Well ... what shall I say :) I read the first parts of it and really liked it. As already mentioned in my comments, I really like the "slow" approach of developing a story and taking the time for dialogue and background. I am really looking forward to read more of it.

I found it interesting, though I expected a story about the factory and it seemed more to be about a breakout. I expect it'll pick up when they go back to the factory again. ^.^