Maybe you could just post each individual story with all its chapters. Posting every chapter individually will take up a lot of space on your FA account, making your watchers surf through the stories to find your artwork, if they're not interested in you literary work. If you want to keep the chapters separate, instead of clumping them together into their respecitive stories, I'd say post a link instead. I will most definitely read as many of them as I can and offer whatever constructive feedback I think would be useful.

I couldn't do that. I'm writing 1 chapter at a time and it takes me awhile to get around to actually writing something, even though I have the series complete in my head. So, 1 vote for link, which I also think is the best idea, as well. :) I appreciate your help hun! *snugs tight* Thank you so much for watching me here at this account. I really hope you enjoy my stories. They are not so much about plot as they are about character development. In fact, my series, "The Xixitsu's" doesn't have a plot at all! It's like a huge written soap opera and you watch their lives as they grow and get older. "Kavua," however, does have a plot. So I guess I'll just upload 3 chapters of each series and link to the rest. :) Thanks hun!

Cool. I enjoy helping where I can. And where abouts would this link be?

They're on the website I have linked on the front of this page. However, I'd hold off on reading them now. I decided to re-edit the stories again and then reupload them. XD A writer's work is never done. You know how it goes. I'll upload the first 3 chapters of each story here and then link from there. When I make a link to a story, I'll post a journal entry about it. I really don't have too much written. Dealing with work, life, and my SpiritCreations account, it's hard to find time to write, albiet my passion. I enjoy writing even more than I do art. :) Currently, this is what I have:

Kavua - 6 chapters written (out of 23)
The Xixitsu's - 1 chapter (out of 23... I forgot the beginning of the story since I always concentrated on book 4-6 the most XD)
Rise of the Doragon 1 chapter (out of 23)
Way of the Warrior - Again, 1 chapter (out of 23)

Kavua is the one I'm concentrating on the most. It's been getting a 5/5 star rating on yiffstar...and that's without any sexy in it. Plus, a have a certain someone *cough  rew cough* who'll beat my ass if I don't finish book 1 soon. XD

Wow, I thought you already had it all done and written, but having it planned out before hand must be aggravating. I hate having ideas for stories cooking in my head all the time. Sounds like you know where the story's going, though. I'll hold off reading and critiquing for now, but I'm still sneaking over to Yiffstar to read some of your work=D I'll keep an eye out for your journal.

I'm going up upload Chapter 1 of Kavua in just a bit. I polished it up a bit last night. I recommend reading up the polished version instead of the yiffstar once. Plus, the formatting on yiffstar sucks. XD What I do is I create characters and their lives. For many years, in this case 7 years (as I began writing last year), I roleplayed and acted out the scenes by myself, usually during the night when everyone was asleep. This way, I got a feel for the script and their emotions towards the other characters. This helped me create them to be realistic and personal. Plus, it's a lot of fun. :) Once I feel the script is worthy, I write it down into a book.

I'll wait for your post, then.

The way I roleplay is by writing, although I never really get beyond two or three characters. IRL, people ask me how I come up with my standup routines (for other comedians). It's actually pretty simple for me, just like any other form of writing. I just take two characters, put them together in my mind, and see what kind of funny stuff they come up with. I bet you can appreciate the truth in "books writing themselves". After I finish writing something, I often look back on it in retrospect and am amazed by what I wrote. It's kinda surreal writing something and feeling that disconnect from it afterwards, but maybe I'm just wierd like that.

I know what you mean. I look back at my stories and go "Holy shit" sometimes. I don't feel disconnected though, but I can understand that surreal feeling. :) The roleplaying is my favorite part, but it can be tricky when I have to RP multiple characters at the same time.

*beats ass*

LOL! XD

I don't think i've ever read any of your stuff, but since i've been reading Jay Naylor's stuff i've been wanting to see more variety. Plus it helps inspire me on the story line for my comic series.