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I'd like feedback on my writing!
14 years ago
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Is it because Snow Day's just better porn than the others? Is it the stories? The content?
...Snow Day has 1000 views, I can't complain about that. But Jungle Book, I Love the Water, and Job Satisfaction at the Baker's Dozen have less than 500 views total. I'm just, like, curious... How do you guys feel about my written work? Specifically, the other stories BESIDES Snow Day. What would you say are their strongest points? Their weakest? What are your thoughts on the view-count discrepancy? Do you actually think Snow Day's the best of the bunch?
I guess I'd just like some feedback, because I DO want to write more. And there aren't many comments on any of them to let me know how I've been doing with what I have so far. X3
Robo-Dale Raves After Remembering He Has a Wife
...Snow Day has 1000 views, I can't complain about that. But Jungle Book, I Love the Water, and Job Satisfaction at the Baker's Dozen have less than 500 views total. I'm just, like, curious... How do you guys feel about my written work? Specifically, the other stories BESIDES Snow Day. What would you say are their strongest points? Their weakest? What are your thoughts on the view-count discrepancy? Do you actually think Snow Day's the best of the bunch?
I guess I'd just like some feedback, because I DO want to write more. And there aren't many comments on any of them to let me know how I've been doing with what I have so far. X3
Robo-Dale Raves After Remembering He Has a Wife
I try to refrain from giving feed back to people since I'm so brash about it
But... geez, I asked for criticism! Don't hold back! I really WOULD like to improve. :-P
Really?