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Sneak Peak
14 years ago
My weakness is that I care too much
And my scars remind me that the past is real
I tear my heart open just to feel So, I've gotten in the mood to want to write a story explaining how Nanju and Celeen not only meet, but how they fall in love. I got one of the chapters all made out, so I figure I would put in a tidbit in to not only pique everyone's curiosity, but to also get ideas on what should be included in the story. So with out further adieu, here's a small peak at the story.
Celeen grunted as the male yanked out the daggers, As she went to fall, she was caught by Nanju. Holding her gently. She tried to put on a brave face, but it was soon that she coughed up a bit of blood. Turning her head slightly toward him.
“Why..Why did ya do somet'ing so stupid?”
“..I don't know why.. I..just knew I had to. It's because..I..”
“Save it for latah, Chubbeh. I got a human to be killin'.”
He helped her to sit down in one of the chairs and turned his attention to the human. However, instead of pleading for his life, he was chuckling. It soon turned into laughter as he glanced over to his victim. Things were working out better than he thought. He had only meant to take out the troll, but with his apparent love interest interfering, it turned out a lot better. If he couldn't kill him himself, he would have to settle for the next best thing.
“I shouldn't be your concern, troll. I take great pride in using only the finest poisons on my weapnons. By the time you're done with me, your little girl over there will be nothing but a fleeting memory. So, which is it? Me, or her?”
He looked from the human to Celeen, who was resting her head on the table, and back to the human again. He could always go after him later. Right now. Celeen was his concern. He went over to check on her and noticed how she was sweating and breathing rather roughly. He glanced back to the human for a moment.
“Ya best be outta 'ere if ya know what's best fer ya.”
Turning his attention back to Celeen, he carefully picked her up into his arms, glancing down to her. No one has ever done anything like that for him before. He never understood why she cared for him like she did. Still, if she had let him handle things, she wouldn't be in this situation at all. Now, nothing can be done other than to give her a cure before she ends up dying.
“I t'ought you were a rather dumb t'ing.. Jumpin' in front of me like dat. Why would you?”
“Be..because.. I.. I love..you..”
Feel free to give constructive criticism on the little insert. I think i did quite well with it being 4:30am haha. regardless, I know there would be errors in it regardless what time I were to write all this xD. Anywho. Ideas and corrections would be appreciated. Thank you!
Celeen grunted as the male yanked out the daggers, As she went to fall, she was caught by Nanju. Holding her gently. She tried to put on a brave face, but it was soon that she coughed up a bit of blood. Turning her head slightly toward him.
“Why..Why did ya do somet'ing so stupid?”
“..I don't know why.. I..just knew I had to. It's because..I..”
“Save it for latah, Chubbeh. I got a human to be killin'.”
He helped her to sit down in one of the chairs and turned his attention to the human. However, instead of pleading for his life, he was chuckling. It soon turned into laughter as he glanced over to his victim. Things were working out better than he thought. He had only meant to take out the troll, but with his apparent love interest interfering, it turned out a lot better. If he couldn't kill him himself, he would have to settle for the next best thing.
“I shouldn't be your concern, troll. I take great pride in using only the finest poisons on my weapnons. By the time you're done with me, your little girl over there will be nothing but a fleeting memory. So, which is it? Me, or her?”
He looked from the human to Celeen, who was resting her head on the table, and back to the human again. He could always go after him later. Right now. Celeen was his concern. He went over to check on her and noticed how she was sweating and breathing rather roughly. He glanced back to the human for a moment.
“Ya best be outta 'ere if ya know what's best fer ya.”
Turning his attention back to Celeen, he carefully picked her up into his arms, glancing down to her. No one has ever done anything like that for him before. He never understood why she cared for him like she did. Still, if she had let him handle things, she wouldn't be in this situation at all. Now, nothing can be done other than to give her a cure before she ends up dying.
“I t'ought you were a rather dumb t'ing.. Jumpin' in front of me like dat. Why would you?”
“Be..because.. I.. I love..you..”
Feel free to give constructive criticism on the little insert. I think i did quite well with it being 4:30am haha. regardless, I know there would be errors in it regardless what time I were to write all this xD. Anywho. Ideas and corrections would be appreciated. Thank you!
