I close my eyes and sleeping in her.
White, dark red and light blue sergal rub her round stomach. “I hope you will get strong and powerful sergal!”
It didn’t take a while for me to be born. Since, I’m not a normal sergal that you might see. My strength and power are beyond the level of sergal level. War and blood what I maybe obssed.
Commentary: It is amusing how the author decided to use hypnosis, just like story 2, again. It's a simple method for the pred to get the prey but it's one that I usually forget about. When I think of making a story myself, I ask myself the question is the prey going to be willing, unwilling, or willing but under duress. Usually, hypnosis never enters my mind as an option and its refreshing to see this author make use of this kind of method of the pred capturing the prey.
Thank you Biofetish for the engaging short stories.
Next unbirth week I will try to shoutout some longer stories. Thanks for reading.
All four of these stories were written by the same author, at least I think it was the same author as I can't find the links where I originally downloaded these stories from so very long ago. I think the author's name is Biofetish, but I'm not 100% sure as that is also one of the stories' names.
Some of these stories suffer from faulty grammar, I don't think English is the author's first language but nonetheless please try to ignore these faults.
Because I can't find the links, I will just post all four stories below for you guys to read. I Hope you all enjoy them.
Story 1
BioFetish – Wolf
BioFetish is a type of advance factory. There science are beyond the human limitation. They already know how to use the spatial and temporal, not harming their own factory or taking to them to wrong place. Animals that were extinct, myth, or legendary creatures or animals were living right now in their spatial and temporal. They created them from living flesh and soul. Since, they are the first one able to do it. Most of the animals are now evolved during the time. They use the test subject to communicate with this creatures or animals. However, the test subject were never succeed with communicate. They kind of ended up food, rebirth, or they make another one. Sadly, there weren’t any males creatures or animals were become or rebirth into one. Because they senems lack of something, but they don’t know. They seems everything is perfectly now.
You were a test subject. You were inside this very small bright white chamber. You can’t escape in this small bright white chamber. The walls are very thick and refined. You can’t estimate how thick, but surely it somehow like 20 inch thickness or 30 inch thickness. You hear the door slide open. You turn to the doorway. You see a low-level guard standing and asking you come out. You get off the bed and head out the metal door. The guard ask you, follow him. Then, he start walking and you begin start walking. There was a guard behind you and following. You have never seen this place and never had got out from the cell. Everything seems amazing to you. You were walking past few testing room as you begin to hear screaming or moaning from each testing room. Which make you stop? The front guard stop and look at you. Front guard ask you, “Don’t worry? We don’t put any test subject in there unless if you break any rules that we give to you?” You still can’t bear the pains. Front guard still see you in pains. Front guard nods his head to the back guard. He take something from his pocket. It was medical syringe gun and then it inject down your neck. You feel very tired and weak. You can’t think of, but you were in subconscious. Two guards support you on each shoulder and taking you to somewhere.
Then, you hear this screaming up ahead, but you didn’t feel anything. You still tired and weak. Your eyes is minimum open and barely see anything. Soon, you see the light flickering where two guards standing. As they take you over and they inject you something in your neck. Your body slowly fully awake from the subconscious. Then, the door slide open and take you inside the room. They drop you on the floor and both left.
Soon, you close your eyes for bit. Then, you wake up fully and looking around very strangely. You don’t know how you got here so fast? You lean up and looks around the room. It was a forest? You don’t hear anything bird chirping or any other noises out in the forest. It very quiet in here. You stop and already felt being watched somewhere in the forest. You don’t know where, but you quickly stand up. So, you begin to start walking and looking for the way out. As you walks and walks. You don’t see any exit, but seems you feel being walked around in the circle.
You stop and see something on the floor. You crouch down and see very large wolf paw prints. It was larger than regular wolf sized paws. You feel something not right about this large wolf paw prints. You never have seen one, but you heard one of the legend say, “If you ever met this large wolf paw prints. You better run fast or…” as you hear this deep low growling behind you. You know that sound anywhere and you start running quick as you can away from this wolf.
