Preview of a hippo vore story
15 years ago
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Hungry Hippo!
By: Weh
I move about and try and get comfortable...it's about the only thing I can do in here. I canhear the water rushing past me through layers and layers of flesh. I've long since given up hops of ever seeing the sun again or of eating anything other than the things this beast eats. Every so often I get outraged by the sheer audacity: I scream and pound against the walls, saying things like "What? An entire bat wasn't good enough for you!?!" The nature of these outbursts depresses me enough that only eating can calm me back down somewhat...and then that
depresses me even more! Why couldn't I have been eaten by a dog or something? At least then I'd hear more than water water water.
I was swimming about inna nearby lake. Why, when I have wings? Well flying gets boring every once in a while, you know? So I was just swimming about (in the nude mind you, it feels so much better ^A^) when all of a sudden I hear a splash not to far from where I was. I just shrugged it off and assumed that some other creature decided to go for a swim. I continued with an admittedly awkward doggy paddle, screeping happily. This was the perfect weather for a good swim! There was no possible way that today wouldn't be one of the best days ever!
This continued for a good half hour or so until I felt something bump against my feet. I turned around, just in time to registed a large hippo-ish maw opened nice and wide. "Screep!" I swam all the faster, my wings too wet for flight. I'd just have to make it to land and go from there.
With a sudden burst of energy and luck I somehow managed to put a good ten feet between me and the hippo...looking back on it maybe he was just playing a game with me. Maybe he was in control the entire time. Well, it hardly matters now, huh?
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Theres some more that's been done since I wrote that but I figure that's a good place to stop for a preview :3
By: Weh
I move about and try and get comfortable...it's about the only thing I can do in here. I canhear the water rushing past me through layers and layers of flesh. I've long since given up hops of ever seeing the sun again or of eating anything other than the things this beast eats. Every so often I get outraged by the sheer audacity: I scream and pound against the walls, saying things like "What? An entire bat wasn't good enough for you!?!" The nature of these outbursts depresses me enough that only eating can calm me back down somewhat...and then that
depresses me even more! Why couldn't I have been eaten by a dog or something? At least then I'd hear more than water water water.
I was swimming about inna nearby lake. Why, when I have wings? Well flying gets boring every once in a while, you know? So I was just swimming about (in the nude mind you, it feels so much better ^A^) when all of a sudden I hear a splash not to far from where I was. I just shrugged it off and assumed that some other creature decided to go for a swim. I continued with an admittedly awkward doggy paddle, screeping happily. This was the perfect weather for a good swim! There was no possible way that today wouldn't be one of the best days ever!
This continued for a good half hour or so until I felt something bump against my feet. I turned around, just in time to registed a large hippo-ish maw opened nice and wide. "Screep!" I swam all the faster, my wings too wet for flight. I'd just have to make it to land and go from there.
With a sudden burst of energy and luck I somehow managed to put a good ten feet between me and the hippo...looking back on it maybe he was just playing a game with me. Maybe he was in control the entire time. Well, it hardly matters now, huh?
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Theres some more that's been done since I wrote that but I figure that's a good place to stop for a preview :3
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