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Babyfur Comic: Candidate Screening
15 years ago
swift_fox
keeperofjunk
yoshi000
kitazariThis is for the above people only, I would like each of you to write my a story for three panels only of comic, it must involve my character Yami (ref: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2684986/ He's curious and shy and also a sissy) and it can involve any character of yours or your creation.
The theme for the first comic will be a fresh start, if any of you have questions then reply here or send me a note, the one I deem the best will be working with me on the comic as my writer and will recieve a 50% stake in it, unsuccessful candidates will still get their comic made as a thanks for trying so there's no real losers here, looking forward to the ideas :3
Panel #1:
Yami sits on the floor looking curiously up and to the left, in front of a piece of furniture stocked with diapers, both loose and in bags; a diaper changing table. The lower part of the caretaker is seen to the left part of the panel. You can only see Yami from maybe the top of his diaper up.
Perhaps the sound of a "rrrrip" as a diaper tape is removed and/or a "crinkle, crinkle" as a clean diaper is opened up. It's mostly a silent visual panel, but we want to suggest to the reader that a diaper is being changed.
Panel #2:
Swift sits on the floor, looking curiously up and to the right, in front off the same changing table. The lower portion of the same caretaker is seen on the right part of the panel. Similar to the first panel, all you can see of Swift is the top of his diaper on up.
Show similar sounds as in the first panel as it too is a silent, visual panel offering the suggestion to the reader that Yami's diaper is being changed.
Panel #3:
Scene showing full views of Swift on the left and and Kami on the right sitting on the floor with a few toys around them. They both look happy in their clean and dry diapers.
Yami askes, "Clean diaper?"
Swift answers, "Clean diaper. Check!"
Yami asks, "Ready for Adventure?"
Swift answers, "Ready and willin' Kami!"
Yami gets the last word in, "Then let's go!"
I don't know if you want to use a cub lisp or not, so I opted not to write it that way. Sometimes that becomes distracting to the general reader.
Panel 1: Yami looks in through a door and see’s young Volsar sitting on the carpeted floor making something. Volsar’s back is to him, though Yami is very curious as to what he is doing, so he asks shyly.
Yami: “Umm…Volsar. What are you doing?”
Volsar replies: “It’s done!
Panel 2: Volsar has stood up and turned around and in his outstretched paw he has a baby bottle, but it is longer and has the sucking part on both ends.
Yami: “What is it?”
Volsar: “I call it, the Friend maker. It’s for people who want to meet new friends. If you share your milk with someone, shouldn’t they be your friend?”
Panel 3: Volsar and Yami are sitting across from one another on the carpet, each sucking on one end of the bottle. Sucking noises are coming from them. Each has a thought bubble popping up from their head.
Yami: “This really is nice.”
Volsar: “I’m going to be so popular.”
*Afternote*
Young Volsar: Roughly equivalent to 4 years old, but as a psychic, he is very brilliant. He generally wears a purple colored diaper and nothing else.
I kinda streatched the Fresh start idea. The idea was that Volsar would be making a fresh start and become more popular.
Panel 1: Yami is put in a play mat in a daycare play room, where Yami is facing Yoshi, who's trying to some stairs like thing out of blocks with pics of animals, numbers, and letters on them with colors of the rainbow.
Yami: Hello, what are you doing?
Yoshi: Trying to get some cookies. The grown-ups like to put them where I can't get them.
Yami: Oh, cool. *giggles*
Panel 2: Yoshi blocks falls over as he try to get on top of them, landing on his diapered butt. Not crying from doing a lot of times. Yami walk over and try to see how Yoshi is doing.
Yami: You ok?
Yoshi: I'm fine, been doing it a lot of times now.
Panel 3: Yoshi pulls out a few cookies that he kept there for later from his last job. Yami taking it and eats it happliy, looking around at the other cubs.
Yami: So, you do this a lot?
Yoshi: Yup, I'm a big pain and get a lot of times outs. But the cookies is a good thing to go for it.
If you want me to try and fix thing, just tell me.
HOW DOES THAT MAKE YOU FEEEEEEEEEEEL!
anyway they are all cute storys. ;3 just my two cents.
Amidst a desolate sprawl of a city, grey and cold concrete, save maybe a few lights, a moogle loooks up from his push-chair, and points at the shooting-star above, in the perfectly clear night sky.
Yami "Looky!"
Panel 2]
The City is suddenly ablaze! In the middle of the city, three Clan Hrothgar Class Dropships come to a thunderous landing, scortching all the surrounding buildings. People scream, things burn and explode.
Panel 3]
A half/half panel shows the front of a Mad-Cat class Clan Mech within the Hrothgar, emblazoned in the Crescent Hawks colours, the other half showing a grey bunny in the red lighting of a powered down cockpit, reaching out to press a button.
Ethan "Black lance, Starting up! Weapons hot!"