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On the Female Form
14 years ago
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I understand that FurAffinity is not the best place to offer some critique so I am going to try my luck with a journal. One of my interests is drawing BBW furry characters be it Anna or anyone else's character but I am rarely happy with the final results. Maybe I do not feel that they are attractive. I understand how I draw my large, curvaceous females isn't exactly true to the real thing but those are the joys of fantasy. Below are some links to various sketches I have doodled in the past.
Growing Surprise, This is the latest picture to come with BBW, as much as I am happy with the results I still feel I can do better with my pencil work.
Elevator sketch, the latest rendition of the cobra cow.
(Warning Nudity) Anna on a chair, one of the few coloured works of her was one of the closest to work.
If there is some critique on my pencil work then that'll be a bonus
You do not need to be good at art to offer criticism and feel free to be as honest about it as I will not be offended. All I ask is that should be constructive for me to work on. Feel free to link examples too, photo and drawn and perhaps others may use this to improve themselves. Thank you kindly
On other news I will be soon starting up a regular livestream, I am currently preparing to buy a new, better quality webcam and lighting so I can do some real sketches for the show.
I look forward to hearing what you have all to say.
Growing Surprise, This is the latest picture to come with BBW, as much as I am happy with the results I still feel I can do better with my pencil work.
Elevator sketch, the latest rendition of the cobra cow.
(Warning Nudity) Anna on a chair, one of the few coloured works of her was one of the closest to work.
If there is some critique on my pencil work then that'll be a bonus
You do not need to be good at art to offer criticism and feel free to be as honest about it as I will not be offended. All I ask is that should be constructive for me to work on. Feel free to link examples too, photo and drawn and perhaps others may use this to improve themselves. Thank you kindly
On other news I will be soon starting up a regular livestream, I am currently preparing to buy a new, better quality webcam and lighting so I can do some real sketches for the show.
I look forward to hearing what you have all to say.
Though, really, your doing quite a good job on all of this really. And its hard to critique mostly because I'm not very confadent with anatomy when there's an udder added in.
So, in short, Keep up the good work and keep practicing.
On the Elevator sketch the only thing I could say is that her hips/thighs are little too high up on her body, but other than that I don't see any problems. It trumps the chair picture of Anna and shows significant improvement.
But yeah overall it seems like the area you need to work on is the mid-section regarding the lower stomach and hips/thighs.
As far as the penciling goes your lining and shading is good but your work is lacking in texture - granted texture is extremely difficult to do and I'm afraid I don't have the experience to help you any further.
Hope this helps at all.
But that last one, minus the udder, is a pretty realistic shape.
Not a big fan of udders, but even that looks well done and placed well.