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Dino and Rex, 3rd draft D:
15 years ago
Well hello there!
As many of you will know (or find out right now) I'm enrolled in a creative writing course at RMIT Melbourne... in Awwwstraya!
This semester we are working on novels in a sorta sit around and workshop it kinda way. We have to hand in an excerpt from a work in progress. Seeing as Just Another Murder seems to be in a bit of a Jam at the moment (pun :P) I pitched Dino and Rex to the class, they really liked the idea!
Throughout this semester I'm gonna be attempting to get motivated to get a third draft happening, lots more detail, lots more development of characters and more professional time transitions.... as apposed to "In the last episode"
The naive thing to say would be "this draft is going to get published" but I do have a good feeling about this one, you never know, I might end up getting sued for plagerising myself once people find the second draft up here, that would be funny.
Aaaanyway, the reason I'm posting this here is to hopefully get some feedback on the second draft, "cool story" is nice but real hard hitting critique is what I'm chasing. Get a comment in on the story itself or this journal and you never know, you might end up seeing it in some sleazy second hand bookstore someday
Totally ambitious eh?
~Dino
As many of you will know (or find out right now) I'm enrolled in a creative writing course at RMIT Melbourne... in Awwwstraya!
This semester we are working on novels in a sorta sit around and workshop it kinda way. We have to hand in an excerpt from a work in progress. Seeing as Just Another Murder seems to be in a bit of a Jam at the moment (pun :P) I pitched Dino and Rex to the class, they really liked the idea!
Throughout this semester I'm gonna be attempting to get motivated to get a third draft happening, lots more detail, lots more development of characters and more professional time transitions.... as apposed to "In the last episode"
The naive thing to say would be "this draft is going to get published" but I do have a good feeling about this one, you never know, I might end up getting sued for plagerising myself once people find the second draft up here, that would be funny.
Aaaanyway, the reason I'm posting this here is to hopefully get some feedback on the second draft, "cool story" is nice but real hard hitting critique is what I'm chasing. Get a comment in on the story itself or this journal and you never know, you might end up seeing it in some sleazy second hand bookstore someday
Totally ambitious eh?
~Dino
