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Which characters would you like to see more of?
15 years ago
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SPOILER WARNING:
I'll be vague in this journal but comments by other readers may be full of spoilers so if you have not read all the chapters, beware!
I have a number of story lines and character arcs plotted out but deciding which ones to write and in what order is always a challenge. So I find myself curious as to who my readers would be most interested in seeing next.
Let me know who you are looking forward to seeing again. I put a sample list below but feel free to mention anyone that you were hoping to see more of.
Rickie and Leshyet
The gold and silver dragonesses and boy toys from chapter 31.
Brant and his situation.
Evana and her plant problem.
Zoriah and her three (two) stallion slaves.
Chakal and Tahet the drake.
Rahmor's harem girls.
An alternate ending to Chapter 37. :)
More unicorn slaves getting placed.
The front lines of the insect war.
Many others....
MOST LIKELY SPOILERS BELOW!
I'll be vague in this journal but comments by other readers may be full of spoilers so if you have not read all the chapters, beware!
I have a number of story lines and character arcs plotted out but deciding which ones to write and in what order is always a challenge. So I find myself curious as to who my readers would be most interested in seeing next.
Let me know who you are looking forward to seeing again. I put a sample list below but feel free to mention anyone that you were hoping to see more of.
Rickie and Leshyet
The gold and silver dragonesses and boy toys from chapter 31.
Brant and his situation.
Evana and her plant problem.
Zoriah and her three (two) stallion slaves.
Chakal and Tahet the drake.
Rahmor's harem girls.
An alternate ending to Chapter 37. :)
More unicorn slaves getting placed.
The front lines of the insect war.
Many others....
MOST LIKELY SPOILERS BELOW!
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herem girls
more uni slaves getting places
Chakal and Tahet the drake!!!!!!
More unicorn placement too.
3rd would be... who's most likely to get punished... probably Rickie.
The front lines of the insect war.
Chakal and Tahet the drake.
Those are the three I look forward to the most of your list, though as always I very much enjoy Dana and Tamira <3
Chaaaaaaak :D
Although I'd have no objections to the harem...
I also like the story you're setting up between Chakal and Tahet- there's a lot of potential there, especially if you're planning to expand on what you hinted at in Chakal's dream. The relationship between those two is fun to read ^^
And I'd be curious about the front lines of the war, if information about it/scenes from it can be fit in without it feeling like "and now for something completely different" with totally unfamiliar characters who no visible relation to the ones we already know (and that sort of thing).
Have to figure out why Rahmor wouldn't just nom nom nom on one of his own unicorns though.
In addition: it would be nice to meet more of the unicorns. I'd like to see some concentration on Sabeth, though some of the fates I've seen proposed for her seem too... final. She's an important character, and as such, she needs to be in a position where we can keep coming back to her and see how she's doing. It also needs to be something sufficiently awful... Surely that skunk deserves a promotion by now?
The harem: we only really know about two of the girls, and it'd be nice to get to know the others.
Rickie and Leshyet. An awesome couple. Seeing more of them is always welcome.
Nobody's yet mentioned Telly, the anti-Sabeth. She seems about ready now. As does the egg. I like Telly, she deserves nice things.
Characters I am sort of ambivalent about: Evana, Chakal, Zoriah, Brant. Wouldn't object to more, but wouldn't miss it either.
The only thing I actively don't want would be the alternate ending to chapter 37. The cost of losing was built up to be so awful that I'm not sure I could bring myself to read it...
These are my opinions, but bear in mind that if I was writing the series, it'd probably be a light farce about the Lilly-Tamira-Dana love triangle, woth Rahmor relegated to a side character. This is why you should take my suggestions with a pinch of salt.
Recalling in the earlier chapters, the venom of a snake that paralyzes the victim in varying degrees of time like a living statue depending on the dosage.
Freeze Sabeth as a statue for the eve, so she cant even react when she sees Brant gettin served up. lol
There are like, SO MANY I would be SO EXCITED for! x3 Uhm uhm! Uhm!
Okay for starters, I simply -ADORE- Rickie so I would definitely be interested in seeing what comes up with him, next. Hur hurrrr! Then uhm...
Brant's situation is definitely a plus. I'd be interesting in seeing how many levels more can this bully be pushed down!
Chakal is definitely a plus point, because it is so unique and... its just so interesting, hur hurrr!
An alternate ending to Chapter 37 would be nice, I guess, although it would be rather heart wincing D;
AND THE FRONTLINES IS DEFINITELY SOMETHING THAT I WOULD DIE FOR HUR HUR! The war is not entirely over and those FIENDS, they're still everywhere! I would be wondering how the battle will edge out... I mean sure, its very nice to know what's going on within Rahmor's lair, and all that naughty, naughty stuff inbetween, but the War is... on-going, right? I wonder what would the insects do... would the Slaves be used for battles... so much... hurr hurrr.
Of course, in all essence, it would be YOUR choice! x3 I am sure I'd like whatever you are coming up with, hur hur~!
Though seeing the gold and silver dragon with there boy toys again would be fun to.
I'd also like to see more of the insect wars stuff.
More about the general and the insect war, or maybe just seeing Rahmor at work instead of playing with his pets all the time
And speaking of Dana, there's something about her... About her lineage, hinted at with her poor unfortunate piebald sibling.
I wouldn't mind seeing more of the Insect war, as well as how the other furry governments interact with the Dragons. I personally think that the furries sort of made the Dragons the way they are, even if indirectly, but that's just me.
I may be weird, but I kind of pity Rickie. I wouldn't mind seeing him get some of the help he needs to sort of become whole. That's just the unicorn in me, though.
Also wouldn't mind more whipping/spanking...
This is something I've been rooting for for a while. Of course Tamira now has a more feasible love interest in Lilly, but she still cares a lot for Dana. Tamira has kicked a lot of arse recently (both in the arena and helping Rahmor expose the insect infiltration) so she surely deserves some kind of reward. No, Rahmor, not that kind of reward. Put it away! Lesbian, remember? :P
I may be weird, but I kind of pity Rickie. I wouldn't mind seeing him get some of the help he needs to sort of become whole. That's just the unicorn in me, though.
I'd like Rickie to be happy... really, I would. It's strange, because in his own way he's just as bad as Sabeth or Brant, if not worse, but... I like the guy. And Leshyet too. That pair have a really fascinating relationship.
Maybe you could have Zoriah dom Leshyet and Rickie rape Brant... Then have Zoriah purchase Brant!
Cruel, yes, but sweet.
I would like tp know what happens after the train ride and on it