tell me what you guys think, i wrote smething =w=
15 years ago
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This is my day, you are welcome to see and comment. also HI MOM!
Her last sight was the dark and gloomy sky, weeping over her final moments. The android “12” had completed her task, but could not keep her promise for she had fallen. her furry body, torn and ripped apart by the on sluaght of wave, after wave of soldiers. the battle scene took place before the fabled gate of legend. told that anyone who enters this forgotten land may become rich and powerful, with the chance at three wishes f your choosing. our team had gone forward, with there goal insight through the portal. 12 had promised them this “ do not worry aura, i will be ok, and we will play together again, i promise you” but, they left, “12” had let the tears flow, as she turned to face off against the advancing army that threatened her family. but... after the hours of fighting... here she was. face scrathed at, leg torn off and bleeding oil. this was her final place.... the promise kept raining in her ears as she cried for her first time.. knowing she would never see them again. never able to smile again, to feel the warm embrace of there love towards her. she will never be able to be loved by her only family ever again... “au-ura.... i-im sorry...” she reached out her right arm to the sky as it rained down upon her lifeless body. she cried and cried, letting out a last breathe...her core drive had stopped pumping.. she was gone..
Auothers nose~
this isent a death really, but a short topic of how i kill my characters. im just trying it out nd ignore the mispelld words becuae im typing on a fuckking mac.!!! NO RIGHT CLICK! WTF mack books. so please tell me what you guys think of this or how i can make it sound better.
when i was typeing this i had the song “heart of courage” by two steps from hell.
Auothers nose~
this isent a death really, but a short topic of how i kill my characters. im just trying it out nd ignore the mispelld words becuae im typing on a fuckking mac.!!! NO RIGHT CLICK! WTF mack books. so please tell me what you guys think of this or how i can make it sound better.
when i was typeing this i had the song “heart of courage” by two steps from hell.
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