Then, you start to slow down and calm down. You look behind you and see there nothing chasing you. You catching your breath then you turn around. As you quickly jump as you saw something in front of you. You see very large pure white wolf, blue eyes, and the sized were like your size. So, large and you were afraid. You slowly backing away from the pure white wolf. The pure white wolf looking at you. You were afraid by how those eyes looking at you. Soon, the pure white wolf smile and you stop. You didn’t know what is going on. Then, the pure white wolf quickly pounce at you.
You can’t fight back at the very large, heavy pure white wolf. Pure white, wolf give very strong licking at your face. You giggle and begging to stop licking. Pure white wolf did stop licking and ask, “Who are you?” You don’t remember your name. You could see this is a female wolf. You were bit glad to female wolf, but not male wolf type. She smile and give you another strong lick at your face.
She ask you, “To come to her nice, comfort wolf den?” You look very surprise. You refuse. She smile and lean her head bit closer to you. You stop and feeling your both cheeks were bright red. You ask, “Eh… What are you doing?” She give very nice and strong kiss which she send you in love with no matter what gender you are in?” You can’t resist anymore and placing both your hands on her head. She see you were charmed. Then, she let go and ask you, “Want to come to my nice, comfort wolf den?” You slowly speak out, “Yes, wolf?” You get on your feet and climb on her back. As you ride on her back. Then, she tell you, “Hold on me!” She start running very fast. As she zoom and jumping from one place to another. You enjoy the winds blowing against your face.
You can see her large wolf den up ahead. You were smiling and still thinking about the wolf. She stop in front of her large wolf den. She sit down and you slide right off her back. As you landed on your both feet. She stand back up and start heading side. You follow her into her wolf den.
As you were inside her wolf den. You stop and look around her wolf den. Then, you see her standing in the middle of her cave and looking at you. You head over and look at her. She gently ask, “Do you want to be eaten, unbirth, or transform you?” You didn’t say anything, but you can’t really decide which decision?
1. Be Eaten?
She smile and give you very hungrily look. You didn’t move, but you still charmed by her. She open her mouth wide and big. You see her sharp teeth and drooling saliva. You want to be eaten by her. She wait for you climb in her mouth. Since, her mouth wasn’t big for you sit, but you have lay on her tongue instead. She is glad that you accepted it. Though, she still amaze that charmed bond hadn’t broken. She didn’t close her mouth, but she lift her mouth up. You start to feel sliding further in her mouth slowly. She want to have fun with you and giving you plenty time enjoying in her mouth. As you slide further and further as you see the pitch black hole back of her maw. You weren’t afraid, but thinking what is down there? Could it be fun or leading you somewhere? You still charmed by her. She smile and thinking it time for you be in her belly and sleep till tomorrow. You start to slide down the dark pitch black hole. As you were sliding down and muscles squeezing and release on you. You enjoying more and your cheeks already bright red. You begin to smell something and hear something. You didn’t know what is this smell and hearing something. You want to find out what is this smell and hearing. Soon, you feel bit hot rising as you go down further and further. Soon, you see the valve open and your head stick out. You see the wall of muscles and bottom there were some liquid? You wriggle as you fall in the liquid. Liquid didn’t harm you, but rather make very acidic sound on your clothes.
As your whole body entered in the wall of muscles. You had to curl up into a ball and feeling the wall squeezing and releasing on your body.
She look at her large belly and smile. She lay down on her floor and curl up into ball. Soon, she break the charmed spell on you.
You wake up and saw something wasn’t right. You were in the belly and want to beg to get out the wolf stomach. She tell you, “If you keep screaming, I will let you stay in there longer?” You were surprise what she said. As you try to calm down, but you are afraid of the acid. She lay down her head and close her eyes. You wait and wait. You were very tired and close your eyes.
2. Rebirth (unbirth)
You look at her and she turn around. She lift her tail and you walk bit forward. You don’t know what she is going do? She tell you, “I thought ever had a wolf pup? Would mind become one?” You didn’t say anything, but you are interesting something that she is wanting? You nods your head and she smile so happy. You see the flaps opening and you watch she sit her rear on your head. As you feel your head enter into her between the flaps. You enter more and more. You wriggling inside her tunnel of muscles. You feel the muscles pulling you further and further. You just enjoying the feeling and your cheeks already red. Soon, you hear her delightful moaning as you enter more. Soon, you see the valves opening slowly. You wriggle more and more.
