I have now finished the first chapter of the story I set out to create. I really like how it turned out but it is really up to people to decide if it is good material or not. Hopefully a few people will be able to read it and leave comments about it in some way. I will right the next chapter in due time, no fixed date as of yet but I might write it in a month or so. Anyway have fun with the Sotry :D I will also upload some character biographies that flesh the characters out a bit more later in the week.