I have this exetremely long fantasy story that I wrote up.
I completed it during my sophomore year of high school... and i'm still editing it but,
I want to share 2 chapters of my story online, so I can get feedback.

I'm only comfortable posting up only 2 chapters of the 14 chapters because I know that this story is going to become a actual book. But I need to find a literary agent before I go anywhere...

Anywho, I'm going to post the 2 chapters up some time tomorrow so be on the look out for it.

*I really need feedback for these 2 chapters.*

ty for reading this, even though i haven't made a lot of journals.