As you hear enter into her large womb. You notice isn’t very small, but big for you fit your body fully inside. You push yourself to enter her womb and just thinking having a new life?
Then, your whole body entered into her womb and valve closed. You curl up and thinking how it would to start new? You start to close your eyes as you very tired. She smile and sing very soft, melody song and thinking how it would be good to have a baby wolf pup?
63 days has gone by, you slowly open your eyes. You were beside your mother, nursing. You were a baby black pure wolf.
3. Transformation
She quickly pounce at you and you were pinned to the floor. You didn’t struggle, but she is very heavy. She give you very strong kiss as you were double charmed. But you won’t feel the double charmed affecting you. You feel bit hot under her thick pure white furs. You close your eyes and she let her lip off you. “Are you ready for this painful transformation?” You nods your head and smile at her. She say, “This will be painful!” She open her mouth and bite down at your right arm. You were in pains, but you didn’t scream. You just look at her lovely blue eyes.
She get off you and back up away from you. You lean up and see your right hand’s wolf bite mark. You weren’t bleeding? It very strange. Then, you notice something feeling pains in you. You turn over your body as your hands and feet on the floor. You see your hands start to reshape into paws. It was very dark pure black furs over your hands into paws. Soon, you were quite surprise as you saw your paws. Then, you see the thick, pure black furs spreading up to shoulder. You did feel very weird and bit painful. You start to see some of your clothes weren’t there before you bitten. Only you are wearing is your shirt and pant. You see your feet already became wolf feet paws. You start to feel your mouth and nose stretching forward. As you can see your long, pure black muzzle. Your ears start to sharp pointed ears on top of your head. Then, it covered by the thick, pure black muzzle. You were in the terrible position, that yours back of your legs forming hind legs. It rather very hard and hearing this sound of your bones and muscles changing. Losing the ability walk on both leg. You feel yours both legs growing very thick, pure black furs all over your legs. As your pant to seems to disappear. As it spread more and more. Your head already formed the pure black, wolf head. Your eyes color change to red. Your body is the only remaining that you will be freed from the pains and weird feeling. The thick pure black furs spreading all over your body. Soon, the remaining of your body is completed transformation.
You get back on your feet and look at her. Your height is bit taller than her but she nuzzling you.
Commentary: I liked the SCP like setting of this story and I also liked the multiple endings with ending 2 being my favorite of course. Overall, its a short and sweet vore story.
Story 2
Prey:
I open my eyes slowly, I lean up slowly. It was a sunny day above my head. I stretch… I froze I remember I was sleeping in my house, but how I got into a forest? I slowly get up. I hear something, I froze… I slowly turn around. There was nothing… I start walking again. I can my throat dry… So, I look for any water source.
I walk about 2 hours, feeling my stomach empty and my dry throat. It was very hard to talk with my throat dry. The sun beating down at me, so much that I lower my eyebrows. I am walking with all these sweats losing of my skin layers.
I see a brown stump, I walk over there and seat down. I tilt my head up to the bright sunny day. I see there were no clouds. I can feel very small breeze through my hairs. I relax my feet from soaring and tired. Then, I hear bush rattling behind me. I turn around, I froze and I say “Come out?” A white bunny jump out, I relieve and I turn back around. I quickly scream and fall off the stump. My back of my head hit the hard rock.
I open my eyes slowly. It was so warm and furry. I see a white wolf smiling down at me. I quickly open my eyes and lean up. I turn around, I see her white wolf. She smile at me, I froze when I see her 4 paws from her body and 2 paws from upper body. I whisper “You are a white wolf taur?” She smiles, glaring down at my beautiful black eyes. She whispers “Come here human?” I slowly crawl back away from her. She reach grabs both of my legs. She pulls me closer, as she set her large two white paws on my chest. She whispers “You look beautiful?” I froze… I try to struggle for escaping for large two white paws on my chest. She says “Don’t resist!” Then, I remember a story told me “If you see a white wolf taur, wanting to love and impressing you are beautiful?” I froze, I refuse her offer. She didn’t change, but keep pushing that I’m very beautiful.
