Bang Bang
18 years ago
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Well, I've been stumbling along with many numerous story ideas, and finally decided to ask for some advice and suggestions!
One: I have ADD, so my problem is my attention gets diverted and I am a little absentminded. I'll actually open up Internet explorer with the intent to look something up, and suddenly not remember what I was gonna look up, so I must backtrack to remember. This is why most of my writing is done first on paper. Now the problem is, I usually get distracted when I go to write it on the computer, sometimes by the internet or by instant messengers. Any advice?
Second: I have many story ideas in my head, and I could compile them all into a list maybe three pages long. My problem is, getting all this out on paper. Once again, any ideas?
Third: Characters, I have no problem coming up with them, in fact, I have an overabundence of them, and I'd like to put this ability to use to help some other furs, who seem like they could use a little help with this. How can I do that, help them make a character that's interesting and their own?
Fourth: This is the biggie! Umm..gimme a sec..lemme remember it. Ah, yes, now I remember. See, I told you about being absentminded, and this was why I'm doing this in the first place. Now, I have this story world in my head, and I want to pull elements of a variety of different cultures and aspects into this, even some sci-fi elements to form a very unique brand of monster hunters that take on very violent and dangerous mythical creatures. Sorta a unique version of Hellboy, but with furs.
The main character is a bat, a gunslinger named Ravnos Noctre, who with his cybernetic eyes and arms is the best damn shot alive, yet not much of a socializer due to not remembering his past. He just remembers bits and pieces and finds out he was a jester for the mideival area's king, a fox known as the Red Emperor. He was sent to kill the Red Emperor but turn his employers down, finding the fox to be a kind and caring man, thus his bosses used him as a test subject and he shot his way to freedom after awakening with an empty slate for a memory and his implants.
Next is the town's doctor, Dr. Charles Bailey Worth, a male reindeer who just can't seem to grow horns bigger than stubs. He's a very femme gay guy, and is sometimes mistaken for female, but he has a problem of his own. Due to a bad experience in the mountains, he's become possessed by a wendigo, which takes over his body whenever his life is threatened. He blacks out during these events only to wake up to carnage.
Third is a dragoness disgused as a lioness named Gwen Pennington. She was rudely awaken by miners digging through her mountain, and thanks to them, came to learn about dynamite. Unfortunately for everyone, she came to love the stuff, and thus became a bit of a miner herself.
Fourth is the ninja tanuki by the name of Ziyi Yen, who does not tell her story, she is more of a mystery than the others.
Fifth is Clara Vansing, a tough bovine monster hunter who travels solo. Her assistant is a very old vampire (another bat) by the name of Victor Von Killmyer, who has a shady past he's desperately trying to make up for, so he gives Clara whatever information she needs.
Sixth is the pirate captain Jack Crimson, who cloaks himself in blood red clothing and wears a mask of a skull and a black veil over the rest of his face during combat. His right hand is lost and has been replaced by a large hook shaped sword blade.
Seventh are the governmental type agents, Andrea Page and Bruce Marshall. Andrea, a hyena, hates zombies and arms herself accordingly since her whole town was wiped out by them and she was the only survivor. Bruce, a work in progress, has a cybernetic right forearm and wields a grenade launcher. He lost his forearm and hand when lycanthropes attacked his home and he fought them of, one of them biting onto his hand as he held a lit stick of home made dynamite.
Eighth is the insane Nigel Cronos, a hyena clad in a straight jacket and with bandages over his head. He was a failed experiment to try and make organic cybnetics, ones that can shift and mutate like Venom or Carnage's symbiotes. He bonded with his straight jacket and he's become nicknamed Straps because of how he attacks with the straps of his jacket that seem to even grow out of his body.
Ninth is an androgenous male ferret named Ace Royal. he's a card shark and a bounty hunter, and he's been paid to kill Ravnos. His weapons are metal playing cards and a pair of derringers hidden up his sleeves. He seems to be an equal match for the bat, even able to use his cards to defend against Ravnos's shots.
Now I've got thoughts for a naga like cobra, and maybe a sword expert (a female zebra perhaps?), and also strong male iguana named Gene who is rescued from being falsely imprisoned for about ten years, and he may or may not still have his shackles attached to his wrists or carry around a steel ball and chain as his weapon. If you can't tell, I like the comics, cartoons, movies or stories where there are characters with their own rather unique weapons that face the main characters.
