AS soon as I clear a few more commissions, I will be going back to my series. I went back and read through, and it definitely needs to be fixed. I think it kind of lost its way right about the time Ober found Matilda by the TV set. I'm going to pick it up there, and remove all the illustrations that followed that scene. Not a whole lot, mind, but enough to get the pace back on track. It just went off on a tangent right after that.

I had a really nice progression going up to that point, and Ober's diversion into thinking with his dick kind of ruined the story, in my opinion. So, we're going back to a more innocent storyline, the one I had originally envisioned, but somehow didn't get to write at the time. Trust me, it'll be a lot better. But if you want to save any of those pages, I suggest you do so NOW, because they are going to be removed pretty soon! I don't know if I'll put them in scraps or not- I'd like to just forget where this thing went…

Rest assured, though, there WILL be plenty of "joey baths" in Ober's future with Matilda! :P The comedic material is simply too abundant to ignore…