Something else she got into her mind, she looks at me aroused by lusty? I froze…. She whispers “You look so perfect!” She grabs me and pull me to her lip while her lip toward me. I struggle harder, but then a gentle kiss on my lip. I froze… My cheeks turn red. I can’t even feel my body of resisting, but pushing me into the part of enjoyment.
I keep reminding myself, don’t fallen in love, but it was too late. My body was already in love with the white wolf taur. She giggle, places her lips on my lips again. Now… my hands just stop struggling and placing around her head. I forget everything and my life that I wish to be with her for rest of my life. She smile more creepily, she say “Do you want to come with me?” My cheeks still red, whisper “Yes, please?” She charmed with her eyes and her smile. Making me just thinking about her.
She grins at me like I was going doing something. She whispers “Do you wish to be my lovely pup?” I stare at motionless… My cheeks slowly calming down…. I was about to refuse her offer when she just kissed me again. Then, I say “Yes, I will your lovely pup?” She smile, say “Don’t struggle!”
She set me back on the floor, she stand up and walk bit forward. She is giggling about something, until I say “My mother?” She frozen, looks surprised that never met anyone would say “My mother?” She smiles, say “Don’t worry, sweetheart?” She knew this is bad, but she have to take him anyway?”
I see her vagina flaps slowly open. I can see me smiling, but I know it was a fake smile.. This charming feeling of love already set me the point of no turning back. I can the flaps slowly touching my head. I slowly feel my body slowly pulling inside to her. I took my fate with it, since there no escaping from her tight squeezing muscles. My head slowly sliding inside her vagina and her flaps still closed... I can feel bit warm and wet.
She is moaning about how excitedly of pulling someone inside her vagina. As I feel more pull and pull. As my head was inside her vagina, very smelly even though it was warm and wet.
I try to look down; I can see it cover up to my chest. I try to pull myself further into her womb. I can feels much better when she moaning more and more. Forcing me to be going with the flow of her body moaning about how excellent.
I can see her womb up ahead; I push myself up to the womb. I can feel the muscles closed on my feet. I knew my fate will be renew and rebirth and restarting all over again. I just want to get this over as I push myself body up and up. She made even more loudly moaning. I feel my soul reach to somewhere my soul can rest easily and restarting. I close my eyes as my body slowly curling up. She pats her belly, her whisper “Sweet dream?” I gently smile.
Pred:
I was sleeping. Then, I slowly open my blue eyes. I slowly stand up and stretching my feet. I feel so excited about something. I’m a female white wolf taur, I usually trick preys into of impressed how their beauty and making them submissive.
I decide to talk a walk around the forest. I run out the cave, look up at the clear sunny day. I can even feel myself want to eat something good. I run down the long path, searching for prey. I smell something… I turn toward the scent. I start running that direction. Then, I stop and smell something more than the scent. I move the bush, leaving a small hole. I see someone lying on the floor. My cheeks immediate turn red, I close the bush. I look down, I giggling about something.
I open the bush, I look again. I start to see him slowly opening his eyes, look very surprised. He was talking about himself. He gets up and looks around. I slowly following and making no sound. I start to feel my throat dry and hunger. So, I wait and watch. I watch the human sit on the stump. I hear bush rattling. He turn around, I slowly come out. I slowly walking toward him, I stop in front of him. He turn back, scream and fall back. I watch him; hit his head back of the ground. I place my two front paws on the stump. I stare down, I feel slightly excitement.
So, I’m thinking what should I do with this lovely human? I look down, thinking of the empty womb? I giggle, so I slowly jump beside him. I sniff the most delicious human. I place my paws around him, put him on my back. I run back toward my cave.
After, a while, I set him on the floor. I sit in front of his head. I look down, with a small smile on my face. I hear him slowly moaning?
I watch him slowly open his eyes. I can see his slightly open eyes, and then fully wake. He lean up, slowly turn around me. I smile.