One: I have ADD, so my problem is my attention gets diverted and I am a little absentminded. I'll actually open up Internet explorer with the intent to look something up, and suddenly not remember what I was gonna look up, so I must backtrack to remember. This is why most of my writing is done first on paper. Now the problem is, I usually get distracted when I go to write it on the computer, sometimes by the internet or by instant messengers. Any advice?
Second: I have many story ideas in my head, and I could compile them all into a list maybe three pages long. My problem is, getting all this out on paper. Once again, any ideas?
Third: Characters, I have no problem coming up with them, in fact, I have an overabundence of them, and I'd like to put this ability to use to help some other furs, who seem like they could use a little help with this. How can I do that, help them make a character that's interesting and their own?
Fourth: This is the biggie! Umm..gimme a sec..lemme remember it. Ah, yes, now I remember. See, I told you about being absentminded, and this was why I'm doing this in the first place. Now, I have this story world in my head, and I want to pull elements of a variety of different cultures and aspects into this, even some sci-fi elements to form a very unique brand of monster hunters that take on very violent and dangerous mythical creatures. Sorta a unique version of Hellboy, but with furs.
The main character is a bat, a gunslinger named Ravnos Noctre, who with his cybernetic eyes and arms is the best damn shot alive, yet not much of a socializer due to not remembering his past. He just remembers bits and pieces and finds out he was a jester for the mideival area's king, a fox known as the Red Emperor. He was sent to kill the Red Emperor but turn his employers down, finding the fox to be a kind and caring man, thus his bosses used him as a test subject and he shot his way to freedom after awakening with an empty slate for a memory and his implants.
Next is the town's doctor, Dr. Charles Bailey Worth, a male reindeer who just can't seem to grow horns bigger than stubs. He's a very femme gay guy, and is sometimes mistaken for female, but he has a problem of his own. Due to a bad experience in the mountains, he's become possessed by a wendigo, which takes over his body whenever his life is threatened. He blacks out during these events only to wake up to carnage.
Third is a dragoness disgused as a lioness named Gwen Pennington. She was rudely awaken by miners digging through her mountain, and thanks to them, came to learn about dynamite. Unfortunately for everyone, she came to love the stuff, and thus became a bit of a miner herself.
Fourth is the ninja tanuki by the name of Ziyi Yen, who does not tell her story, she is more of a mystery than the others.
Fifth is Clara Vansing, a tough bovine monster hunter who travels solo. Her assistant is a very old vampire (another bat) by the name of Victor Von Killmyer, who has a shady past he's desperately trying to make up for, so he gives Clara whatever information she needs.
Sixth is the pirate captain Jack Crimson, who cloaks himself in blood red clothing and wears a mask of a skull and a black veil over the rest of his face during combat. His right hand is lost and has been replaced by a large hook shaped sword blade.
Seventh are the governmental type agents, Andrea Page and Bruce Marshall. Andrea, a hyena, hates zombies and arms herself accordingly since her whole town was wiped out by them and she was the only survivor. Bruce, a work in progress, has a cybernetic right forearm and wields a grenade launcher. He lost his forearm and hand when lycanthropes attacked his home and he fought them of, one of them biting onto his hand as he held a lit stick of home made dynamite.
Eighth is the insane Nigel Cronos, a hyena clad in a straight jacket and with bandages over his head. He was a failed experiment to try and make organic cybnetics, ones that can shift and mutate like Venom or Carnage's symbiotes. He bonded with his straight jacket and he's become nicknamed Straps because of how he attacks with the straps of his jacket that seem to even grow out of his body.
Ninth is an androgenous male ferret named Ace Royal. he's a card shark and a bounty hunter, and he's been paid to kill Ravnos. His weapons are metal playing cards and a pair of derringers hidden up his sleeves. He seems to be an equal match for the bat, even able to use his cards to defend against Ravnos's shots.
Now I've got thoughts for a naga like cobra, and maybe a sword expert (a female zebra perhaps?), and also strong male iguana named Gene who is rescued from being falsely imprisoned for about ten years, and he may or may not still have his shackles attached to his wrists or carry around a steel ball and chain as his weapon. If you can't tell, I like the comics, cartoons, movies or stories where there are characters with their own rather unique weapons that face the main characters.
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