Working on meh buuk, needeth feed bak.
15 years ago
I'm doing writing for a prayer/hymn that will become common in my story's setting, and want your opinion on how it sounds in your head as you read the dialect.
So-phro-synehhhh,
Pho-ro-neheh-siiis,
Di-kai-o-synehhh,
An-dre-reh-ee-ahhh...
Mne-moh-seeenehhh-ehh-ahh,
Eu-mo-ee-ah-ehhhh...
What dost thou thinketh? :3
So-phro-synehhhh,
Pho-ro-neheh-siiis,
Di-kai-o-synehhh,
An-dre-reh-ee-ahhh...
Mne-moh-seeenehhh-ehh-ahh,
Eu-mo-ee-ah-ehhhh...
What dost thou thinketh? :3
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So, what did you like about it?
Anything you need help with? I'm not sure I can do much, but I can give moral support!
*Giggle* MrPretztail's SO strong!
*Returning to being serious, MrParaduo begins lightly punching the back with the side of his fist while with a basic tempo, before attempting a soft but rapid chopping menuever around the shoulder blades and spine*
What specifically do you have in mind anyway? :)
I would appreciate it if you drew Trock. ( http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3526436 I'm pretty sure you know what he looks like, but I wanted to show you anyways XD ) You can draw him eating someone or not if you want, I don't mind either way.