He slowly crawling back, but I set my two paws on his legs. I pull him closer and closer. I set my two large hands paws on his chest. He froze, look up at me. I look down with a small grin. He starts talking about a story about me? I like the story. I’m thinking making him into submissive? I say “You look so beautiful?” He froze… He was about to refuse the offer…
I slowly reach for my lips toward him. He struggle, but I set my gentle furs on his lip. I see his cheeks turn bright red. I keep kissing him, pouring all the love into him. I let go and look down. I smile down at him; he says “You look perfect?”
He smiles at me back. I say “Do you want to be my lovely pup?” I can see his cheeks slowly cooling down, he was about to refuse then I kiss him again. This time I push him even further of his willpower. I let go my lip, I looks down. He smile, say “Yes, I want to be your pup?”
I get up and walking where my rear is facing at the human. I slowly am pushing my rear toward his head. I can feel the flaps close on his head. I smile, then I slowly pulling him into my vagina. I turn around, feeling excitement. I wish this human just accept his fate. Then, I feel something weird inside me. I look, I see him pushing himself. I smile. I made a soft lusty moaning. I pull him deeper and deeper.
I look back; I see his legs slowly swallow by my flaps. I smile; I can see him curling up. I look down at my stomach; place my paws around my stomach. I whisper “Sweet dream!”
Commentary: Probably the most interesting aspect of this story is how the author manages to tell it twice with each telling being from the perspective of the prey and then the pred. That idea of having a retelling of a vore story from two perspectives is something I haven't seen before and it works well as a way to pad out a short story, I just wonder if it would work for a longer story. You would probably have to have the 2 characters be separated during certain parts of the story in order to not bore the reader with retelling the same events in a longer story. Overall, it was a pretty enjoyable story.
Story 3
You slowly opening your eyes and see something very red and white strange looking furry creature. It had a white surgery mask with red cross in the middle of white surgery mask. As you become full surprise as you could see it had like shark head, hands and feet like rats, body like humanoid, and his eyes were like reptilian. You could see it staring at you like something you are precious.
Then, the strange furry creature raise a bone saw. You look full surprise and try to struggle. You couldn’t because your hands and feet were chained to the surgery table. You struggle more, but it won’t budge. Then, you slowly close your eyes as you smell something very sleepy. Then, you fall asleep.
Meanwhile… You were asleep…
Strange furry creature give small licking a lip. I must eat this human or making him into my lovely newborn sergal? Strange furry creature deciding. Then, strange furry sergal begin to smile and grab the strange looking syringe. As strange furry creature inject down at her right shoulder. She scream very loudly and painful. She start to calm down and panting very heavily. She can feel her mouth and rear becoming more elastic and enough to take you in her body by swallowing or unbirth you.
She refuse to surgery your body. She need really eat or making newborn sergal. She smile and still can’t really decide now.
She start to hear the voice behind her, “You have to decide on your own… I can’t chose it for you?” She shout, “Who are you?” “I’m nobody important. Just chose?” Very quiet and soft voice. She nods her head and turn to you. She lean over and give gently lick your right side of your cheek. She tasting how sweet and tasty you can be. But however, her rear acting very strange and similar how you feel about your taste. Taking you might be another good idea. So, she can begin her sergal civilization.
You slowly wake up from the sleeping medicine she gave you. You notice your hands and feet were freely. You turn to the strange looking furry staring at you with those red eyes. You feel very scared, but you manage say, “What are you?” She speak softly, “I’m a sergal. I wonder you can…” as her cheeks slightly turn red. You say, “What’s wrong?” She turn away from you and whispering, “It just that” as her stomach growl. You look surprise and say, “Don’t tell me?” She smile, but she say, “I must resist.”
You can see her resisting of eating you. You turn to the double metal door behind her. She stop and whisper, “Or… She look at her rear.” You look confuse and realizing something. She want to take you into her lovely womb.” You can’t really decide now.
Then, the voice echoing through the surgery room, “1. Be eaten… or 2. Be unbirth?”
