Are there any writers out there who would be interested in going over a story of mine and giving it a few critiques?

I've been working on an erotic short story about a Kangaroo and I'd value some opinions on how it reads/sounds/feels.

Also, if anyone out there is well-versed in Australian slang (preferably someone from Austrailia) I could use a few common terms.

As far as the critique, keep in mind that it's an erotic story featuring bestiality, so if such topics are offensive to any of you, please don't volenteer and then complain about it to me.
It's also going to be unfinished for a while and is in a rough state. I'd like some critiques now while it's still easy to change things, and maybe some suggestions on how to finish out the rest of it.

I should also add that while I would appreciate all suggestions/comments the story is still my own and I reserve the right to accept, or refuse advice/requests.
I only say this because I had a reviewer once who thought that his idea for the story was better, and was offended when I didn't change it into what he wanted (sorry, but I'm not going to introduce a thinly-veiled copy of your own character at the last minute to save the day and shag the girl).

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