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Stranded: Where the Manna Falls
14 years ago
OMG!! I did it, I really did it! I completed "Stranded: Where the Manna Falls" at long last! It's been a long time coming - almost two years - but I'm so happy that I finaly got the fire lit up under me and enough steam to get the job done.
Honestly, I'm happy with the story. I resolved all the things that needed resolving and the flow of events is just as I imagined from the very start. The characters come around their arcs and meet suitable fates and the themes I wanted to convey through the story came through strongly I think. All of that, and with delicious fattness thrown in! =D
Stranded is 263 pages long so I think that qualifies it for "novella" size. Writing and completing a story that size is a new achievement for me as well.
I know it's not perfect. If anyone still has questions after reading the story (and please go back to the start and read again if it's been a while!), I'll be happy to answer them here or on the comments page of the story.
I am trying to bring something new to the Weight-Gain genre of writing. I want people to know that erotic fiction can be carried along by plot and characters and all of the elements that come together to make for a good story. I hope that Stranded is some proof that this is possible.
So... please enjoy my greatest work to date and don't be afraid to comment! =D
-Shalion
Honestly, I'm happy with the story. I resolved all the things that needed resolving and the flow of events is just as I imagined from the very start. The characters come around their arcs and meet suitable fates and the themes I wanted to convey through the story came through strongly I think. All of that, and with delicious fattness thrown in! =D
Stranded is 263 pages long so I think that qualifies it for "novella" size. Writing and completing a story that size is a new achievement for me as well.
I know it's not perfect. If anyone still has questions after reading the story (and please go back to the start and read again if it's been a while!), I'll be happy to answer them here or on the comments page of the story.
I am trying to bring something new to the Weight-Gain genre of writing. I want people to know that erotic fiction can be carried along by plot and characters and all of the elements that come together to make for a good story. I hope that Stranded is some proof that this is possible.
So... please enjoy my greatest work to date and don't be afraid to comment! =D
-Shalion
I will comment more when I finish it, though from what I can tell I like where this is going.
In the end, unless they found some way off the island. Coyote, the horses, that rhino, Setacean and her rescued pup, and all the other animals mentioned who were not killed by ants (as probably all of the cows were), were probably rounded up when the rescue ship came to collect the stranded lab animals.
Only Buttercup and the Tigress would have been able to elude recollection.
As for after that... I'd have to say that most of them would have to undergo rather extreme diets and rehabilitation before they could restart their prior careers as proper test animals XD.