1. Be eaten
The voice sounded familiar to you. You shout out, “Enigmatic-Medic?” Then, you hear giggling, “I’m not Enigmatic-Medic? I’m Enigmatic-Phantom Medic?” You look full surprise as you were really talking to a ghost. You turn, noticing her body and hands were struggling and squeezing. You ask, “What wrong?” She lift her head up and open her mouth wide and big. You saw those sharp teeth and back of her throat. You say, “Don’t say?” She quickly grabs you and yank you to the floor. She lay her body on top of you. Her hands were on the side of your head. She open her mouth and pull your head into her mouth. You try to struggle, but you can’t. The smell make you so relax and enjoying. She pull you even further in her mouth. As you start to slide to the dark end of her throat. You can feel the teeth scraping your clothes and ripping it apart.
Soon, you begin to pull further and further more. As you begin to start entering her throat. You can feel the muscles squeezing and releasing you. As it trying pulling you further. You can feel her body got off you and you really enjoying the fun of being her throat.
You pulling even further and further down through her muscles wall. You can’t bear the scent and feeling over your body. Though, some of your clothes still remain on. You start to feel you are getting warmer and warmer. You could see the light at the end of her muscles chamber. You slowly close your eyes and…
Your body plop into her stomach’s acid and stomach squeezing you. You were out cold due to lack of oxygen. Somehow, the acid wasn’t killing nor the lack of oxygen. It made you and fall deep sleep.
As she finally swallow down your legs and close her mouth. She see her belly grow very large and budge. She rub her stomach and whisper, “Don’t worry? I will let you out?” She didn’t know you were out cold. She climb on the metal surgery table. She curl up and fall asleep.
After, long while, she slowly wake up. She stop and noticing somebody standing in front of her. She see her hands and feet were chained up to metal surgery table. Her stomach still large and budge. Though, she can see those eyes were like nightmare. Left eyes were crimson red and right eyes were shinning blue. He slowly raise the bone saw and show very insanity smile at her. She scream very loudly!
(The End? Silly… I’m not finished!)
2. Be unbirth
You see her head lift up, showing very bright red cheeks. You stop and your cheeks turn bright red also. She grab you from the surgery table and dragging you to her room. She throw you on the bed and you look full surprise. She smiling at you. She climb on the bed and pin you to her bed. She give you very nice kiss on your lip. You look even more surprise as she kissed you. You ask, “What…. Are you doing?” You can’t really resist the love that kissed you. You feel you want to be her very close. She yawn and sleep on your chest. Your hands wraps around her back and smiling that she loved you. You start to close your eyes while as you staring at her. You closed your eyes completely.
Later, you slowly opening your eyes and your hands and feet tied up close. You see her, “Her rear facing at you?” Your cheeks turn bright red as you could see her oral exit. You ask, “What are you planning to do?” She whisper, “Making a newborn sergal?” You froze and try to struggle. She stick her rear into your nose then, you could see something open. As it open big and start to engulf your head. You begin to pulling into her body and she moan very loudly. You can’t even see, but you can feel the muscles squeezing your body. You pulling even further and further more. You can’t move your hands and feet also. Though, you did squirming in her body. You begin to feel sign of lack of oxygen. You pull further and further. You slowly close your eyes and your head enter into womb. Then, your body start to curl up into her womb. While, your legs still hanging out from her rear. She engulf your legs and pulling through the dark chamber of muscles. She stare at her large belly and rubbing it. She whisper, “Oh… Dear, I guess sergal civilization will begin?”
She start to leave the hospital.
Commentary: Like the first story this one has multiple endings, but it was kind of cool how one ending actually lead to the pred being captured and tortured by an unknown third party. Usually in most vore stories the pred is kind of this unbeatable godlike figure and it was interesting to see a situation where there was a bigger fish was ready to make her the victim of this story.
Story 4
Sergal’s Newborn
I open my eyes slowly. I begin to look around as I see my whole body parts were cuffed up to the wall. I was the only one in here. I feel something tingling in my stomach. Something is telling me this isn’t a very good place to be. I try to struggle, but the cuffed tighten each time I struggle. I didn’t struggle anymore, but rather feeling how tightening right now.
I hear the door open as I turn to the right. A bright, pure white, light blue, and dark blue strange creature that had shark head, reptilian eyes, hands and feet were like rats, and a humanoid body. The moment, the sergal turn to me. My eyes widen and feeling my heart pumping rapidly. I feel something isn’t right as she start to grin at me with her sharp teeth.
