Personally, I haven't read any of your poems that I haven't liked.

oh really

Yes really

I think they are wonderful, and look forward to them.

thank you my friend

they're awesome

*hugs*

They are very moving and wonderful! Keep up the good work!

You are always welcome. Your poems are very good. They inspire, cause awe to the senses, heart and mind. Now your style is very unique and rather unusual, but that doe not mean they are bad. In fact it creates tact and interest to your rhetoric. Your style lacks form, rhyme, rhythm, and heavy metaphoric linguistic structure sometimes but not all. These however are not ever important to the purpose of poetry. Which is to express pabulum of the human condition in existence which you do finer then many. You are a very awesome poet Devon and let nobody else tell you other wise.

well, I tink they are cool, lil pieces of your sould that you put in words

*hugs tight and smiles with joy* thank Big Big Bro

poetry is subjective Devon - you either like it or not depending on who you are and what you like. Yours is fine.

*hugs...

V.

I'll take those words and use the words u said proudly *hugs tight*

*gives him a hug...

V.

Just do it the way you want. I think it's good.

Thank u my friend

They are ok most of the time. As in any writer there is always room to improve.

Come on now D8 I know u have some poems u think of
King MeanBeard *hugs tight* And your a awesome friend
*snuggles*

From the first time you started, I have seen them get better

Thank u my Friend *hugs*

yer welcome, and I knew you would get better ^^