Help me! I need a good series summary!
14 years ago
General
So the summary at the top of all my chapters reads thus...
A dragon raid into furry lands ravages several unicorn villages, taking hundreds of unicorns back as slaves. The story follow sixteen mares as they adjust to their new lives as slaves of Master Rahmor. One by one their fates will be sealed by the choices they make, and the whims of their dragon Master.
That may have been accurate for the first few chapters, but anyone who has read further in knows there is a lot more going on.
But any time I try and write a new paragraph to describe my series I end up with something a hundred pages long, or hate it and throw it away.
I want to make a cover page submission for my story... cover artwork and a description of the series. Any help in summarizing the story without spoilers would be appreciated.
How would YOU describe it to a potential reader?
A dragon raid into furry lands ravages several unicorn villages, taking hundreds of unicorns back as slaves. The story follow sixteen mares as they adjust to their new lives as slaves of Master Rahmor. One by one their fates will be sealed by the choices they make, and the whims of their dragon Master.
That may have been accurate for the first few chapters, but anyone who has read further in knows there is a lot more going on.
But any time I try and write a new paragraph to describe my series I end up with something a hundred pages long, or hate it and throw it away.
I want to make a cover page submission for my story... cover artwork and a description of the series. Any help in summarizing the story without spoilers would be appreciated.
How would YOU describe it to a potential reader?
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Tango
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Sorry, I've never been good with summaries...
Sixteen unicorn mares on the wall, sixteen unicorn mares; take one down, pass her around; fifteen unicorn mares on the wall.