She is walking up to me, study closely at me. Seeing how perfect body shape and my pale skin. I was very nervous and scared as she see me. She begins to speak. “I want you to be my dear sergal son!” I widen my eyes. I shout at her face. No! She shows her nasty grin and grabs my bottom jaw. As she pulls my jaw down wide and big as she could do. Then, she quickly put something in my mouth and forces me to swallow it.
It tastes so awful bitter. I want to vomit, but I couldn’t. I look at her as my body begins to feel so weak. My eyes were staring at her slowly. She pushes something as they cuffed release me onto the floor. I lift my head up and look at her. My both cheeks blush bright red. I am moaning, “Sergal, please take me.” I can’t bear how beautiful and the urging of her wants to take me.
She begins to talk to me. “Do you want to be my dear sergal son?” I shout at her. YES! She smile and sit on the floor and open her legs up. She grabs the side of my head and pull closer to her rear. My eyes were amaze and unbearable feeling in me. As the flaps open up and it feels it close to my head. The smell is quite bit awful, but it feeling in my heart something I have dreamt all this time. As the muscles begin to work and pulling me further. I was inside her entrance of pussy beginning to groaning and moaning. She even moans how good that the human going to become her son anytime soon. As the muscles begin to pull me as my whole head was inside. The inside was very large and so much that this weird smell.
I feel my body begin to enter her pussy. As I can see all the way down her muscles there was a valve waiting to be open. As I try to squirm and wriggle to reach the flap. In my heart feel the new life has come.
I want to reach to her womb now. As I squirm even more and she let out more moaning and groaning that I may hear. My body has submitted to her and nothing I can do now. The pill she gave me was submissive pill. As its temporary submissive feeling, but there is no hope of coming back once your body has done something that you don’t want to. As I snap out and widening my eyes. As I want to scream, but the smell and unbearable feeling rubbing across my skin so weird and sensitive.
I wasn’t able to resist the pleasure inside her and letting out this moaning and groaning as I going slowly through her tunnel of muscles. I want to go back another way out, but her paws set in my rear. As it feels her pushing me further and I don’t want to start a new life. As I can see the valve is getting closer and closer. My whole body has already entered. My hands were at the back and I struggle to get one of my hands in front of me. I can feel I’m getting closer and closer to a new life. Something I can’t resist, but now I can’t think any now. I don’t think begging won’t work. As I feel so weak and tired. Not much oxygen in her for now. I fall asleep in her pussy tunnel to her womb.
As she pushes more as my legs start to enter. She still moaning and groaning. Even though, she will be much happier and finally had a son so long time. As she tries to engulf my whole legs in her pussy as my right hand begin to touch the valve as it's open. My right hand enters her womb and then my head. As my body begins to fall onto her womb while my legs still at the back her pussy going through. Then, my legs begin to enter her womb and rest of my body is in her womb. Not the only thing is happening right now. A cord slowly goes under my shirt and attach to my belly. The clothes of mine begin to start to slowly disappear. Leaving my whole skin pale white, but still covering slightly black, red, and dark blue. At my height shrinking to the size of sergal kid. My head begins to form a shark head, body become humanoid, and hands and feet were like rats. I slowly open my eyes, memory has gone, but the heart in me still remains same. My eyes were reptilian eyes. I don’t know anything now. In this warm and comfortable womb is better than outside. I close my eyes and sleeping in her.
White, dark red and light blue sergal rub her round stomach. “I hope you will get strong and powerful sergal!”
It didn’t take a while for me to be born. Since, I’m not a normal sergal that you might see. My strength and power are beyond the level of sergal level. War and blood what I maybe obssed.
Commentary: It is amusing how the author decided to use hypnosis, just like story 2, again. It's a simple method for the pred to get the prey but it's one that I usually forget about. When I think of making a story myself, I ask myself the question is the prey going to be willing, unwilling, or willing but under duress. Usually, hypnosis never enters my mind as an option and its refreshing to see this author make use of this kind of method of the pred capturing the prey.
Thank you Biofetish for the engaging short stories.
Next unbirth week I will try to shoutout some longer stories. Thanks for reading.