RP thingy
15 years ago
General
Yep, as some of you know, I RP. However, I don't play furry characters, primarily because the community that I wander about in to seek out RP, the furry players there generally suck at writing and have usually stolen their character from an established artist. And all they wanna do is yiff. I'm more interested in a real story.
So! With that being said, I'm basing this meme on a VtM inspired character that I had to retire, named Dmitrii.
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[X] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[X] Their eyes are an unusual color (His eyes are sunken into their sockets, color has drained from them and the irises are black and dull)
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[X] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Sort of? Girls uses to drool over his picture, then went "eww, he's gross" when I actually played him, so I'm not sure)
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They ran away from home
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy (Sort of)
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship (He's married, thanks. :I)
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder
[X] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent(He's fairly wise, at least, and a good teacher)
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Dmitrii is unusual, I think)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[X] They cry blood(only because that's the only bodily fluid VtM vampires can produce, but Dmitrii doesn't cry. He's too much of a hard-ass. :x)
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[X] They are very lively/happy(In a maniacal "I'm gonna carve your body up and call it art" kind of way)
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of --
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them(VtM vampirism can be looked at as a curse or a gift.. he looks at as a gift though)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 19
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[X] They are addicted to drugs(Power and sadism is a drug, right?)
[X] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Points: 3
---
< 5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu - Well, he was meant to be. I adapted him into online RP from being an NPC in a tabletop game, in which he was meant to teach the PCs and make them rather uncomfortable at the same time. At least he isn't a hero. :/
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 < Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
So! With that being said, I'm basing this meme on a VtM inspired character that I had to retire, named Dmitrii.
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[X] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[X] Their eyes are an unusual color (His eyes are sunken into their sockets, color has drained from them and the irises are black and dull)
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[X] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Sort of? Girls uses to drool over his picture, then went "eww, he's gross" when I actually played him, so I'm not sure)
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They ran away from home
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy (Sort of)
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship (He's married, thanks. :I)
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder
[X] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent(He's fairly wise, at least, and a good teacher)
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Dmitrii is unusual, I think)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[X] They cry blood(only because that's the only bodily fluid VtM vampires can produce, but Dmitrii doesn't cry. He's too much of a hard-ass. :x)
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[X] They are very lively/happy(In a maniacal "I'm gonna carve your body up and call it art" kind of way)
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of --
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them(VtM vampirism can be looked at as a curse or a gift.. he looks at as a gift though)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 19
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[X] They are addicted to drugs(Power and sadism is a drug, right?)
[X] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Points: 3
---
< 5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu - Well, he was meant to be. I adapted him into online RP from being an NPC in a tabletop game, in which he was meant to teach the PCs and make them rather uncomfortable at the same time. At least he isn't a hero. :/
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 < Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
CGibby
~cgibby
I tried to do this but then realised that I had no boxes ticked whatsoever when I finished. :V
BarakLeSeul
~barakleseul
I are not alone...YES `<333 :V
Cyanide_tiger
~cyanidetiger
OP
Wha?
BarakLeSeul
~barakleseul
Having a score between 16-25
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