A Deleted scene from How i went from Straight A student to..
16 years ago
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So....how many T-virus zombies does it take to cause the end of the world?
I am currently working on the latest chapter of How i went from Straight A student to Strait A slut and decided not to take a certain scene in this direction so i figured i'd post it on here and let you guys see it. So here it is...a scene from How i went from Straight A student to Strait A slut that never made the cut!
"Oh, it's just the slut." The third wolf remarked chuckling. The first wolf however stopped thrusting into her and looked over at the fox.
"Look Alice. You know the rules. You let us have our way and we fuck you when ever you want us. So go about your way." The first wolf said looking at Alice causally.
"Not this one! Get your cock out of her this second Merrick or I'll cut it off!" Alice said and flung her arms outwards to to her sides baring all five claws on both paws as she did so.
Merrick then withdrew himself from Ericka and gave the cue for the other wolves to drop her."You walk on our turf...and demand us to let this female go and you think you can get away with it?" Merrick said baring claws of his own.
"Teh, You really want to pick a fight with me?" Alice said as she saw the two other wolves bare claws of their own.
Ericka at this point stood up wearily and looked at Alice then to the wolves."She's outmatched....there's no way she can take them on." Ericka thought to herself.
Alice looked at all three wolves and then back to Ericka who has finally stood up."You okay coony?" Alice asked not taking her gaze off the three wolves.
"No, I'm not....they raped me!" Ericka nearly shrieked with tears still streaming from her eyes.
Alice's eyes flashed towards the three wolves at this statement. "
And this is were i decided"Nah..not gonna take it in this direction and took it out of the chapter...i figured taking it in this direction would hinder Alice's nice image and i didn't want that. so i hope you enjoyed this! and sorry for my lack of updating! i am currently working on it right now! will publish as soon as i am done!^^
"Oh, it's just the slut." The third wolf remarked chuckling. The first wolf however stopped thrusting into her and looked over at the fox.
"Look Alice. You know the rules. You let us have our way and we fuck you when ever you want us. So go about your way." The first wolf said looking at Alice causally.
"Not this one! Get your cock out of her this second Merrick or I'll cut it off!" Alice said and flung her arms outwards to to her sides baring all five claws on both paws as she did so.
Merrick then withdrew himself from Ericka and gave the cue for the other wolves to drop her."You walk on our turf...and demand us to let this female go and you think you can get away with it?" Merrick said baring claws of his own.
"Teh, You really want to pick a fight with me?" Alice said as she saw the two other wolves bare claws of their own.
Ericka at this point stood up wearily and looked at Alice then to the wolves."She's outmatched....there's no way she can take them on." Ericka thought to herself.
Alice looked at all three wolves and then back to Ericka who has finally stood up."You okay coony?" Alice asked not taking her gaze off the three wolves.
"No, I'm not....they raped me!" Ericka nearly shrieked with tears still streaming from her eyes.
Alice's eyes flashed towards the three wolves at this statement. "
And this is were i decided"Nah..not gonna take it in this direction and took it out of the chapter...i figured taking it in this direction would hinder Alice's nice image and i didn't want that. so i hope you enjoyed this! and sorry for my lack of updating! i am currently working on it right now! will publish as soon as i am done!^^
nero9295
~nero9295
Its alright it will be well worth it when it comes out. But I guess It was a good idea not to include this. I like drama as much as the next guy but I for see a to much of it went down that road. My opinon anyways.
pikachuninetails
~pikachuninetails
OP
it will still include the rape scene,however the how relations with the wolves is removed. TRUST ME...there's a reason for this...^^
nero9295
~nero9295
I was mainly talking about the relations between the alice and the wolves. But thats all good. Now to read your other stories
pikachuninetails
~pikachuninetails
OP
let me make a suggestion as to where to read them: http://deathsia.sofurry.com/ my SF account. it's ten times more organized there than here^^
nero9295
~nero9295
Thanks
Ryuusin
~reocoshin
looking foward to the next chapter
pikachuninetails
~pikachuninetails
OP
hehe glad to hear it!*goes back to writing*
the-pale-tailed-fox
!the-pale-tailed-fox
well its great i think and if u dont choose the rape part thats ok i guess at least itll turn out great since ive read all the other chapters and there awesome so i have complete faith in ur writing talents
pikachuninetails
~pikachuninetails
OP
it will be included and there's a reason for it^^ i RARELY write rape scenes but when i do there is a GOOD REASON for it^^
the-pale-tailed-fox
!the-pale-tailed-fox
well good luck i have a story u might want to take a look at and see if theres anythig good about it i want to know if im going in the right direction and i have part two ill be uploading tomorow every nite i will have parts for this story and chapter one is almost over one more part after the one im posting tomorow
pikachuninetails
~pikachuninetails
OP
i'm busy enough with my own writing...take on a second....*brain shortfuses*
the-pale-tailed-fox
!the-pale-tailed-fox
that allright if ur busy then dont dont want to pressure u but anyways hope this story goes great;)P
sutherncross2006
~sutherncross2006
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
pikachuninetails
~pikachuninetails
OP
lol your Icon is epic! lmao!!!!XD
sutherncross2006
~sutherncross2006
It pretty much sums up my expression whenever I log into FA and see all the amazing things people write/draw.
gfiff4132
~gfiff4132
it was a well laid out scene but your right it does get a bit dark
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