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Arrrgghhh!!! Brain Cramp!!!
15 years ago
Arrgghh!!! I can't think of anything for my characters!!!
I'm thinking of making a story but i cant seem to get my character personalities and background to work. I would really appreciate if someone can give me tips on how I can make my characters background more interesting .
Currently I have only have some background on my character Marzain.
P.S
Sorry if I'm making you read all this >.////.<
-At a early age of 8 Marzain code name "Marcus" was trained by his father whose name is Andy and is a military general and a master of martial arts, his mother Rebeca was teaching him how to wield weapons and how to move in a battle as well as escaping when needed .
-Marzain had to do all this training while attending school at the same time. When he would be at school everyone would be always picking on his because he was constant sleepy and drowsy look on his face everyday and the face that he was unwilling to fight back making him a easy target to pick on, but he didn't care because he knew that if he wanted to he could have beaten them to a bloody pulp and left them for dead but he decided that they weren't worth his time or the effort. None the less he had some people he didn't mind hanging out with but there was no one that he could call a friend mainly because he didn't try to get and know the people around him, and maybe it was for the best. His favorite spot on the school was under a maple tree that always had a faint sweet smell even though it was in the city it always smelt like fresh clean mountain air under that tree. He even took a sapling that came from the tree and placed it in his room and now it smelt always smelt like fresh sweet air in his room. His room is the one place that can cheer him up and ease the soreness of his muscles after the training with his parents.
-He trained with his parents until 11:00 pm he would always be tired at school and slept in class, however when it came to the day of tests the teachers would accuse him of cheating because he would always have 100% on his tests and they could never prove that he was even cheating.
-When the day ended he would go straight home ,eat and try to possibly get some sleep before his parents would barge in his room and drag him to train. It would be rare for him get a full nights sleep but that usually happens once or twice every month, when his parents were busy with their jobs. These moments were true bliss for him because it was one of the moments in life where he could just
-Because of the strict training he was put through he was always in top shape. (Having a hard time on how i can describe his physical appearance. His current age is 14 starting here)
So ya this is what I have so far and I'm stuck on what i should add.
Thanks for reading of this! It really means a lot to me that someone read this.
I'm thinking of making a story but i cant seem to get my character personalities and background to work. I would really appreciate if someone can give me tips on how I can make my characters background more interesting .
Currently I have only have some background on my character Marzain.
P.S
Sorry if I'm making you read all this >.////.<
-At a early age of 8 Marzain code name "Marcus" was trained by his father whose name is Andy and is a military general and a master of martial arts, his mother Rebeca was teaching him how to wield weapons and how to move in a battle as well as escaping when needed .
-Marzain had to do all this training while attending school at the same time. When he would be at school everyone would be always picking on his because he was constant sleepy and drowsy look on his face everyday and the face that he was unwilling to fight back making him a easy target to pick on, but he didn't care because he knew that if he wanted to he could have beaten them to a bloody pulp and left them for dead but he decided that they weren't worth his time or the effort. None the less he had some people he didn't mind hanging out with but there was no one that he could call a friend mainly because he didn't try to get and know the people around him, and maybe it was for the best. His favorite spot on the school was under a maple tree that always had a faint sweet smell even though it was in the city it always smelt like fresh clean mountain air under that tree. He even took a sapling that came from the tree and placed it in his room and now it smelt always smelt like fresh sweet air in his room. His room is the one place that can cheer him up and ease the soreness of his muscles after the training with his parents.
-He trained with his parents until 11:00 pm he would always be tired at school and slept in class, however when it came to the day of tests the teachers would accuse him of cheating because he would always have 100% on his tests and they could never prove that he was even cheating.
-When the day ended he would go straight home ,eat and try to possibly get some sleep before his parents would barge in his room and drag him to train. It would be rare for him get a full nights sleep but that usually happens once or twice every month, when his parents were busy with their jobs. These moments were true bliss for him because it was one of the moments in life where he could just
-Because of the strict training he was put through he was always in top shape. (Having a hard time on how i can describe his physical appearance. His current age is 14 starting here)
So ya this is what I have so far and I'm stuck on what i should add.
Thanks for reading of this! It really means a lot to me that someone read this.
