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Week38:Unbirth&Rebirth Story Shoutouts:Bunny, Chocobo,Dragon
4 months ago
Hey thanks for showing up again for another week of vore that leads to rebirth. Its unbirth week and as usual I have three stories to share.
Our first story is Borrowed and Burrowed by Saline the Shaymin
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/25020380/
Commentary: I liked the inverse predator premise the author had, where a rabbit is the pred and a wolf is the prey, but I kind of feel like the premise is wasted as the wolf doesn't have any lines in the story and is unconscious during the vore process which means the prey really could have been anyone of any species and the story wouldn't have changed. Besides that, I liked the chat the pred had with their mother and how it was kind of a birds and the bees or puberty kind of conversation with the mother explaining to the daughter how she was born a pred.
Thanks for the cool story, Saline the Shaymin
The next story shoutout is A Life Rewark by blue_mystery_wolf
https://www.sofurry.com/view/1786689/guest
Commentary: I thought the way the prey fought the pred mid unbirth was pretty awesome, alot of stories have it where the prey simpily can't fight the force of the contractions and seeing a prey actually put up a fight made the story feel more realistic. Also liked the nice piece of foreshadowing the author had with the protag finding abandoned pieces of clothes. Lastly, I loved the how the author slowly erased the protag's mind shortly after hatching. It's kind of an interesting way to still have the protag still be able to have some thoughts and interactions during the ending chapter while still having the whole, their starting life over again mental change.
Thank you blue_mystery_wolf for hatching that story out of your mind and sharing it with us.
Lastly is Dragon Light by Espeon_Master_Espo
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32285259/
Commentary: I think the main thing that drew me to this story is all the implications the ending had with its large time skip such as how dragons and perhaps other mythological creatures now roam an apocalyptic world. It very much reminds me of the video game named legendary, in it a guy opens pandora's box and accidently unleashes all of the Greek mythological creatures onto the modern world. I recommend giving that game a try, it won't blow your skirt up, but it was fun to me. Anyway, I also liked the implication that Katie went on an unbirth rampage and manganged to transform another human to be her mate so he can fertilize all the people she unbirthed.
Thank you Espeon_Master_Espo for the world changing story
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Legendary_(video_game)
Bonus Soft Vore Rebirth Story
Our bonus soft vore rebirth story this week is Ravenous Fertility by Silentium97
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31202213/
Commentary: This story had a very unique concept where the pred is kind of stuck in an ouroboros kind of situation where they have to eat to feed all of the fetuses inside of them but each person they eat also becomes a fetus, so they are stuck in a never-ending cycle of constantly having to eat. It would be interesting to see if anyone could make a longer story based off this concept one day, but I did overall enjoy this short story.
Thank you Silentium97 for the story
fur affinity only allows you to have 23 journals before it starts to delete the old ones. If you want to read any of the old shoutouts you can find them on my deviant art, link below.
https://www.deviantart.com/deathjump90/posts
Lastly, I want to announce I will be gone for 2-3 weeks so I won't be able to do any shoutouts during that time. I will either be on vacation or I will be home taking care of my dog as I just discovered she is suffering from kidney failure and whether or not I go on the vacation I planned to take depends on how well her treatment goes. So far it doesn't look good, I'm really depressed, my little
Chihuahua mix, named Olive Oil, is one of the best dogs I have ever had and the thought of losing her is devastating. If you are religious, could you please offer a pray to help my dog feel better I would appreciate it.
(Update): She has sadly passed; her heart gave out. Its been less than a day and I really miss her.
Our first story is Borrowed and Burrowed by Saline the Shaymin
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/25020380/
Commentary: I liked the inverse predator premise the author had, where a rabbit is the pred and a wolf is the prey, but I kind of feel like the premise is wasted as the wolf doesn't have any lines in the story and is unconscious during the vore process which means the prey really could have been anyone of any species and the story wouldn't have changed. Besides that, I liked the chat the pred had with their mother and how it was kind of a birds and the bees or puberty kind of conversation with the mother explaining to the daughter how she was born a pred.
Thanks for the cool story, Saline the Shaymin
The next story shoutout is A Life Rewark by blue_mystery_wolf
https://www.sofurry.com/view/1786689/guest
Commentary: I thought the way the prey fought the pred mid unbirth was pretty awesome, alot of stories have it where the prey simpily can't fight the force of the contractions and seeing a prey actually put up a fight made the story feel more realistic. Also liked the nice piece of foreshadowing the author had with the protag finding abandoned pieces of clothes. Lastly, I loved the how the author slowly erased the protag's mind shortly after hatching. It's kind of an interesting way to still have the protag still be able to have some thoughts and interactions during the ending chapter while still having the whole, their starting life over again mental change.
Thank you blue_mystery_wolf for hatching that story out of your mind and sharing it with us.
Lastly is Dragon Light by Espeon_Master_Espo
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32285259/
Commentary: I think the main thing that drew me to this story is all the implications the ending had with its large time skip such as how dragons and perhaps other mythological creatures now roam an apocalyptic world. It very much reminds me of the video game named legendary, in it a guy opens pandora's box and accidently unleashes all of the Greek mythological creatures onto the modern world. I recommend giving that game a try, it won't blow your skirt up, but it was fun to me. Anyway, I also liked the implication that Katie went on an unbirth rampage and manganged to transform another human to be her mate so he can fertilize all the people she unbirthed.
Thank you Espeon_Master_Espo for the world changing story
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Legendary_(video_game)
Bonus Soft Vore Rebirth Story
Our bonus soft vore rebirth story this week is Ravenous Fertility by Silentium97
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31202213/
Commentary: This story had a very unique concept where the pred is kind of stuck in an ouroboros kind of situation where they have to eat to feed all of the fetuses inside of them but each person they eat also becomes a fetus, so they are stuck in a never-ending cycle of constantly having to eat. It would be interesting to see if anyone could make a longer story based off this concept one day, but I did overall enjoy this short story.
Thank you Silentium97 for the story
fur affinity only allows you to have 23 journals before it starts to delete the old ones. If you want to read any of the old shoutouts you can find them on my deviant art, link below.
https://www.deviantart.com/deathjump90/posts
Lastly, I want to announce I will be gone for 2-3 weeks so I won't be able to do any shoutouts during that time. I will either be on vacation or I will be home taking care of my dog as I just discovered she is suffering from kidney failure and whether or not I go on the vacation I planned to take depends on how well her treatment goes. So far it doesn't look good, I'm really depressed, my little
Chihuahua mix, named Olive Oil, is one of the best dogs I have ever had and the thought of losing her is devastating. If you are religious, could you please offer a pray to help my dog feel better I would appreciate it.
(Update): She has sadly passed; her heart gave out. Its been less than a day and I really miss her.
