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15 years ago
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God I'm not even done with all my research and already there is soooooooooo many changes I have made to these damn characters or have not even made a full change.
For Example:
Amancio & Carmen- I'm going to make Amancio super skinny and possibly take the OCD from Carmen and give it to Amancio. Instead of making Carmen OCD I want to make her a Racist of some kind who doesn't really have anything against Hybrids.
Kreios & Hoshiko- I'm going to make Hoshiko Straight instead of a "lesbian" it doesn't even make a difference seeing as how she's going to end up with a guy in the end anyway and I'm going to make Kreios Gay, from what I have for his Backstory it would be perfect for him and would create a whole lot more emotion for him from the readers.
Bravo- This guy needs a lot of work... He's going to be grungeir and with a possible scar over his face. Also, his background is going to be changed ALMOST 100% Because every person that read it didn't like him and didn't connect with him, which is not what I wanted.. I may even get rid of him entirely.
Selena- She's going to be a psychic who gets visions in her dreams, I may or may not take her gothic look away from her.. I don't know just seems pointless to me.
Baruti- Originally he was going to have to be persuaded to join and trust Amancio, I think I will have her personality be a bit more desperate to save his family and instead he persuades Amancio to trust HIM!
Demessie- I didn't really get around to writing him in the story yet, I was trying to find the perfect time to insert him into the story and by the time I found it, it was almost the end of the entire book. I may replace him because he just isn't working out..
I may put more info here, Anyone have any feedback :P
For Example:
Amancio & Carmen- I'm going to make Amancio super skinny and possibly take the OCD from Carmen and give it to Amancio. Instead of making Carmen OCD I want to make her a Racist of some kind who doesn't really have anything against Hybrids.
Kreios & Hoshiko- I'm going to make Hoshiko Straight instead of a "lesbian" it doesn't even make a difference seeing as how she's going to end up with a guy in the end anyway and I'm going to make Kreios Gay, from what I have for his Backstory it would be perfect for him and would create a whole lot more emotion for him from the readers.
Bravo- This guy needs a lot of work... He's going to be grungeir and with a possible scar over his face. Also, his background is going to be changed ALMOST 100% Because every person that read it didn't like him and didn't connect with him, which is not what I wanted.. I may even get rid of him entirely.
Selena- She's going to be a psychic who gets visions in her dreams, I may or may not take her gothic look away from her.. I don't know just seems pointless to me.
Baruti- Originally he was going to have to be persuaded to join and trust Amancio, I think I will have her personality be a bit more desperate to save his family and instead he persuades Amancio to trust HIM!
Demessie- I didn't really get around to writing him in the story yet, I was trying to find the perfect time to insert him into the story and by the time I found it, it was almost the end of the entire book. I may replace him because he just isn't working out..
I may put more info here, Anyone have any feedback :P
